Prema- A Prem Mukti FF(Ep18-19, Pg28) - Page 6

just finished reading the entire fanfic
its a different story
ur a good writer 👏 👏
loved the scene btw PD & UD kind of reminded me of prem & mukti scenes😆 😆
wonder how he'll react when he knows she's his daughter

Hey Everyone. I am posting the next update. See this time, I am right on schedule.😉. Anyway, here is:

Episode Nine-

Bajaj House, The Nursery. Its a large room completely filled with toys. PD and Tanvi are sitting and playing peek-a-boo with P2 and Krutika. Sneha enters the room, stands at the doorway and watches.

PD: Yeh dono kitna enjoy kar rahi hai, hai na?

Tanvi: Haan, especially P2. Tumhe pata hai P2 kabhi bhi strangers ko pasand nahin karti liken woh tumhe mind nahin karti.

PD: Main koi stranger thori na hoon. Main to P2 ki dost hoon. Hai na, P2?

She hides her face from P2 and then watches through her fingers.

PD: Peek-a-boo, P2. Peek-a-boo.

Sneha is still watching, thinking

Sneha (thinking): Yeh bachi mujhe kissi ki yaad dilati hai. Liken Kis ki?

She remembers the time she played Blind Man's Bluff with Kasak and Mukti when they were children.

Sneha (thinking): Haan, PD Mukti sey milti hai.

Tanvi looks up and sees Sneha.

Tanvi: Sneha Mausi, aap yahaan par kya kar rahi ho?

Sneha: Main P2 aur Krutika ko laine aaye thi. Un dono kay sonay ka waqt ho gaya hai.

PD: Oh. Par hum to kitna enjoy kar rahe thay.

Sneha: I am sorry, beta par un ko sona to hai na. Par believe me, mujhe pata hai keh apni choti beheno kay saath khelney may kitna mazaa aata hai. Main bhi bachpan main apni choti beheno kay saath bilkul aisi hi..

She abruptly stops as she remembers her two little sisters.

PD: Aap rukh kyun gaye?

Sneha: Umm, mujhe in dono ko laye jaana chahaye.

She picks Krutika up and kisses her fiercely, remembering the girl's mother and then almost as if she cannot help herself, she reaches over and kisses PD on top of her head.

PD: Thank you. Sneha Mausi. Par yeh kis liye?

Sneha: Tu sawal bahut pooch thi hai, PD. Bilkul Muk.. acha Good night, girls.

She quickly picks P2 up and leaves, carrying the two babies.

Tanvi: Kitni strange baat hai na, Sneha Mausi keh rahi thi keh woh apni choti beheno kay saath khelti thi. Liken un ki to koi choti behen hi nahin hai.

PD: Yeh grown-ups bhi na, bahut ajeeb hotay hai.

She shakes her head, bewildered on the strange antics of grown-ups.

Scene 2- Early morning, Bajaj House, Main driveway. Prem is walking towards his car, obviously getting ready to leave. When suddenly PD appears from nowhere, shouting.

PD: Uncle, Uncle. One minute, i am coming.

Prem: Tum kabhi ahista sey nahin chal sakti. Hamesha, aandhi ki tara kyun aati ho?

PD: Sorry, woh, main samjhi keh aap meray baghair hi chal dey gey.

Prem: Meray baghair? What do you mean "meray baghair"? Main tumhe saath kab ley kar ja raha hoon?

PD: Liken Palchin Auntie ney kahaan hai key aap mujhe saath ley kar jaye gai.

Prem: Palchin, oh crap. Woh kabhi bhi apna yeh ache kaam karne wala role bandh nahin karti hai.

PD: Please, Uncle, Please. Dekhe agar aap mujhe ley kar chale gaye to main aap ko do din tak Khadoos Uncle nahin kahu gaye.

Prem(shocked): Tum mujhe kya kehti hoon?

PD(sheepishly): Oh, oops. Sorry, Main sab logo ko title dena. Par please Uncle, aap mujhe ley kar chale.

Prem(wearily): Jaana kahaan hai?

PD: Library. Wahaan Kuki Mausi aur Tanvi pehle sey hogi

Prem: Chalo. Gari main betho.

PD jumps up and down in excitement.

PD: Thank you. Thank you so much.

She runs up to Prem and gives him a hug.

Instantly, a wind starts blowing. The out-house where Mukti used to live is shown. A window is open and the wind travels inside. The room is filled with dust and obviously unoccupied. An old book is lying on the bed. Its pages fly open. Two pieces of a picture fall out. The picture had been torn right through the middle. Its pieces also look as if they had been dropped in water. Both pieces fly in the air and then land right next to each other, completing the picture. The picture of Mukti and Prem from when they danced together rejoins after seven years.

In the Driveway, Prem tears PD away from him.

Prem: Ok.Ok. No need to get too emotional. Ab chalo.

PD: Chale.

From the window, Prerna looks at the two of them and smiles sadly.

Scene 3- Inside the car. Prem is driving, PD is sitting besides him, wearing her seatbelt.

PD: Kya Mumbai ki library bahut bari hoti hai?

Prem: Haan, hoti hogi. Main kabhi gaya nahin hoon.

PD: Aap kabhi library nahin gaye?

Prem: I am not into books.

PD: Wow, mujhe to books bahut pasand hai.

Prem remembers Mukti reading books in her room.

Prem: Haan, main jaanta hoon, aise bhi ajeeb log hotay hai.

PD: To phir aap ko kis non-ajeeb cheezo ka shokh hai?

Prem smiles to himself and remembers how Prerna scolded him on the night before Sneha's wedding that he only liked to drink beer and dance around with slutty girls.

Prem: Believe me, behtar hoga keh tum.. Music mujhe music ka shokh hai.

PD: To phir aap radio laga dey.

Prem switches on the radio. He switches channels a bit and suddenly (big surprise there😉) "Kabhi Na Sukoon Aaya" comes on. Prem shuts the radio off with a manic urgency. His hands return to the steering wheel and clench it. He blinks back the rush of unwanted memories.

PD: Radio kyun bandh kiya?

Prem: Bilkul bekaar gaana tha. Kitna purana..

PD looks at him thoughtfully.

Prem: What?

PD: Kya aap kay khayal sey main bahut old hoon?

Prem: Huh?

PD: Old, you know, Buddhi.

Prem: Agar tum buddhi ho to Mother India kahaan jaingi?

PD: To main old nahin ho?

Prem: Of course not. You dont even come close.

PD: Par apne kahaan tha keh yeh gaana bahut purana hai, aur yeh gaana to ussi saal release hua tha, jis saal main peda hui thi. To agar yeh gaana old hai to main bhi old hoongi.

Prem: My God. So thats the year jab tumhare Maa Baap ney apna sar peeta hoga keh unhe aisi beti mili.

PD: Meray Papa- woh to hai hi nahin, par meri Mamma ney jab apna sar nahin pita tha, woh unhe nai baad main kiya, jab maine bolna start kiya.

Prem: Believe me, she has my full sympathies. Tumhare Papa nahin hai?

PD: Nahin. Par its Okay. I dont mind. Meri liye meri Mamma hi kaafi hai. Woh meri best friend hai.

Prem: Kyun, kya unhe kam suniye deta hai?

PD: Main itna bhi nahin bolti. Aur meri mummy is liye best friend hai, kyunki woh mujh sey har baat share karti hai, except kay meray Papa kaun hai. Aur phir, woh sirf 21 years ki to thi jab main paida hui.

Prem: 21 years, wow.

PD: Haan, ab to woh aap ke jitni hoongi.

Prem: Log itni choti umar main shaadi kaise kar letay hai.

PD(shrugging): Shayad unho hai kabhi shaadi nahin ki. Maine un sey kabhi poocha nahin.

Prem: Oh. Another one of those. Join the club, kid. All you have to do is get kicked from one house to another like a football and you are all set.

PD: Aap kya keh rahe ho?

Prem: Nothing. Tumhari library aa gaye hai. Woh rahi Kuki.

He pulls the car over. Kuki and Tanvi come up to their car. PD gets out and sticks her head through the car window.

PD: Bye- bye Khadoos I mean Prem Uncle. Thanks for the ride.

She grabs Tanvi's hand and they walk off together. Prem watches them leave.

And back in the Bajaj Out-house, the two pieces of the picture turn over. Written on the back of it, in almost washed-out ink are the words:

"Prem and Mukti Forever"

End of Episode

Next Epsiode: Sneha finds out.

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oh kool episode
u have seriously gt to continue
and that too real fast

Wow, that was super quick. Fastest feedback i have ever had. Thanks. I try to update regularly but sometimes things get too hectic.

nice update👏
prema is really sweet
u r a good writer u bring the scenes to life

awww that was very sweet! prema is a mix between prem and mukti, its great! cant wait to see what snehas reaction will be!

hey great update plzzz continue soon!!! it was a great update!

Originally posted by: raym

wow!!I LUVED IT...............CONTINUE SOON!!!

2 ryte, continue soon plz xxxxxxxxxx

Hey you guys, here's the next bit:

Episode Ten-Sneha Finds Out

Two days later. Bajaj House. Night. A clock shows the time to be around midnight. Prema is sitting on the sofa, reading a very thick book. Prem walks in, carrying his laptop bag and some files. He has obviously returned from work

Prem: Palchin! Palchin. Where are you? (he notices PD) Tum?

PD: Tum!

UD: Tum yaha par kya kar rahi hoon?

PD: dikta nahin, book par rahi hoon.

UD: Hall main?

PD: Haan. Tanvi opar apne kamray main so rahi thi to maine socha main yaahan a jaoon. Aap kahaan thay?

UD: Main office main tha. Aur tum itni der tak kyun jag rahi hoon?

PD: Aap itni der se kyun aaye?

UD: Mera ghar, meri marzi.

PD: To phir meri bhi marzi.

She shrugs and continues reading.

UD: Palchin!

PD looks up.

PD: Palchin Auntie yaahan par nahin haye.

UD: Excuse me?

PD: You are excused.

She turns back to the book.

UD: God, this kid. Then, where is Palchin?

PD: Oh, woh to so gaye. Aaj jab woh doctor kiya se aaye to unki tabiyaat theek nahin thi. To Big P ney kahaan keh unhe aaj jaldi sona chahaye.

UD: Oh crap, the one day i dont eat out is the day Palchin goes to bed early.

PD: Aapko bhuk lagi hai?

UD: Yes. Very much.

PD: Oh, kitchen us taraf hai. (she points in the direction of the kitchen)

UD: Maybe main kuch deliver kara loo.

PD: Aap fazool main apne paise kharch kare gaye.

UD(frustrated at the child passing judgement): Then what exactly should I do?

PD:(smiles mischeviously) Oh, kya main aap ko batana bhool gaye. Big P ney Birju Kaka sey kahaan tha keh woh aap ka khana table par hi chor dey.

UD(cranky): And now you tell me.

PD: Sorry, yeh nai book itni achi hai keh...

UD(sarcastically): Kaun si hai, "War and Peace"?

PD: Nahin, Russian novels library main thay hi nahin.

UD(getting crankier by the minute): Whatever. I am too hungry to deal with you and your craziness.

PD (shutting down her book): You know who you remind me of? Gabbar from Sholay. Woh bhi bilkul aap ki tara tha: Khadoos!

UD's mind jumps to the time when he compared Mukti to Basanti.

UD(now smiling at the memory): To tumhe bhi logo ko Sholay kay characters kay naam denay ki aadat hai.

PD: Haan. Aap kyun pooch rahe hai.

UD: Because I do the same thing.

PD: Acha. To aap ney kisse title diya tha?

UD: Apni ek dost ko. Main usse..

Prerna suddenly appears.

Prerna: Prema. Tu yahaan par kya kar rahi hai?

UD(at the same time):Basanti kehta tha,

Prema had turned towards Prerna when she heard her name. Its unclear whether she heard UD.

PD: Oh, sorry Big P. Mujhe neend nahin aa rahi thi, to maine socha keh main..

Prerna: Jaa. Tanvi kay kamray main jaa kar so jaa.

PD(resigned): Alright.

She walks away and goes up the stairs. She then turns.

PD: Good night Big P. Good night Gabbar Uncle.

Prerna looks at UD, searching for an explanation for the new nick-name.

UD(sighing): Believe me, you dont wanna know.

Scene 2. The next day . Bajaj House is getting ready for a puja. Prerna, Sneha, Doris, Palchin, PD, Tanvi, P2 and Krutika are all there. A pandit is standing by the altar.(I dont know if its correct term to use).

Pandit: Yeh pooja bacho kay ache bhaveshar kay liye. Is puja may maa ya pita ka apne bache kay saath hona bahut zaroori hai.

Scene changes to Satara. A lot of women are there in a big hall, where a Puja is being held. Mukti is also there.

Scene changes back to Mumbai.

Pandit: Muhrat ho giya. Puja sharoo kare.

Prerna gestures towards Doris, who steps forward and takes the thali.She places one hand on her stomach and starts the puja. A bhajan starts playing.PD is standing next to Prerna.

PD: Big P, big P, Prem uncle kahaan hai?

Prerna: Woh to apne kamray main hay.

PD: Oh.

PD leaves the room and starts climbing the stairs.

The Bhajan is still playing. The scene shifts to Mukti who is sitting in her own puja and some woman is doing the aarti.

Scene shifts to PD who is now going towards Prem's room.

Scene switches to Kuki and Tanvi who are now doing the puja.

Shifts back to PD who goes up to Prem. He is lying on the bed. She places her tiny hand in his large one and pulls him towards her.

Scene shifts to Mukti, who turns around as if she felt that something happend. She then steps forward to do the aarti.

The Bhajjan is playing faster now. Now P2 and Sneha are doing the puja.

Scene shifts back to PD and Prem. PD is pulling him towards the stairs. He is letting her, obviously amused by the stubborn little girl.

Scene shifts to Mukti, making her way towards the front.

Scene shifts to PD and Prem now entering the puja room. Sneha is handing over the thali to Palchin, when PD accidentially pushes Sneha and the thali flies in the air.....

Scene shifts to Mukti, who is now right beside the woman with the thali. She is reaching for it when she notices something has fallen on the floor, next to her feet. She bends down to pick it up....

The thali comes down in slow motion and is caught by both Prem and PD.

At that very instant, a wind blows where Mukti is and knocks the sindoor on the thali over, filling her maang.

PD makes a move to give the thali back to Palchin.

Prerna: Nahin, ab tu hi yeh puja kar laye.

PD and Prem, after throwing his mother a dirty look, start doing the puja. Sneha gives her mother a suspicious look.

Scene shifts back to Satara. Mukti gingerly places her hand on her head and sees the sindoor, she stares at her hand in disbelief.

Woman with the thali: Kitni ajeeb baat hai na, Mukti, abhi do minute pehle tak to koi hawa nahin thi aur abhi ek dum hawa ka yeh jhoka aa gaya. Acha, tm ja kar yeh sindoor dho lo.

Mukti smiles at the woman and turns around, absently making her way to the bathroom. She reaches it, opens the door and steps inside. She goes to the mirror. Staring at her own reflection, she thinks of the time Prem went on his knees and asked her to marry him. She closess her eyes and pictures her daughter's face. Her daughter who would never know who her father is. Then abruptly a picture of Palchin comes to her mind. Strenghtening her resolve, she reaches to wipe the sindoor off when her cellphone starts ringing. She puts a hand inside her bag and pulls it out.

Mukti: Hello

Scene cuts to Prema, who is cradling a large receiver in her hands. She is standing in the main hall and Sneha is sitting on the sofa flipping through a magazine.

PD: Mamma! Main PD bol rahi hoon.

Mukti: Hey kiddo, how are you?

PD: I am fine Mamma. How are you?

Mukti: Missing you a lot. Tu itna kam kyun phone karti hai?

PD: Sorry, Mamma. Main bhool jati hoon. Par aap kyun mujhe kabhi phone nahin karti?

Mukti(hastily changing the subject): Mumbai kaisa hai?

PD: Bahut acha. Mujhe itna mazaa a raha hai. Par main aap ko miss bhi kar rahi hoon.

Mukti: Really?

PD: Haan, main us din library main gaye thi. Maine socha keh agar aap hoti to kitna maza aata. Hum to har kam saath karte hain aur aaj main Mumbai aap kay baghair ghum rahi hoon.

Mukti: I am sorry, baby. Liken tumhe pata main a nahin sakti.

PD: Are you sure, Mamma?

Mukti: Very.

PD: Oh. khair. Aap hoti to bahut mazaa aata. Phir aap khadoos uncle sey bhi mil leti.

Mukti: Kis sey?

PD: Khadoos Uncle. Wohi jinho ney mujhe library par drop kiya tha. Big P kay betay.

Mukti: What? Tum unhe kya kehti ho?

PD: Oh Mamma, aap ko pata nahin yeh naam un ko kitna suit karta hai.

Mukti: Maine hi to rakha tha.

PD: Aap ne?

Mukti: Oh no beta. main kisi aur se baat kar rahi thi.

PD: Are you sure, Mamma. aap ko pata hai na keh mujhe jhoot pasand nahin hai?

Mukti: Of course I am sure. Acha, tujhe Prem Uncle kaise lage?

PD: Woh actually dil kay bahut achay hai par har waqt ghusse main rehte hai. Aur kabhi kabar bilkul meri tara act karte hain.

Mukti smiles at the thought of Prem and PD finally getting to know each other.

Prem's voice is heard in the background.

Prem: Who are you talking to?

PD: Main apni Mamma sey baat kar rahi hoon. Aap ko un sey baat karni hai?(She watches his expression closely.)

Prem: Main tumhari maa sey baat kar kar kya karunga.(He thinks a bit) Actually main un sey baat kar leta hoon, yeh to pata karun keh woh tumhe kaise sambhalti hai, i think we all need a few tips.

PD: Mamma, aap Prem uncle sey baat karo.

She thrusts the phone towards Prem.

Prem: Hello.

Mukti sighs softly into the receiver and then hangs up the phone.

Back to Prem, who looks a little uneasy. He gves the phone to PD.

Prem: Here. I think the phone got disconnected.

PD: Mamma ney aap se baat nahin ki, huh?

Prem: Listen. I have to go get some fresh air.

Sneha is watching the scene with a growing suspicion.

Scene 3.Bajaj House. Garden Prem is pacing furiously. His mind keeps jumping back to the woman on the phone.

Prem: How could just a woman's breath sound so familiar? What was about it that made me want to cry out? Oh God, Mother India aap ko bahut maanti hai.If you exist, Tell me why did it sound so familar? Who was the woman?

A wind starts blowing, Mukti's outhouse is shown where the two pieces of picture are still lying on the floor. The piece with Mukti flies in the air out of the open window and lands in front of Prem. He picks it up and puts it in his pocket, not realizing that God just answered his question.

Scene 4. Bajaj House. Main Hall. Sneha is standing and calling for Tanvi.

Sneha: Tanvi! Tanvi! tum kaho ho?

Tanvi appears outside, carrying a packet of pictures.

Tanvi: Sneha Mausi dekhe. Pictures develope ho kar aa gaye.

Sneha: Tanvi. Main tumhe kab sey dhund rahi thi.

Tanvi: I am sorry, Sneha Mausi par dekhe na pictures aa gaye.

Sneha: Acha dekhao.

Tanvi hands over the pictures to Sneha. She looks at them, most of them are of Tanvi and PD.

Tanvi: In mey sey ek mey PD aur P2 dono hai.

Sneha finds that picture. In it, PD is holding P2. The two girls are looking alike, despite the age diffference.

Tanvi: Dekhe na, Sneha Mausi, P2 aur PD kitne milte hai. Except un ki aankhein. P2 ki aankhein bilkul aap ki jaise hi hai aur PD ki Big P jaisi.

Sneha stares at the picture in shock.

Sneha(thinking): Oh my god, Tanvi saahin keh rahi hai. P2 aur PD bahut ek jaise lagte hai aur PD ki aankhein bilkul Mamma jaisi hai. Aur us din, PD mujhe Mukti ki yaad dela rahi thi. Is ka matlab hai keh. Oh my God, i dont believe ir. Yeh such to nahin ho sakta liken..

She runs up the stairs carrying the picture. she bursts into Tanvi's room where PD is reading a book.

PD: Sneha Mausi.. kya hua?

Sneha: PD, tera pura naam kya hai?

PD: Prema.

Sneha: No your full name. You first, middle and last name.

PD: Acha woh, thats Prema Sharma Deshmukh.

Sneha: Sharma Deshmukh?

PD: Haan.Deshmukh meri Mamma ka last name hai aur Sharma. Actually mujhe pata nahin keh Mamma ney mujhe yeh middle name kyun diya.

Sneha: Your mother. tumhare pass unki koi picture hai?

PD: Sure

She opens a drawer and pulls out a picture. In the picture, Prema has wrapped her arms around her mother's shoulders from behind. They are on one side of the picture, leaving the other side blank. She hands the picture to Sneha.

Sneha stares at the picture and a single tear rolls down her cheek.

Sneha: Mukti.

PD: Haan, Mukti Deshmukh.

End of Episode

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