|Deception|- PreRish SS (Part 4 PG 13)(Updated 11OCT) - Page 4

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Posted: 5 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: mallug007

I’m loving this! Mr. B as the other man, the object of her fixation. Wow! 😍

😃rish is the forbidden fruit!

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Posted: 5 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: aryapdane

You have me by the throat. This is the exact premise that has my heart. Pre falling for RB when she has Anurag! Perfect.

Lets just say, pyaar aadat hai. That's my take on love😃

Also, your diction. Wow. I love how beautifully crafted this is. Give me chocolates, this story and leave me in peace. That's all I pray for now.

These words coming from you humble me😃

Please please please update soon.

Coming soon!

~Aparna.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Deepshikha20

Very nice start... keep it up👍🏼

THanks!😃

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Posted: 5 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: katheriene

Very different & interesting story👏

Waiting for next

I hope that incoming parts will continue to keep you intrigued😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: lovefk

POST DIVORCE YAHHHOOOOOOOOOOO😎

*chuckling*😆

😎 This means we get Prerna yearning for him wipppppppppeeeeeee! Cant wait to read more, I can't deal though Anurag is quite whack in the head to have brought her to the very same hotel for their honeymoon🤣

True that! Dear seedha aunu will be speaking with us on this whacko topic too😆

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Posted: 5 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: mitras

Oh the comparison of both the men in same situations will definately make her reliaze the best of two, lovely story

Lets just say ki comparison ki space bhi nhi hai yahan😃

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Posted: 5 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: najma123

Hey, I love the theme. A possible EMA, an emotional infidelity at the least.

I'll keep tightlipped about that 🥱

Can you PM me next time?

I'll do, Najma😃

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Posted: 5 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

The teaser of this story suddenly occupied my mind today and I thought of inquiring when you're posting the first part. And that's when I saw the update.

So happy to know that i was able to create that thrill factor😃

I love this premise of Mr Bajaj being the other man and Prerna feeling strangely drawn towards him despite being married to A. Her deep attraction towards her ex husband and the moral conflicts were expressed really well. And I love this dark and enigmatic RB.

I'll be honest, rishabh is twisted here and so will be prerna. The kind of dark that likes of me fawnover😆

Please update it soon.

Asap!

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Posted: 5 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Gudiyalovesguru

Nice start...

Different take on story...

Continue soon....

Glad to know you find it worth your time😃

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Posted: 5 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Yush001

What a start! 👏 post divorce story, interesting!

More like post marriage storyy😈

Prerna yearning for him. i'm sure she'll be loyal to rishabh despite being married to anurag.

Hmm...i don't know bout loyalty. The title is rather fishy, i believe😆

I really love RB's aura, Grey, mysterious and hauntingly dangerous! 😳

I love him too

Update soon! 🤗

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