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Now we have a 15 yr leap. We see a girl, a boy & Prem sleeping and the scene is divided into 3 equal parts (the girl on one side, Prem in the middle and the boy on the other side). They are all sleeping the same exact way!

Mumbai - Prena is calling Prem to wake up and come down 4 breakfast.
Pr: PREM PREM PREM! PREM WAKE UP NOW!
P: uhhhhhh............ok Mother India............i'm coming (he says while yawning). He gets up and looks @ a picture of Mukti. He has it hung on the wall above his bed. Smiling @ the picture, he goes in2 the bathroom.

America - Los Angeles. We see a massive mansion. Going inside, we see a living room straight ahead and a staircase following. On the right hand side of the room, we see a few woman, who are standing infront of the mandir, doing the pooja. On hearing the sound of prayer, some men come as well and join in. There on the side, on the wall, is Mukti's picture with a garland on it.
The people turn around and go to Mukti's picture and put a tika on it and a fresh garland on it.
We see Kumkum, Sumit, Suprita, Aryan, Megha (Aryan's wife), Dhruv, Anthara, Aashika, Vikram (Aashika's husband), Sharman, Amrita (Sharman's wife), Angad, Kripa, Siya, Josh, Angad's dadi, and Sumits parents and bari dada and dadi (Sumit's grandparents) and a whole load of kidz there as well praying infront of Mukti's picture.
Sumit: Mukti, kash to humari saat hoti, to phir tum bhi dekh sakti hoon, ke tumhari bacho kitni bare hogayi hain.
Aryan: kaha hain dono. Saare bache yahan hain, par woh dono nahin aye. Kahan hain dono?
Kripa: tum to jante hoon Aryan, bilkul apne papa pargayi hain woh dono. Yaadein, Mukti ne humhe bataya, ke Prem bhi der (late) se utta jata hain, aur woh to pooja karne to bilkul acha nahin lagta ta. Dono bache apne papa ke tarah pargayi hain, kaas kar P2. aab koun jayega utne keliye?
Sumit: aur koun jayega. Choti nani of corse.
Kumkum laughs and then shouts: PRENA PARI, KRISHNA, WAKE UP!

Now we go upstairs and there is so many doors everywhere. We enter a room that is lilac. It has many posters of Brad Pitt and Orlando Bloom there including Johnny Depp. There is a few pics of the family and Mukti on the headboard. We see the name P2 MALHOTRA (in short 4 Prena Pari) going slanted (in a curve - u know the way a rainbow goes)on the headboard. On the other side of the room, we see her achievements trophies in a glass case shelve and a badge saying HEAD GIRL. Now, we see a girl laying on the bed with a blanket covering her. Once hearing the voice, she wakes up with a blast! The song 'Its Raining Amen' 4rm Geri Halliwell: http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=OyyBGjKAsf4 - in the video, just imagine Geri Halliwell isn't in there. She gets up and starts dancing (u knw guys, how Kareena starts dancing K3G to the song - same way P2 does this dance, only she doesn't put on a mini skirt). She looks just like Prem but only has Mukti's smile.
She goes in2 a room and comes out in a blue tank top with a pair of blue jeans on and also a blue jeans jacket, which buttons are open . She has light blue eyeshadow on with a bit of pink lip-gloss on. Then she goes and puts on a pair of rings which are joined 2gether. It says 'P2'. She flashes it in the mirror.



She looks @ her self in the mirror and says:
P2: not bad P2, not bad @ all!

She walks out of the room and looks around. She shouts downstairs: CHOTI NANI, MY NAME IS P2, NOT PRENA PARI.
Kumkum: TEKHE BETA, NOW GO AND WAKE UP UR BROTHER. HE IS STILL SLEEPING.
P2: ok nani.

She goes 2 a door and opens it. We see a room color dark blue on 2 walls and a dark sky kind of blue on the other two walls. The sequence goes like this: dark blue, dark sky blue, dark blue and then dark sky. The room is fairly neat, but with some magazines on the floor. The room has posters of hot models and actresses such as Jennifer Aniston and Ashwariya Rai. On one side of the room, we see his trophies in a glass case with a badge saying HEAD BOY! On the headboard, there is a few family pictures and some pics of Mukti. It says KRISH MALHOTRA. Under it, there is a body that is under the blanket. P2 pulls the blanket of him and shakes him one. He waked up saying:
Krish: kya hain sis? Itni subha subha kyu uta tumne mujhe?

We see a boy about 15 yrs old. He has big brown eyes (just like Mukti's) and a nose (which is like Anurag's) and his smile is a bit like Prem's

P2: GOOD MORNING 2 u too aur yeh mere marzi nahin ke mein tumhe subha subha utne ki. Choti nani ne kaha hai isilye mein to karahi hoon, majboori hain mere. Warna mein to yaha par kya, khud ko bhi nahin utongi. I won't wake up myself bro.
Krish: alryt alryt and GOOD MORNING lil sister.
P2: kya lil sister, hum dono ek din mein, ek time par paida howa tha.
Krish: ek din par paida howa tha, par ek time par nahin. Mein 1 min aur 30 secs tumse bara hoon.
P2: fyn then
Krish: now lemme get change and please sister, take out my clothes 4 me. I need 2 look 'cool & sexy' 2day, like everyday
P2: ek shart par..........
Krish: kya?
P2: hug?
Krish laughs and hugs his sister. They let go of each other and Krish goes in2 the bathroom, while P2 goes and takes out his clothes. Out comes a pair of black trousers with a black T-shirt that has blue printing on it 4rm the wardrobe. She also took out a black hoodie. Krish comes out in a royal blue bath robe and looks @ what clothes his sister took out 4 him

She gave him the clothes and he went back in the bathroom and came out in this:



Krish: one thing missing sister
P2: what's that?
Krish: this............
He takes out something 4rm the drawer and shows his sister: &

P2 laughs and taps him on the head while he puts it on. They go out of the room while the maid comes in to clean up. Both race each other down the stairs and reach the landing together. Both head towards the dining area. The table is really long and covers up the whole room. Everyone is sitting there.

Krish & P2 @ the same time: GOOD MORNING EVERYBODY!
Everybody smiles @ them: GOOD MORNING KRISHNA AND P2
Krish: MY NAME IS NOT KRISHNA! IT IS KRISH, GOT THAT EVERYONE, IT IS KRISH. y is it that only sister calls me that 4? hate it when people calls me KRISHNA. IT DOESN'T GO WITH MY IMAGE.
Everyone laughs @ him while he sits down in his seat.
P2 then sees a little girl and says: GOOD MORNING BASANTI.
Girl: UGH! P2 di, my name is RIDHIMA, R-I-D-H-I-M-A, got that,RIDIMA, not basanti. ok
P2: ok, but 4 me u were and always will be BASANTI!
Ridhima: why d'u call me that 4?
P2: coz u talk alot. And anyway, the name suits u, got that
Ridhima: w/e
Just then Sumit walks in with the newspaper. P2 runs up to him yelling:
P2: SEXY NANU! GOOD MORNING!
Sumit: good morning beta. kya howa? today ur in a very happy mood
P2: nothing sexy nanu, bas, today is that thing @ school. That event.
Sumit: kaunsi wala event?
P2: u have to pick a topic and talk bout it up on stage. Har sal, woh Molly jeeti hain. par is sal, mein participate karahi hoon na, so I AM GONNA WIN. u r gonna cum yh?
Sumit: or corse beta. hum sab log ayenge tekhe.
P2: ok.
Sumit: kool
He sits down where the head of the table sits and starts reading the newspaper. Just then, Krish looks @ her with a look on his face and moves his head. P2 nods and says
P2: Sexy nanu........
Sumit: yh
P2: jeeti doona (give the letter)
Sumit: tumhare b-day kab hain?
P2: kal.
Sumit: sooooooooo then
P2: ohhhhhhhh then gooooo
Sumit: yh goooo and u too Krish, go on.

Both of them left and everyone (the adults) looked @ them while they left the room. Both of them were living without a mother & father. They all missed Mukti and saw her in both of them. Tomorrow was there 16th b-day and that would be the day when they find out about their dad, the last letter and that would be it. That's when they would want to meet him. All the letters that Mukti had left them were with either P2 or Krish. It would be the day where everyone will have to answer all the questions that the 2 will face them with. The day when they find out how they came about in this world and who their father is.

Back in Mumbai, Prena was in her room, crying, looking @ Mukti's pictures. She had made an album of her (Mukti) ever since she had left. Where her daughter was now, she had no idea, but she only hoped that Mukti will return back soon and that too really soon. Prem entered and saw his mother looking @ the album. She was looking @ it almost everyday now. She was really missing Mukti. So was he, but he could only hope - the same as everyone else - that she came back to them ASAP!

Just then a boy around the age of 11 came in through the main door & shouted ' PREM BHAIYA, SNEHA DIDI, PRENA AUNTY, ANYA! KAHAN HO SAB LOG!MEIN AAGAYA!
Prem went downstairs and saw the boy. He smiled and ran down the stairs. Sneha came out of the kitchen and went in2 the living room and smiled. She hugged the boy and said:
S: u came. this doesn't mean that u can scream the whole house down does it huh AMAN!
Aman Basu - the son of Anurag & Sam Basu and brother of Prem & Sneha (half bro). He was dressed in a T-Shirt with trouser.
A: sorry didi, par kya karo. aadat hain haina
S: ok, dekh Prem aaya
A: hey Prem bhaiya.
P: hey dude.
They exchange hi-fives. Prena comes down after hearing all the noise.
Pr: yeh kitni aawaz kyu hain yaha par.
A: sorry aunty par yeh sab maine kiya.
Prena laughs and says: ok common, i get u something to eat. Yeh Anya kahan gaye? ANYA KAHAN HO TUM?
Anya: mein yahan ho nani. A girl comes down the stairs dresses in a summer dress. She looked the age of 11 - same age as Aman. She was the daughter of Omi and Sneha Saxena. After 5 yrs, Sneha had met Omi and the 2 fell in love. They then had a daughter called Anya.
Pr: beta, dekh Aman aya hain
Anya: bata hain nani. hi Aman mamu
Aman: don't call me that. hate it
Anya: mamu to nahin to kya bolo
Aman: anything but that please
Anya laughs and they both go up the stairs. Prem goes outside and Sneha and Prena goes in2 the kitchen.

Prem walked around outside lazily not knowing what to do. He sighed and sat in the steps of the outhouse, remembering Mukti along the way. he looked @ the outside door and thought for a moment. After a one minute thought, he headed inside the outhouse and saw nothing but darkness. He looked for the swtich and switched it on. There in the room were pictures of Mukti everywhere. The room was cleaned up everyday. It seemed as thought Prena had been in here since Mukti left Prem thought. He looked around and sat on the bed. Mukti sense was here and would remain here 4eva! he would never let go of her and he was still living with the hope of her coming back to him. A phone call came and he answered it.
P: hullo
Man: sir, there is a phone call 4rm the company in America called MUKTI LTD.
P: oh yh, that project, ummmmmm could u put them on hold. I'll be there as soon as i can.
Man: ok sir.

Prem ran out of the room and headed towards the car. Quickly he drove off heading towards the office. He had always wondered who this MUKTI LTD company was and whether it had any connection with his Mukti? He really wanted to meet these people and his chance had come. Upon reaching the office, he ran up to his cabin where the employee was waiting.
Employee: sir the managing director of MUKTI LTD is on the phone.
P: thank u. hullo.
Managing Director: yes Mr.Prem, this Aryan Malhotra (Mukti's bro) here. I need to talk to you about the project we are doing together. There is a meeting over here about the plans of the architecture, how it needs to be design and all and we really need u ova here.
P: of corse Mr.Malhotra, i shall be there as soon as i can. In fact the next flight i shall be on and will reach.
Aryan: ok Mr.Prem and please no formalities, Aryan is fine.
P: ok then............... Aryan.
A: thanks Prem.
He puts the phone down and faces someone: Don't worry papa, everything will go alryt.
Sumit: i hope so, i wanna meet the man who ruined my daughters life and i wanna ask him y he did that.
A: so do I papa, so do I.
Josh: i met him. he tells them of the time when Prem banged in2 Josh's car and how they met. So, I think that I should handle this project with him alone, since he has only met me and u people should come in the meetings. Krish works here as well, so Prem will be meeting him 2.
A: u r ryt Josh.
Back in Mumbai, Prem asks his secretary to book his flight for LA. He phones up Prena and tells her that he has to go for the meeting and tells her that he will be leaving 2morrow.
Prem reaches home and starts to pack his things as his flight is 2morrow. He takes a picture of Mukti and looks at it and smiles. He places it in the suitcases and locks it up.

Preview: P2's school event, Krish's & P2 b-day party and the last letter 4rm Mukti - where she tells them everything about her past, inlcuding PREM!
Edited by Patel 1993 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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heyyyy that was a great update!!!!! plzzzzzz continue soon!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey plzz bring mukti back......mera prem
akela ho jaey ga 😕
any ways continue soo00n 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice part
wonder how the kids will react when they know about prem & how will prem react when he knows mukti is dead
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks 4 the comments.
need more to continue

@ nihaal_p2: no there is no way
of Mukti coming back.

@ cuteangel786: how the kids react
and Prem reacts is what u have to find out
in the upcoming parts.

in the next few parts, it will be about Mukti's letter
that her kidz read and that's where they find out about their dad.

continue on reading
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: nihaal_p2

so is he gonna fall for any other girl...lol😳 hope not...only mukti....



no Prem is not gonna fall 4 any girl. He loves ONLY Mukti
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: nihaal_p2

awww thats sweet....hope he dont...actually dont make him fall for any girls...

if mukti is dead...then wht is the point of the ff unknown children....just asking😳 hope u dont feel bad for wht i said😳



the title ' UNKNOWN CHILDREN' is 4 Basu & Bajaj pariwaar and Prem. They don't know that Mukti had kids so that's y for them it is called Unknown Children, but after many updates, they will find out. I'll give u a hint: Anurag finds out first.
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Originally posted by: nihaal_p2

oooooo i c...very nice...so once they find out its the ff is gonna end😭 ?



no it won't end after they find out. there will be some scenes between the 2 kidz and Basu & Bajaj Pariwaar be4 they (Basu & Bajaj family - apart 4rm Anurag and Sam) find out, but its not gonna end that quickly.
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RECAP: P2 and Krish's intro after 15 yr leap.

The following day, everyone in LA mansion woke up in a hurry. P2 and Krish, as usual, woke up late and was greeted by a HAPPY B-DAY by everyone! It was also P2's event in school and she was one of the contestants. Getting in2 her school uniform (that she HAD to wear) - which consisted of a Grey mini skirt and blue jersey with a white shirt and tie, she quickly got ready. Be4 leaving the room, she quickly looked back @ her mother's picture and went towards it.
P2: hey mom, aap ko bata hain, aaj school mein mere competition hain. har sal woh Molly jeeti hain, par is saal mein jeetongi, janti hoon kyun..............
She looks @ Mukti's picture as if waiting 4 an answer. Then she continued...........
P2: kyunki mein aap ki beti hoon, aur mein bahut achi tarah se jaanti hoon, ke jab aap school mein hi ti haina, to phir aab to har competition jeeti ti. Ok aab mein chalti hoon, sab log mere intazzar karte hoonge. Bye mom and wish me luck.
She ran out of her room and went down the stairs. Sumit, who was outside her room, walked out in and went to Mukti's picture.
S: Mukti..........kya kahoon mein tumse............tumne sirf humko nahin, balki tumhre bacho ko bhi chordiya jab woh tumhare sab se ziyaada zaroorat hain. Chalo aab mein bhi chalta hoon. P2 meri intaazar karti hoonge and "SEXY NANU" doesn't wanna disappoint his grand-daughter.
He leaves the room and closes the door shut. They all leave the house and reach the school.

MUKTI MALHOTRA BOARDING SCHOOL: The school which is named after Mukti and the school that P2, Krish and all the other kids in the family go to. Has a hostel - only 4 those whose home is far away. It is 4 boys and girls but they have separate hostels.

COMPETTION: Everyone is seated in the hall and P2's family comes along with Krish. Wanting to see his sister be4 the event, he excused himself and went towards her. She was nervous, that he could tell straight-away. No-one knew her betta than him, not even Sumit nanu. Going towards her, he made her face him and said:
K: look sister, ur gonna win this alryt. And anyway, don't worry, i got ur back out there.
P2: thanks bhai.

Announcement: The competition will be starting in 5 mins. Could all please take ur seats?

K: k sister, i going now. see u out there.
P2: k bro. bye
K: bye.

He left and she was waiting there. The announcer had called the students who were taking part. One by one they all came in and took their seats. P2 came in and she waved @ her family who waved back with pleasure. Students were then coming up and started to talk bout their topic.

Announcer: now lastly, lets give it up for our HEAD GIRL: P2 MALHOTRA!

There was a round of applause as P2 came up on stage. She winked @ her bro and nanu, who winked back @ her. Taking out her topic, she looked @ the paper and stopped for a bit. Not knowing what to say, she looked around @ the audience. Waiting for her to say something, the teacher said "say". P2 just said one word............Mother.

Sumit looked @ her with a sad look on his face. Krish looked @ his sister, waiting for her to say something. After some time, she said..............

P2: Mum. A mother is some-one who loves us alot, but sometimes we just don't realize how much she loves us. A mother is some-one who makes us realize how much we mean to this world and how good we are, that there is no-one better than us. A mother is some-one whose happiness lies in our happiness and whose sorrow lies in our sorrow. A mother............a mother is everything.........but only difference is that I don't have one. But i have my brother, my grand-parents, my uncles, aunts and all my cuzins, and they are really nice, especially my bro and grandpa, who is always there 4 me. That's all i have to say, thank u.

She went back to her seat and was rewarded by a round of applause. The judges didn't need to decide on who to give the trophy to. As soon as P2 sat down, they had made their decision and gave their vote.

JUDGE: THE WINNER IS................Molly got up to recieve the award, but boy was she wrong

......................P2 MALHOTRA!

P2 sat there shocked in her seat as her family gestured her to receive the award. On receiving it, she thanked her bro and family. Krish got up and went down on stage to go and hug his sister. Everyone applauded and surrounded the 2.

Prem, back in Mumbai, had just won another contract for his business and ws surrounded by the media.

This day was the day of where father and daughter had won.

Sorry guys, i know the b-day party and Mukti's last letter was gonna be in here, but i can't write anymore. Dad is forcing me to go bed..........and.............well u know how dad's are like. So i shall update 2morrow and continue 4rm here (if i get logged in that is - been having problems).

Enjoy the update 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey gr8 update!!!
plzzzz continue soo00n.......i am waiting 😳

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