FF:Jaane Tu.....Yaa Jaane Naa [NOTE-Page 30] - Page 4

Originally posted by: noor k

hey shannu i loved the character sketch 👏👏
thank u...good 2 knw tht u liked it😊
update your ff soon i am waiting😃
okay😊

Originally posted by: missindia26

love the role reversal 😛 very interesting 😊 waiting 4 next part

Originally posted by: mimi0295

Shivzy!!
hii

I was searching through page 3- thats what is says on the update, Part 1 page 3! lol but it's actually on page 2...
lol...weird coz on my comp its on page 3...maybe some technicall prob😕

My thoughts after reading the part:

1. Thank you for translating the hindi! =D
ure welcomed cheetie😊

2.Aweeeeeeeeeeeeeee.... my Kas doesnt have a mother-sister figure in her life? Poor baby. : ( Well.. I hope my Robbie fills that void in her life.. I'm hoping hard!
wait and watch!!😆

3.JP seems like a really sweet dad! I really liked him and Kas's conversation! Jeez Shivs... whats with the suspense? Kaunsa bara din hai aaj? Tell meeeeeeeee!!!!
u'll get 2 knw that after 2-3 parts maybe😉

4.Part was too short... c'mon I NEED to read moreee!!!
there ws a lot more but my sis ws bugging the life out of me so i cldnt post it🤢(she's just so annoying!)🤢 Update FAST! And let me know when you do! Pleassseeeeeeeeee update fast!
as u say.😊

**Congrats on your first part to your first FF! Amazing job, it takes a lot of guts to post a FF on a public forum, trust me I know. **
thank u thank u😳...i was so scaredd on my first part but ure comments made my day..mwahh⭐️

-- Your Miimz

Originally posted by: muneefah

I CAN TOTALLY UNDERSTAND U KNOW AS I M WRITIN AN FF TOO,N WEN I POSTED MY FIRST PART I WAS LIKE GOD!!!!!!IS NE1 GONNA LIKE IT OR NOT BUH MASALLAH I GOT WONDERFUL REMARKS N INSHALLAH DA SAME IS GONNA HAPPEN WID U SO TAKE A CHILL PILL

LOLZ👏

Originally posted by: sarareimoo1

oye HOYEE!!

shivzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!
hey sara!

kasturi beti tou bahut sehmi (quiet) and chup chap nazar ati haiN!!!...kewLL!!...i was thinking that she would be very proud and stuff but nooooo shes a Veryyyy kewlLLl superstar!!! lOL!!...
at first i thot of making her character proud but then i thot it wont suit her so i made her quite normal not star type😊 and m so happy 2 knw tht u like her😳

and and and whats about this suspense yaar!!!...aur yeh bara dinn kya hainn!!
i am making a wild guess it would be like a big shoot or somethiing!!!...
lol..my lips r zippped very tightly chahte hue bhi mai nahin bata sakhti😆😆
sorry for guessing but my mind just wanted to say iT! LOL!!...
its completely alrite

aur please shixxx jaldi robbie ki entry karna!!!!! and update bhi jaldi karna!!
ok ok😊
and p.s. thanxxx for giving subtitiles!! this shows ur hardwork babYYY!!!!!!!...it reminds me more like i am watching a movie!!!!!!
m so happy u cant imagine!!u relli made my day😛

BubYEE and take kare!!
byeee😊

sara!