FF:Jaane Tu.....Yaa Jaane Naa [NOTE-Page 30] - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Shivz!!
I LOVED the character sketch!
Ahww.. Kasturi a SUPERSTAR! WOW! And Devika-JP together... hmm sounds interesting!
Ganga... I have a feeling I'm not going to like her, Alka, Raunak... or Anita! Blagh!
But my Robbieeee... oh WOW! I'm in love with him already! He sounds so sweet... Poor baby.. his stupid dad doesnt love him?! What a loser. But him mom loves him, and I hope you give a lot of importance to this Shivz, because all parent-child moments touch my heart!
Oooh lala Armaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan!! Armaan and Robbie *dream land
3 of the 5 guys I'm in love with are in this FF... Raunak, Armaan, and Robbie! AAGH! lol I can't wait to read more!
Update FASTER then fast!
- Mimi
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
Oh its very nice sounds intersting , sounds compeltely different plot
about the entertainment world just tell me how u r going to update daily or weekly iwill wait accordingly
update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: muneefah

hey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!characters r soooooooooooo cool
glad tht u liked itt😃

i mean kasturi a star of 70's...hmmmmmmm.i can imagine...n robbie sabharwal secretly in luv wid kasturi...lolz......n raunak is evil.gosh!!!!!good 4 raunak-i always like him evil coz he came between our RoKa....
lol...even i like him evil😉
n u hav described da characters v.v.v.v.vv. well
thanxx😃
n ill wait 4 ur ff impatiently
ps=thanks 4 sendin me a pm wen eva u update ur ff
ure welcomed sweetheart😊

Edited by shanu333 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: mimi0295

Shivz!!

I LOVED the character sketch!
so glad u luved itt😊
Ahww.. Kasturi a SUPERSTAR! WOW! And Devika-JP together... hmm sounds interesting!
Ganga... I have a feeling I'm not going to like her, Alka, Raunak... or Anita! Blagh!
lol..i think .nobody likes them....even i dont altough theyre my own characters😆
But my Robbieeee... oh WOW! I'm in love with him already! He sounds so sweet... Poor baby.. his stupid dad doesnt love him?! What a loser. But him mom loves him, and I hope you give a lot of importance to this Shivz, because all parent-child moments touch my heart!
same here😳
Oooh lala Armaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan!! Armaan and Robbie *dream land
3 of the 5 guys I'm in love with are in this FF... Raunak, Armaan, and Robbie!
even i luvv them...theyre just mind-blowing😉
AAGH! lol I can't wait to read more!
and i cant w8 2 write more😛
Update FASTER then fast!
as u say chweetie😊
- Mimi

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: annu08

Oh its very nice sounds intersting , sounds compeltely different plot about the entertainment world
hey annu ,nice 2 knw u liked it😊

just tell me how u r going to update daily or weekly iwill wait accordingly
most probably weekly😊....
update soon
okiiee😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow...one more FF.that is fantastic.characters sketch was very welldone...it gives an impression that surely it is going to be a excellent work...ok...puru has a secret in his heart...lol u r not less than ekta...cuz u gave a dhamaakay daar start...👏👏👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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sound very exciting..........really looking forward to reading it....😃

Kasturi & Raunak are superstars....😛........i hope they don't end up together.Robbie sounds sweet.........already in love with Kasturi....😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: robbii

wow...one more FF.that is fantastic.characters sketch was very welldone..
thanks 😊😊.it gives an impression that surely it is going to be a excellent work...
awww that's so sweet of u😛ok...puru has a secret in his heart...lol u r not less than ekta...
lol...i'm another ekta??..lol..proud 2 be one😆....but i swearr i will not be as evil as her 2 seperate our roka😆
cuz u gave a dhamaakay daar start...👏👏👏

thank u thank u(bowing down)😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: swan20

sound very exciting..........really looking forward to reading it....😃

glad 2 knw u like it😛😛

Kasturi & Raunak are superstars....😛........i hope they don't end up together.

dnt worry they wont😊

Robbie sounds sweet.........already in love with Kasturi....😳

choo chweet😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey friends,
sorry 4 da late update..and here is part 1.

Part 1--Kasturi.(part 1)

Kasturi Chawla-a superstar.She is a cute,loving,sweet girl.She could do anything for her loved ones.Since childhood,she got everything she wanted,but she never got what she needed.

What she needed was love,although her father and brother loved her very much.She wanted her sister's and mother's love.She never knew what mother's love was.

Whenever Kasturi was alone she always cried.She hated her life.

KNOCK! KNOCK!

Kasturi wakes up from her thoughts and says:Kaun hai?(who is it)

JP:Beta main hoon.(its me!)

Kasturi: aiye (come in)

JP:(Seeing Kasturi's dull face) Tu roh rahi thi??(were u crying??)

Kasturi:Nahin toh! (not at all!)

No matter how much Kasturi lied,JP could always read his daughter's face.Anyways,he decided to change the topic.

JP:Kasturi beta,kal tumhare liye ek bohot bara dinn hai.(tommorow's a very big day for u)

Kasturi:haan issi baat ka toh darr hai.!(that is what i'm scared about!)

JP:Tum hamesha kyun darr jaati ho??(why do u always get scared??)

Kasturi:Pata nahin.(i dunno)

JP:Raat bohot ho chuki hai.tum so jao.(its quite late,go to sleep.)

Kasturi:teekh hai.Good nite.

Kasturi:good nite.

thats it for now.hope u all like it😊.....actually this part is very long,so i,m dividing it into sections.😊
next part later today.






Edited by shanu333 - 17 years ago

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