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Posted: 17 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Manoj&Tina#1fan

hey update soon loved it it was awesome! r u gonna bring Mukti back? cause she deserves to be back!please! ne ways loved t! update asap!



i said so be4 hand in the update: its Mukti who is gonna be talking 4rm the letter, she is not coming back AT ALL!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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you are too good its great 😉

keep up the good work. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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please continue soon, im waiting impaitently, i really want to know what happens next!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plz keep up the good work i just want that mayby mukti has a look alike and she n prem fall in love plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzz do for me and mayby someonther people want that to so plzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: binal54

plz keep up the good work i just want that mayby mukti has a look alike and she n prem fall in love plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzz do for me and mayby someonther people want that to so plzzzzzzzzz

we cant even think of anybody else but mukti with prem....plz....i would let prem stay alone with his children rest of his life than with another girl...who cares if her face is like mukti...she is not mukti...and after all prem is all changed now and pretty sure that once he finds out his kids are gonna be every thing for him...he dont need any other girl...

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Posted: 17 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Patel 1993



i said so be4 hand in the update: its Mukti who is gonna be talking 4rm the letter, she is not coming back AT ALL!

chill out!😆 dont get angry we understand😆😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: pm rocks

we cant even think of anybody else but mukti with prem....plz....i would let prem stay alone with his children rest of his life than with another girl...who cares if her face is like mukti...she is not mukti...and after all prem is all changed now and pretty sure that once he finds out his kids are gonna be every thing for him...he dont need any other girl...



there isn't gonna be any other girl in Prem's life, he loves only Mukti and for him to live with his kids well....................lets just wait and see what happens after the letter
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey wonderful FF....so gud tht i cant tell!
great story line.....i must say ur damn good writer!
plz cont. soon!!

Love,
PoocHii.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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RECAP: P2 & Krish's b-day, have a party and the final of Mukti's letters starts:

Mere pyaare bacho. Happy 16th b-day! I know that u have become very big and understanding, that's y what i am gonna tell, u will understand very well. This time, i shall be telling u how u came in2 this world, who ur family is and MOST importantly, who you FATHER is.

Tumhare papa ka naam hain PREM PRENA SHARMA, aur uske mom dad ka naam hain Prena Bajaj aur Anurag Basu. I know that tum dono soch rahe hoon ke tumhare dadi ke naam Prena Bajaj kyun hain. Woh isilye kyunki uska pati ke naam hain Mr Rishab Bajaj - tumhare sotela dadu.

Ghuzrewala kal (in the past) tumhare dada aur dadi ke shaadi howi thi aur uske ke paas aya tha ek beta jiske naam Prem raka tha. Kuch he saal keliye woh theeno (them 3) khush he rahethe par ek toofan aya tha aur isi toofan mein Prem margaya tha. Tere dadi bilkul tootgaye apne Prem ko koor kar aur ilzam apne dadu par kaye thi (put the blame on ur dadu) balke tere dadu bhi tootgaya tha aur Prem ke moth (death) ko apne dadi Prena par ilzam lagaya! Phir kuch he deer ke bath, un dono ke talaq howi thi par tere dadi pregnant thi tum dono ke bua SNEHA ke saath. Tere Anurag dadu lagta tha ke Sneha unki bacha nahin thi balki tere sotela dadu Rishab Bajaj ke bache thi. Tere dadi is baath ko pardash nahin karsakti isiliye Sneha ko lekar woh Panchmeshwar chaligaye.

Aath (8) saal ke baad tere dadi, Sneha ke saath wapas Mumbai agayi. Baar baar Sneha pooch rahithi ke unke papa koun the, par tere dadi ke paas koi jawab nahin tha. Mumbai mein, jab usne school shooro ke, to phir Sneha ne ek dost milithi jiska naam Diya the. Diya tere dadu ke bhanji hain aur ek din usne Sneha ko Basu ghar par legayi. Waha par Sneha apne papa ko mili aur usse to bahut pasand agayi thi. Har din woh to Diya ke saath Basu house gayi thi aur tere dadu to bahut khush bangaya itni saalo ke baad. Par jab tere dadu to bata chala ke Sneha tere dadi ke beti hain, to usse to Sneha ko milne se rookdiya. Aur jab Sneha to pata chali ke tere dadu unki papa hain to woh to khushi khushi se rehgaye thi par tere dadu ne phir usse to apna ne se inkar kiya tha. Sneha to bilkul tootgaye thi aur usse khush rehne keliye tere Prena dadi ne usse to bataya tha ke uske baap Rishab Bajaj the jo Sneha aur Prena dadi ko Mr.Bajaj bolthe the. Sneha phir se khushi rehgayi thi aur us waqt tha jab uske paas ek bone-marrow disease tha, to phir Prena dadi ne poocha ke agar woh to test karsakta hain, kyunki Sneha ko ek bone-marrow ki zaroorath thi aur tere dadi ke paas matching wala nahin tha. Tere dadu ne kiya par match nahin tha aur jab Prena dadi ne doctor ke paas chaligayi, to phir doctor ne kaha ka usse to ek sibling ke bone-marrow ke zaroorath, wahi maa pita se jo Sneha ke maa pita hain. Aab Prem margaya hain aur Sneha ke paas koi aur bhai bhen nahin tha, to Prena dadi aur Anurag dadu apne rishto ko choorne ek doosre ke karib ane he tha. Tab us waqt aya tha tumhare papa PREM, jo apni bara bhai ke naam le liya tha. Unhe ke honour mein, tere dadu dadi ne usse Prem raka.

Ok guys, i know what u people are thinking, that y did I change the whole thing. Well it was because over the holidays, i was going over it on my dad's net and thought that P2 and Krish should know how their dad came about and who their grandparents are. So that's why i re-wrote the whole thing. I'm so sorry, very very very very very very very sorry. If you could all please forgive me, then that would be really good.
Edited by Patel 1993 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
awosme update patel.........keep it up!!
and continue soo00n 😊

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