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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: annu08
both parts were nice
thank u😊
but try tomake it longer it more easy to get in to the story try to update soon
will surely try😊

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: rokajani
nice parts
thxx😊

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: salmalovesrk
nice name
thanks😊
keep it up
will surely😊

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#54

I am soooo sorry for the late update!as u all know I was busy for a few days!I am soo sorry!😭

Recap:
We tell you a bit about Kasturi and her brother Vicky.As Kasturi is going to go to sleep a paper plane comes and hits her face.

BACK TO THE STORY.

Part 3--Kasturi Cont'd

Kasturi smiles and says:Bani!Yeh kabhi nahin sudhregi!Aadhi raat koh chitti bejh thi hai😡.(Bani!This girl will never get her brains!She sent a letter at midnight😡)

Here is Bani's letter:

Oye Kasturi!Phitte moo ho tera!(Oye Kasturi! You idiot!)
Tu aaj mujhse milne nahi aayi!😡Gaddhi!(You didn't come to meet me today!😡You donkey!)
Jo bhi ho!(Whatever!)
Good luck,kal ke liye!(Good luck for tmr!)

Kasturi is laughing but angry at the same time! She grabs a piece of paper and a pen and writes her reply:

Oye Bani! Tu ek number ki uloo hai!(Oye Bani!You no.1 fool!)
Tu bhi toh mujhse milne aa sakthi thi!😡(Even you could come to meet me!😡)
Aabh yeh larna chor aur sohjah!(now stop fighting and go to sleep!)
Good night!

She makes a paper plane out of it and throws it from her balcony to the opposite house.(For Kasturi and Bani had a special way to communicate as there were no phones at that time.Since they lived opposite each other,they keep throwing letters to each other.)

The letter reaches Bani,but Bani madam is too sleepy to reply.*yawwn*

Kasturi too goes to sleep.

ok.so thats it for today.Plz plz teme if u liked it or not😊And,I am extremely sorry for the short part again!as this is the last part in the Kasturi chapter...I am so sorry😊

Edited by shanu333 - 16 years ago

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mimi0295

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Posted: 16 years ago

#55

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Ooh Shivz!! Thanks for the PM! Girl- dont become like me, and update late! lol

I know a lot of my readers are disappointed with me! But this sports day thing

is really boring me out now! ahah! Im almost done this part, and I think i'll post

2 new parts to make up for my lateness!

Anyways- back to the FF

1.Again, it was way too short! U promisedd!! Grrr... next time- there'd better be

a longer update!

2.Aweeee.. Bani!! Thats so cutee, for a second there I forgot it was in the 70's

lol! They right letters to each other? CHOOO CHWEET! That was extremely

clever! Geez, im getting anxious: WHAT's TOMORROW?! AAAGHH!

Is it a premiere of her movie or something?! Pleaseeee update soon!!

-- Miimz

Edited by mimi0295 - 16 years ago

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: mimi0295
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Ooh Shivz!! Thanks for the PM!
no need to say thanks miimz!😊
Girl- dont become like me, and update late! lol
lol.....U BETTER update fast or ELSE!

I know a lot of my readers are disappointed with me!
Dont worry!I am not😆
But this sports day thing

is really boring me out now! ahah! Im almost done this part, and I think i'll post

2 new parts to make up for my lateness!
yayye!2 parts!post it fast!plz!

Anyways- back to the FF

1.Again, it was way too short! U promisedd!! Grrr... next time- there'd better be

a longer update!
sorry!😭as this was the last part in the kasturi chapter....I cldnt do anything bout it!😭I promise nxt time it'll be longer😳

2.Aweeee.. Bani!! Thats so cutee,
thx😳
for a second there I forgot it was in the 70's
omg!shld i take this as a good comment or bad??

lol! They right letters to each other? CHOOO CHWEET! That was extremely

clever!
thanks😊
Geez, im getting anxious: WHAT's TOMORROW?! AAAGHH!

Is it a premiere of her movie or something?!
my lips r zipped!😛
Pleaseeee update soon!!
I promise u nxt update will be by tonite...if its not tonite u can fly down to HK and kick my but!😆(coz I have been planning to update once in two days😆as i update vry late!)

-- Miimz

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: samboora
great work
keep it up

thank u😊

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: kelly_sui
gud start
thx
but plz its too short make it large to grab our attention
I promise nxt part will be long😊
keep it up
thx😊