PM: The Children : Mingling - PG 23 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Robin_M

nice start! glad your doing another ff, hope you continue your others as well!



dnt worry robin, i'll have those updated as well 😆😆😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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M:where's Pa?
Sumit: mein yahan hoon beta. i was really missing u, was telling Kumkum, that when is Mukti gonna cum? where is she? has she left Mumbai yet?
M: lol well i'm here now am I not Pa.
Su: yh u are and ur here 4EVA! I'm so happy beta that u r back with us.
M: me 2 Pa, me 2

Night fell in2 the room of Prem Sharma/Basu/Bajaj (dunno which one he is - someone clear this confusion 4 me please).
P:wht am i still thinking bout her? i can't sleep @ all! ugh man, that BASANTI is ruining my sleep now. first my LIFE & now my SLEEP! UGH BASANTI WHT THE HELL R U DOING TO ME?

Prem got out of his bed and looked at the outhouse window hoping Mukti was there to answer his question, but she wasn't. He then remembered that she wasn't there anymore, she wasn't here now. She was gone, gone forever!
Prem didn't know why he was looking for her, he was just hoping that she would be there just to answer his question

M: Prem

Prem turned back as soon as he heard the voice. He stood there in shock and stared at her. Mukti was there staring the same way dressed in a simple white shalwar.
M: Prem, kya sooch rahe hoon?
P: Mukti, tum yaha, tum wapas aagayi?
M: nahin Prem, mein wapas nahin aagayi, mein yahan hoon, kyunki tum mere yaad karahe hoon
P: that.........that is not true. i'm not remembering you. yeh sach nahin hain, mein tumhe yaad nahin karaha hoon
M: sach? agar tumne mere yaad nahin araha hain, to mein yaha kya karahi hoon? mein yaha par isiliye aayi hoon Prem kyunki tumne mujhe bolyaa hain. tum mere yaad karahe hoon, yahi sach hain. Tu mujhe abhi takh nahin bhool pa sakta. Suddenly her voice rose up: BOLO PREM, TUM MERE YAAD SISLIYE KARAHE HOON KYUNKI TUM MUJHSE PYAAR KARTE HOON, YAHI HAIN TERE ZINDAGI KE SABSE BAARE SACH HAIN, TUM MUJHSE PYAAR KARTE HOON PREM, PYAAR!

Prem turned around not facing her - having his back towards her.
P: NAHIN MEIN TUMSE PYAAR NAHIN KARTA, I DON'T LOVE U DAMMIT.!
M: AGAR TUM MUJHSE PYAAR NAHIN KARTI, THEN Y R U TURNING UR BACK ON ME HUH PREM, BOLO!
P: MEIN NAHIN JAANTA KE MEIN AISA KYUN KARAHE HOON MUKTI, BUT 4 GOD SAKE, I............DAMMIT.........KYA KARAHI HOON YAHI PAR? TUM YAHA SE HAMESHA KE LIYE GAYI THI HAIN NA? TO PHIR WAPAS KYUN AYI THI MUKTI?
M: Prem, mein ne kahan tha na ke main wapas nahin aayi hoon. Tumne mujhe yaha par bolaya, tumhare yaadon mein, mein abhi waha hi hoon. Tum mujhe abhi yaad karahe hoon, kyunki tum mujhse PYAAR KARTE HOON, BOLO PREM TUM MUJHSE PYAAR KARTE HOON! ADMIT PREM, TUM MUJHSE PYAAR KARTE HOON!
P: HAAN, HAAN MEIN TUMSE PYAAR KARTA, I LOVE U MUKTI OK. mein tumhare bagair nahin jee sakta, i.........i love u Mukti.....................
He turned around to face Mukti but she was gone. He looked around in search for her hoping that she was playing some kind of a joke on him, but she was nowhere in sight.

Pr: prem beta..........
Prem looked at the doorway and found the entire family standing by the door looking @ him with a look on their faces. Prem ran to his mom and hugged her and started to cry
P: maa, mein Mukti se pyaar karta hoon. I love her, I love her alot! Mein unke bina nahin jee sakta.
Prena was shocked as she hugged her son and started to cry along with him
P: abh woh kabhi mere nahin ho sakti maa, woh to mujhe chor kar chali gaye hain. Mein Mukti se bahut pyaar karta hoon maa, mein agar kissi se shaadi karlo, to woh sirf Mukti se, mein debo se shaadi nahin karonga. Maa, kya aap jaanti hain Mukti kahan hain, mein usse ghar wapas lene chahta hoon mom, i want 2 bring her back.

Prena didn't know what to say. She herself didn't know where Mukti was. She kept silent and looked @ her son who had a pleading look on his face which was also full of tears.
Edited by Patel 1993 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg! dat woz soo sad, plz continue itz gr8 xx
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey really nice update !!!
continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwww prem realised dat hez in luv😳 can't wait till they meet again😛 update soon😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg that was soooooo sweet! yay prem loves mukti! hope he goes and gets her!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was good! plz cont soon! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Pr: prem beta..........
Prem looked at the doorway and found the entire family standing by the door looking @ him with a look on their face. prem ran to his mom and hugged her and started to cry
P: maa, mein Mukti se pyaar karta hoon. I love her, I love her alot! Mein unke bina nahin jee sakta.
Prena was shocked as she hugged her son and started to cry along with him
P: abh woh kabhi mere nahin ho sakti maa, woh to muhe chor kar chali gaye hain, mein Mukti se bahut pyaar karta hoon maa, mein agar kissi se shaadi karlo, to woh sirf Mukti hain, mein debo se shaadi nahin karonga. Maa, kya aap jaanti hain Mukti kahan hain, mein usse ghar wapas lene chahta hoon mom, i want 2 bring her back.

Prena didn't know what to say. She herself didn't know where Mukti was. She kept silent and looked @ her son who had a pleading look on his face which was also full of tears.

The next morning, @ Wadhwa house, in Shimla, Mukti woke up to the sounds of birds singing outside. There, her Kumkum mamma was looking @ her with her Suprita mom - her real mom. She sat up smiling @ both of them 2 which they smiled back. Both her mothers were here with her, but only her choti ma wasn't. She missed Prena alot. The way Prena used to come and hug her, the way Prena used to put her 2 bed when she was young and when she was afraid of the dark. Mukti loved her choti ma but she knew that she wasn't gonna see her anymore. Her last look @ Prena was when she left Bajaj house and so was when she had her last look @ Prem - the father of her children/child.

Her 2 mothers came and sat on either side of her on the bed. They hugged her, one by one, with all the love and care they had hid inside them 4 the past 4.5 months (four and half months). The last time they had met Mukti was when she was in Satara, visitng her bua. They had also come. It was lucky that Jeevan didn't come otherwise Mukti would have never been allowed to see or meet her mom. In the past, Suprita and Jeevan ahd some problems, due to that, they seperated. Suprita Malhotra was now the owner of a large Event Management Company, while her son, Aryan Malhotra (Mukti's older brother) owned a music company with the Khanna's.

Mukti had met the Khanna's @ the party last night. She quickly became best friends with Angad Khanna & Kripa Sharma, who were apparently engaged (the rockstar's 4rm KYPH) and they were best friends with Aryan as well which made things much more easier for Mukti 2 become friends with them. She also met Josh, who turned out to be a little like Sharman, when it came to jokes. Mukti told them everything that had happened to her in Mumbai - how she met Prem, how she fell in love with him, how she got raped and she had to go through a whole series of events just to ger JUSTICE! Kripa immediately felt sorry for the poor girl and 4rm then on told Mukti to call her Kripa didi. This Mukti did and 4rm then on, she, Kripa, Siya and the rest of the girls started 2 become the best of friends.

Meanwhile back in Mumbai, the Basu's had heard Prem's decision to which Anurag and Sam was pleased @ but made Debo go crazy. She ran out of the house and started to bang in2 things. Prem and the rest ran out to go to her. Prena tried to comforting her but Debo was going MAD!
Prem couldn't handle it anymore so he slapped her. The whole family stood there in shock as to what Prem just did. Prem, mad himself @ Debo's behavior shouted:
P: I LOVE MUKTI OK, I LOVE HER! MEIN SIRF USSE SI SHAADI KARONGA! TUMSE NAHIN OK! DEBONITA, GET A HOLD OF URSELF! I........LOVE.........MUKTI, NOT U! SO I DON'T KNOW WHY U ARE GOING ALL CRAZY AND BERZERK, BUT MEIN JO KEHRAHA HOON SACH KEHRAHA HOON, I LOVE MUKTI he said looking in2 her eyes.

With that, Prem left towards the house. Quickly running to his room, he started to pack his things in order to leave. Prena came in and saw what he was doing and asked:
Pr: Prem, kya karahe hoon tu? what u doing? tum kaha jaa rahe hoon?
P: maa, i'm going to Satara, shayed Mukti waha honge aapni bua ke saat. Mein usse donne keliye jaa raha hoon and i'm sure, i'll come back with her.
Pr: mein bhi yahin yakeen karonge gi, ke to mere bahu ke saat wapas aajayega.
Prem smiled when Prena said 'her bahu'. He was sure, that she agreed to his and Mukti's jodi. Taking her blessings, he left the room and made his was downstairs, outside the house and went inside his car and took off. Prena saw and explained to everyone what Prem was going to do and where he was going.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
nice part
wonder how prem & mukti will meet
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Posted: 17 years ago
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keep itz, itz reali gd, i wonder how prem n mukti r gunna meet n i hope dey fall in luv soon .... dat debo is a bitch man xxxx

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