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Posted: 5 years ago
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Ch 2.

The doctor called Rishabh and Veena in his cabin to discuss about her health. An unknown fear grasped in their heart about what will the doctor tell them.

"Meri biwi kaisi hai,Doctor? Is she alright? Kab tak uthegi woh?" Rishabh asked with a tired yet worried face.

"Mrs. Bajaj ji condition abhi bhi critical hai.. Unpe koi bhi dawaai asar nahi kar rahi hai... Maano,jeene ki ummeed hi chhor di ho.. Ab toh aap sab ki dua aur pyaar hi bacha sakti hai Mrs. Bajaj ko."

Drops of tear fell from their eyes' as they heard about Prerna's current condition. It was never meant to be like this. It broke Rishabh's heart more.

Just then,a news came that Mohini Basu has been arrested and is in jail. Rishabh couldnt control his anger as he fisted his fingers tightly.

For a moment,he closed his eyes to gain some strength. He opened them again and requested Anupam and Nivedita to keep Kukki with them for the time being as he can only trust them with his daughter. They nodded in yes while Rishabh went to the Police Station with Veena.

Police Commissioner entered alongside Rishabh and Veena. He took them to the cell where Mohini Basu was captured. She kept wriggling under the tight hold of handcuffs while saying that she will complain to the higher ups and her Anurag will save her.

Veena comes face to face with Mohini Basu who has been arrested by the Police. She comes near her and slaps her hard. Veena falls down in shock while Rishabh comes and holds her.

"Meri biwi maut se lar rahi hai.. Uspe ungli daal ke apne bohut bari galti kardi hai.. Aapka main kya hashra karunga yeh aap soch bhi nahi sakti.. Agar main Prerna keliye uska Shiv bansakta hu,toh main aap pe Kaal Bhairav banke keher giraunga..." Rishabh warned Mohini as he was seething in anger.

Seeing them in such a way, Mohini blurted out the truth and was taken into custody as the much needed proofs were gathered.

Rishabh thanked the Police Commissioner for their role and efforts to catch the criminal. Later, they went to the hospital.

After a few moments, Rishabh and Veena sat infront of the ICU where Prerna was kept. Anupam and Nivedita took Kukki to Basu Bafi as she fell asleep due to tiredness.

Veena was extremely proud of Rishabh. His words and actions proved that he was worthy of being her daughter's husband from every angle. She went near him and kept her comforting hand on his head.

"Thora aaram karlo beta."

"Nahi Maa... Jab tak Prerna thik nahi hojati,tab tak nahi." He replied in tired voice.

Veena brought a plate of food near him and started to make him eat.

"Hum ek baat bhi nahi sunenge.. Maa bolte ho humein aur Maa ki nahi manoge,toh main gussa karungi. Chalo,thora sa khalo.." Veena said with a smile and made him eat.

Rishabh was really happy to be taken care of. Like a mother cares for her son. He bent down and kept his head on Veena's lap,as she stroked her warm and loving hand over his head.

"Aap gussa nahi hai mujhse,Maa?"

"Main apne bete se kyun gussa hongi?"

"Maine Prerna se itna bura bartav kiya aur usi wajah se Prerna ka accident?" Rishabh replied with sadness laced in his voice.

"Isme aapki galti nahi hai beta.. Vishwas ek aisa dhaaga hai jo zyada khichne se toot jati hai. Aapke saath aapki pehli patni ne jo kiya,woh bohut galat thha. Aapki jagah koi aur hota toh ab tak sambhal nahi pata khudko. Par,aapne khudko kabil banaya aur iss mukaam pe hai,aapki mehnat ki wajah se. Priyu ne bhi Anurag pe vishwas kiya par usne bhi uska vishwas torha. Woh aapse bohut pyaar karti hai,aur aap bhi toh karte hai Priyu se pyaar.. Bus thora samay dijiye,sab thik hojayega.. Mata Rani aap dono ke rishte ko lambi umar pradaan kare..."

Veena's words worked like magic. He was relieved of the guilt to an extent.


Veena insisted Rishabh to go home and take some rest while she will be here. Rishabh didnt want to leave but one take of reassurance from his mother-in-law made him smile a little and went home.

As he reached home,he took a cold shower which calmed his nerves down. He came out from the shower and had dinner,since he also needs to stay healthy to take care of his wife and also to apologise for his deeds.

He took out the letter which was with him since that fateful accident.

Tears pooled his eyes as he carefully opened the letter. Her handwriting is so clean and pretty,he observed. Then he started to read the letter.

"Mr. Bajaj,

Jab tak aapko yeh letter milega, mujhe pata nahi hoga ki main rahoongi ya nahi. Main kabhi bhi aapko hurt nahi karna chahti thi par shayad halat uss waqt kuch aise thhe ki jaane anjane mein aap hurt huye thhe mujhse. Main aapko sacchayi batane wali thhi ki aapne uska galat matlab nikal dia.. Mujhe laga ki aap mera vishwas karoge aur dil nahi toroge,kyunki main aapse be intehaan pyaar kar baithi thi... Par aapne mera vishwas aur dil dono hi torh dia. Haan,maine hi aapse mujhe na chhune ki baat ki thhi.. Uss waqt main sahi tareeke se sochne ke shakti mein nahi thi.. Aapko bohut bukhaar hua thha uss din. Medicines bhi kaam nahi kar rahi thi,isiliye mujhe woh karna parha... Body to body warmth dena parha aapko.. Usdin pehli baar aapki dhadkan ko mehsoos kiya maine kareeb se.. Tabhi promise kiya khudse ki aapko main apne se kabhi dur jaane nahi dungi par agle hi din aapne uska galat matlab nikal liya aur khud hi mujhe dur kardia... Main toh aapki har uss dard ka dawa banna chahti thi par aapne hi mujhe hurt kardia.. Mujhe meri aukaad dikha diya aapne ki main sirf Kukki ki Maa hu,aapki biwi nahi. Maine kabhi aapko galat iraado se chhua nahi hai Rishabh.
I hope aap mujhe maaf kardenge.

Kukki Ki Maa."

For the first time in his life,he felt so guilty,which broke him into pieces. He clutched the letter near his heart and repeatedly said sorry to Prerna for his mistake.

"Prernaaaaa....." He cried loudly...

"Dil roye aye elahi,tu aaja mere maahi.."

Precap: Prerna wakes up.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#22

Beautiful update 👏

Loved the emotions displayed by Veena & Rishabh😭

Prerna's letter was heart wrenching 😭

Waiting for next

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Oh such a heartbreaking update. But mohini deserved it. Bajaj and veena relationship is good and lovely
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Heartbreaking update.

Good that Mohini is in jail and she can't escape as they have the enough evidences against her.

Felt so bad for Bajaj, he is in pain and guilt. The letter cleared what happened in the past which led them to this situation.

Loved these words,

"Agar main Prerna keliye uska Shiv bansakta hu,toh main aap pe Kaal Bhairav banke keher giraunga..."

Looking forward to know how would Prerna react after waking up.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#25

Amazing & Beautiful story.....Very Emotional...😭LOVED IT...❤️

Prerna letter to Bajaj.....😔Loved Veena - Bajaj bond.....❤️

Bajaj is in guilt and pain....😒Pls update soon dear...🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#26

UPDATE the NEXT part !!!!! Can't wait

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Chapt 2

Rishabh was Jay fabulous in dealing with Mohini. People seriously don't know when to stop messing with others. Jab ek auart husband kr liye savitri aur Durga ban sakti hai then even a husband can turn into Kal Bhairav and enemy ke kaal ban sakta hai.

This was really powerful.

Rishabh as a husband was worried for his wife is emotional but also.practical as he knows he needs to be healthy and strong for her.

The letter I want him to repent.and see how he warns forgiveness.

Waiting for the next part.

Edited by Chahat_A_Doshi - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#28

Chapt 1

Never act before thinking twice. Prerna wanted to confess her feelings but he said only kuki's mom not.my wife.

Ye no touch policy saare fasad ki jad hai. First Prerna used it now Rishabh is reminding her of it.

Jo dil mein hota hai Wohi dil tod sakta hai aur use dard bhi ho sakta hai.

So Prerna felt hurt and left saying will never show you my face will die but won't let you know Rishabh realized he was harsh then why not try to contact her first. When the call came tabbi bhi Kuki aapko...

Mohini 😡 Rishabh isko chodega nahi.

Thanks for this great job.

Edited by Chahat_A_Doshi - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awesome

Please update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Ch3.

Rishabh gets ready to go to the hospital. He walks past the dressing table where he notices a photo frame of Prerna and Kukki hugging each other with a pretty smile etched on their smile. He picks it up and carresses it with his thumb. A lone tear falls on it.

"Aapki yeh hasi main wapas laakar rahunga aur khudse dur nahi jaane dunga." He promised to himself and went away,keeping the photo frame safely.

He reached the hospital where he was welcomed by Veena,Shivani,Anupam and Nivedita. Rishabh enquired about Kukki to which Nivedita said she is inside.

Rishabh peeped through the glass of the ICU door where he saw Kukki holding Prerna's hand and lying down like a little baby. She tried to speak but failed. Tears fell from that angel's eyes.

Rishabh couldnt see his daughter and wife in this state. He slumped down and started crying. What would he do without them? If Kukki was his heart,Prerna has become his heartbeat. He fell in love with Prerna.

Everyone present there felt sad seeing Rishabh in that state. All prayed to Maa Durga for some miracle to happen.

ICU:

With lot of effort, Kukki spoke,

"Mmm...aaaa"...

Immediately,the vital signs of Prerna started to beep loudly. Mehra was shocked to see this incident. They waited their whole life to watch their Kukki talk. He let those tears flow and thanked Maa Durga for this miracle.

"Rishabh... Prerna uth rahi hai... Aur..." Mehra told in excitement.

Everyone went near Mehra and threw a bag of questions at him.

"Aur kya Mehra? Saf saf batao?"

"Humari Kukki ne apna pehla word bola.. Maa..." Mehra replied with happy tears.

Veena,Anupam and Nivedita thanked Maa Durga and congratulated Rishabh for the victory.

It was a war for him. To save his wife from the clutches of death. And he won the war.

Rishabh ran inside the ICU to check on his wife and daughter. By then,her vital signs became normal and was sleeping due to medicine effect.

"Meri biwi kaisi hai Doctor?" Rishabh asked with worried tone.

"Mrs. Bajaj is perfectly fine now. Vitals bhi normal hogaye hai. It was a miracle for everyone. Jaise Maa Durga ne aap sabki aur khaas kar aapki beti ki pukar sunli.. Do ek din mein discharge kardenge... Congratulations once again and take care."

Rishabh immediately went near Prerna and held her hand. He placed a sloppy kiss on her palm and wished her to get well soon..

Veena also went towards her Priyu and asked for forgiveness as she held her hand.

Anupam and Nivedita hugged Kukki and congratulated her. Kukki clapped with a smile and enjoyed the moment.

After some hours:

Prerna wakes up with a headache. The nurse notes her vitals.

In a slow voice,Prerna asked for her daughter. The nurse nodded and went out to bring Kukki.

Except Rishabh and Veena,Anupam took Nivedita and Kukki inside. Kukki hugged her Prerna mumma tightly. Prerna cried tears of joy feeling her daughter in her arms.

"Nivi di,aap?" Prerna asked.

"I am sorry Prerna for whatever you had to suffer because of our family. Maa ne tumhara accident karwaya thha... Woh abhi jail mein hai.. Main khush hu ki unko unke gunaho ki saza mil rahi hai.." Nivi replied with a remorse.

"Aap please aise maafi mat mangiye.. Aap meri bari behen ho. Accha nahi lagta aise.. Aur Anupam ji,aap kaise ho?? And congratulations.. Aap Papa banne wale ho..." Prerna replied with a smile.

"Thank you,Prerna. Tum jaldi se thik hojao... baad mein tumhe apni behen ke nakhre bhi uthane honge... Main toh bas chill karunga.." Anupam replied in return getting smacked from Nivedita.

Prerna smiled looking at them and started crying. Rishabh and Veena looked at her condition. It was because of them.. And they promised to keep her happy and remove her pain.

''Mat ro Prerna.. Abhi aaram karo.. Main Mr. Bajaj aur Veena aunty ko bhejta hu.." Anupam replied.

With the mention of Mr. Bajaj,she remembered their encounter of words and rude behaviour from him.

"Nahi... Koi unhe nahi bulayega yaha.. Please.." Prerna replied suddenly.

"Kyun?? Kuch hua hai tumdono ke beech?" Nivi asked sensing something wrong.

"Woh.. Nahi.. mera matlab... Mujhe abhi rest karna hai aur woh dono bhi toh tired honge,right?" Prerna lied for Kukki although she could feel that Nivedita has caught her lie.

"Thik hai.. Abhi rest karo.. Hum baad mein aayenge." Anuoam said and left the room with Nivi and Kukki.

Prerna couldn't control her tears as they slipped from her eyes. She couldn't bear the pain of Rishabh's rude behaviour and it hurt her really bad. She was ready not to forgive Rishabh and Veena so easily.

Precap: Prerna at Bajaj Mansion.

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