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he y guys, back with another fan-fiction of PreMukti. there are some addtional characters in here which will be introduced in the upcoming parts as the story goes on (but that will only happen, if u people like it).
It starts when Mukti leaves Mumbai - Bajaj house, but she don't tell any1 where she is going. When she was in hospital [(if any of u don't remember, its when, she had that accident & sneha also went in hospital (the first time 4 sneha)] and Prena left to go and meet Sampatha, Mukti found out that she was pregnant. She didn't tell this 2 anyone, not even Prena. Mukti thought that once she would leave Mumbai, she would start life anew with her and Prem's child. So she leaves Mumbai so that Prem and Debonita can get married & she don't have to bear the pain of seeing him getting married to Miss. Nautanki (debo), oh yh and Mukti's dad is dead in here.
Mukti, to herself in the train station: 'thank god, that no-one found out about the child or everything would be ruined. I don't want anyone to know bout my child, not even Prem or Chotima.' Saying that, she rubs her stomach and holds it tight, then after one look back at the station, she enters the train and leaves Mumbai.
Back at Bajaj house, Prem is furious coz Mukti left. He himself doesn't know why he is that furious. 'Basanti is gone, but y am I so upset that she left. I don't care bout her, I'm UD, i don't care bout no-one, not even that basanti.'
Prena came in2 the room and saw him in his thoughts. She looked at him while he sat clenching the beer can in his hand. 'Prem, mujhe baata hain, ke to Mukti ke baare mein soch raha hain...............' Just then, Sneha came upto her and shook her out of her thoughts, telling her that Mr. Bajaj was calling her. Prena went with Sneha while Prem sat on his bed, still clenching the can in his hand and thinking bout Mukti.
Meanwhile, at Shimla train station, Mukti got out of the train and looked around in search for some-one. Finding them, she walked up2 them and hugged the woman.
Woman: i'm so happy that u have come back to me beta. Last time I saw u was in Satara, when u went to go and visit ur bua.
M: are mamma, i'll always be with u 4rm now on. I shall not leave ur side eva! bhaiya, tell mamma na, to stop crying
Man: behna, so glad that u r with us now. come we go home now, dad is waiting 4 us. oh and ur mom will be joining us soon back @ home, she has gone on a meeting for the office.
M: ok bhaiya. ab hum chale, ghar jaana hain and u knw dad, he doesn't like it when we are late.
Kumkum: KK: yh i knw, chale Dhruv
D: haan ma chalo.
They leave the station and go in the car and drive of. On reaching home (Wadhwa house), Mukti is greeted with a BIG surprise and many presents as well as many hugs and kisses
NOTE: only these people know that Mukti is pregnant.
Mukti hugs everyone and then goes and freshen up. She puts on a white dress (halter neck) that comes upto just below her knees.
Sharman: wow Mukti, he said looking at her in awe, no-one can tell that ur pregnant.
M: i'll take that as a compliment, now where's Pa?
Sumit: mein yahan hoon beta. i was really missing u, was telling Kumkum, that when is Mukti gonna cum? where is she? has she left Mumbai yet?
M: lol well i'm here now am I not Pa.
Su: yh u are and ur here 4EVA! I'm so happy beta that u r back with us.
M: me 2 Pa, me 2
NOTE: sharman, siya & dhruv are all being played by the old generation of Kumkum - u knw: Gaurav, Nikita (i think that's her name) and Vivan and Antara is being played by Dr.Keerti of DMG
So guys, that is first part, tell me if u like it or not
It starts when Mukti leaves Mumbai - Bajaj house, but she don't tell any1 where she is going. When she was in hospital [(if any of u don't remember, its when, she had that accident & sneha also went in hospital (the first time 4 sneha)] and Prena left to go and meet Sampatha, Mukti found out that she was pregnant. She didn't tell this 2 anyone, not even Prena. Mukti thought that once she would leave Mumbai, she would start life anew with her and Prem's child. So she leaves Mumbai so that Prem and Debonita can get married & she don't have to bear the pain of seeing him getting married to Miss. Nautanki (debo), oh yh and Mukti's dad is dead in here.
Mukti, to herself in the train station: 'thank god, that no-one found out about the child or everything would be ruined. I don't want anyone to know bout my child, not even Prem or Chotima.' Saying that, she rubs her stomach and holds it tight, then after one look back at the station, she enters the train and leaves Mumbai.
Back at Bajaj house, Prem is furious coz Mukti left. He himself doesn't know why he is that furious. 'Basanti is gone, but y am I so upset that she left. I don't care bout her, I'm UD, i don't care bout no-one, not even that basanti.'
Prena came in2 the room and saw him in his thoughts. She looked at him while he sat clenching the beer can in his hand. 'Prem, mujhe baata hain, ke to Mukti ke baare mein soch raha hain...............' Just then, Sneha came upto her and shook her out of her thoughts, telling her that Mr. Bajaj was calling her. Prena went with Sneha while Prem sat on his bed, still clenching the can in his hand and thinking bout Mukti.
Meanwhile, at Shimla train station, Mukti got out of the train and looked around in search for some-one. Finding them, she walked up2 them and hugged the woman.
Woman: i'm so happy that u have come back to me beta. Last time I saw u was in Satara, when u went to go and visit ur bua.
M: are mamma, i'll always be with u 4rm now on. I shall not leave ur side eva! bhaiya, tell mamma na, to stop crying
Man: behna, so glad that u r with us now. come we go home now, dad is waiting 4 us. oh and ur mom will be joining us soon back @ home, she has gone on a meeting for the office.
M: ok bhaiya. ab hum chale, ghar jaana hain and u knw dad, he doesn't like it when we are late.
Kumkum: KK: yh i knw, chale Dhruv
D: haan ma chalo.
They leave the station and go in the car and drive of. On reaching home (Wadhwa house), Mukti is greeted with a BIG surprise and many presents as well as many hugs and kisses
NOTE: only these people know that Mukti is pregnant.
Mukti hugs everyone and then goes and freshen up. She puts on a white dress (halter neck) that comes upto just below her knees.
Sharman: wow Mukti, he said looking at her in awe, no-one can tell that ur pregnant.
M: i'll take that as a compliment, now where's Pa?
Sumit: mein yahan hoon beta. i was really missing u, was telling Kumkum, that when is Mukti gonna cum? where is she? has she left Mumbai yet?
M: lol well i'm here now am I not Pa.
Su: yh u are and ur here 4EVA! I'm so happy beta that u r back with us.
M: me 2 Pa, me 2
NOTE: sharman, siya & dhruv are all being played by the old generation of Kumkum - u knw: Gaurav, Nikita (i think that's her name) and Vivan and Antara is being played by Dr.Keerti of DMG
So guys, that is first part, tell me if u like it or not
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