|Deception|- PreRish SS (Part 4 PG 13)(Updated 11OCT) - Page 3

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Oh the comparison of both the men in same situations will definately make her reliaze the best of two, lovely story

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hey, I love the theme. A possible EMA, an emotional infidelity at the least. Can you PM me next time?

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Posted: 5 years ago
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The teaser of this story suddenly occupied my mind today and I thought of inquiring when you're posting the first part. And that's when I saw the update.

I love this premise of Mr Bajaj being the other man and Prerna feeling strangely drawn towards him despite being married to A. Her deep attraction towards her ex husband and the moral conflicts were expressed really well. And I love this dark and enigmatic RB.

Please update it soon.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice one.

Do cont asap

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice start...

Different take on story...

Continue soon....

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Posted: 5 years ago
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What a start! 👏 post divorce story, interesting! Prerna yearning for him. i'm sure she'll be loyal to rishabh despite being married to anurag. I really love RB's aura, Grey, mysterious and hauntingly dangerous! 😳

Update soon! 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This is a quite interesting update. Though she is Mrs. Basu, she can not stop thinking about Bajaj and all the things which are related to him. Even staying with the so-called love of her life, she couldn't let go of her past. Wondering, how Anurag didn't understand this, or is he just pretending that he didn't notice this.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: vena.cava.

Ouuu, color me intrigued. I'm very excited to see how the roles are changed now that legally Rishabh will be the other man, but I have a feeling that in her heart he's the one she'll reluctantly be loyal too. I have very idea of where this could possibly go, but I love that Bajaj in your story is already off the bat grey. He's loathsome, dark, mysterious and all of it works SO well for me Definitely following this story and I've put it under my watch list! Happy writing friend!

Honored to know that my plot caught your fancy.😃A big fan of your work!

i just wanted to write about how preferences can switch over time, people can come to regret their steps. And sometimes the harder u try to get out, the deeper you get. It's just that crazy!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Amazing work of fiction. Please continue soon.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: oa2019

very interesting start, can't wait to read the rest.

Glad to know u find it interesting!

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