Prema- A Prem Mukti FF(Ep18-19, Pg28) - Page 5

oh can't wait for it. do continue
Karrie

Hi Karrie.

I'm new here, and i've just red the episodes you have wrote. I must Say "WOW" it is wonderful,. <3

I start to see KasautiZindagiKI (this month) because of Prem (Manoj), i saw alot of episodes of KZK, from those last months in internet, and i couldn't fine Prem!! So i saw "episode"'s from 3 months ago in another homepage. I then saw Prem, but now I've found out that he has been changed out with some other guy. :(:( 😭




But I've a Q.: The thinks you have wrote, has it happend in real, ? Or is it just your imagination?

Froom Noor.

Hi Noor, Welcome to KZK Forum. Thanks for the praise!! 😳 😳

The things i wrote abt Mukti being alive all along and actually having Prem's daughter and Prerna meeting this daughter is all made-up. Thats my fan-fic which never took place. However during Mukti's narration, i mentioned a lot of scenes that actually took place, (eg Prem sleeping with Mukti and proposing to Mukti a million times.) But i used these scenes from another angle to show how Mukti had a child all along (which is not true)

If you want to see Prem's(Manoj) scenes, you have to come to the right place. Go to the sticky "Main Prem ki Deewani Hoon" on this forum. You will find every single one of his scenes there (including all the PM scenes i have mentioned as "flashes") 😉

oh and the page takes ages to load but dont get discouraged. Its worth it. 😛 😛

Hope it helped 😉

Oo, ok. Well you have done a very good job:P

When is the next epidoe coming?
And yes i have been in the "main Prem ki deewni hoon" forum. It's very good, I really searched for such a site.

😆

Here you guys, sorry I am late in updating. Here is:

Episode Eight-Prema meets Prem

I tried doing the first scene in script form but it didnt work out as it was getting stretched out and boring so I am just summarizing what happens:

Prerna agrees with Mukti that Prem will leave Palchin if he found out about Mukti. As Prerna is opposed to love ruining marriages, she decides that Mukti should stay in Satara and no one should find out about her. However Prerna wants Prema to visit Mumbai as she never got to see her son grow up, she wants to atleast be with her grand-daughter for a few weeks . Mukti, at first, refuses but then agrees after she realizes that even Prema wants to go and see Mumbai. Prerna also adds that no one should know who Prema really is.

Scene 2- The Good-bye scene.

Train station. Prerna and Tanvi are waiting with the luggage. Mukti and PD are a little far-off. Mukti is on her knees, talking to PD.

Mukti: Prema beta, are you sure you will be fine?

PD: I will be fine. Basanti, are you sure you will be fine?

Mukti: Prema, kitni baar bola hai keh mujhe Basanti nahin kaho..

PD: Basanti kitni baar bolo hai,keh mujhe Prema nahin kaho.

Prerna: Basanti? Yeh bhi tujhe..

PD: Haan, Nanoo kehte hai keh yeh Mamma ka nickname hai. Koi unhe pehle bhi Basanti ketha tha. Aur Mamma ko bilkul pasand nahin tha. To is liye jab Mamma mujhe Prema kehti hai main unne Basanti kehti hoon.

Prerna: Par ab to tum apni Mamma sey door ja rahi ho, kya tum unhe mis nahin karogi?

PD: Haan karoogi na. Main apni best friend ko kaise nahin miss karoogi. I will miss you Mamma and Basanti.

She clutches her mother tightly. Mukti repeatedly kisses her.

Mukti: I will miss you too, kiddo.

She steels herself and wipes the tears from her face, releasing her daughter.

Mukti: Is ka khayal rakhiye ga, Choti Ma. she is all I have got.

Prerna reaches over and takes Prema's hand.

Prerna: Tu is ki fikaar mat kar. Tujhe paala hai, teri beti ko bhi sambhall loon gi. Tu bas apna khayal rakhna.

Mukti: Bye Choti Ma.

A horn blows. They hug and Prerna signals to a porter, who carries the luggage inside the train. Prerna enters the train, holding each of the girls' hand.

PD: Bye Mamma. Bye Basanti.

The trains goes away as Mukti waves. Slowly Mukti puts her hand down

Mukti: Bye PD. you have no idea keh main tumhe kitna miss karoogi.

Scene 3- Prema meets Prem.

Bajaj house. Koki is bustling around, preparing for Tanvi's return and Sneha is helping her. Prem appears on the stairs.

Koki: I cant believe it. Woh do din keh liye gai nahin, aur main us keh aane ka be saabiri sey intizar kar ne lagi. Yeh betiyan bhi na..

Sneha: Tum saahin keh rahi ho. Mera khud P2 kay baghair kahin maan nahin lagta. Pata nahin Tanvi ki dost, Prema, ki maa nay usse humare paas kaise aane diya hoga.

Prem: Wait a minute.. Tum yeh keh rahi hoon keh Mother India ney ek aur bache ko godh le liya hai. This is hilarious. Kya unho nay is ghar main bacho ko count nahin kiya tha, jo ek aur ghar laye aaye. Population barhane. Seriously, India ki abaadi control main aaye na aaye, Bajaj House main population hamesha increase hi karegi.

Sneha: Prem. Ek choti si bachi hi to hai.

Prem: You know me, Sneha, I don't like kids.

Sneha shakes her head in frustration and Kuki glares at him but they both resume their work.

Suddenly Tanvi bursts into the house and runs towards Kuki.

Tanvi: Mummy, Mummy, I am home.

She hugs Kuki.

Kuki: Kaisi thi tu? Maine tumhe both miss kiya.

Tanvi: I missed you too. (She looks at Sneha) Hi Sneha Mausi.

Sneha: Hi Tanvi. Teri Big P kahaan hai?

Tanvi: Woh bahar hai. PD kay saath.

Scene shifts to Prerna who is standing outside the front door. PD is next to her.

Kasauti's title song's music starts playing.

Prerna pushes the door open. She steps in holding PD's hand.

Song plays- zindagi kya hai jaise

Flash of the time Prerna kicked Prem out of the house(first time)

yeh jaado ka ek khilona hai

PD steps inside the house, focus on her feet as they cross the threshold

Hasai bhi

Focus on Prem who is watching the scene, smiling cynically.

Rolaye bhi

Flash of the scene when Mukti is crying as she watches PD go.

Banae bhi...bigare bhi

PD stares at the house in wonder

Laati hai jinko kareeb yeh...

Flash of the scene when Prem and Mukti fall on the bed, and then focus on PD, who steps towards Prem.

Door unko ley jaye woh..

PD abruptly stops.

Sab raab ki hai marzi...

PD continues to look st the house in wonder.

Kasauti zindagi kay...

Flash of Prem smiling, then of Mukti crying

Kasauti zindagi kay.

The screen would show Prema in the middle with both of her parents on her either side, all separated by dividers.

Focus shifts to Tanvi, who runs towards PD and drags her towards her mother.

Tanvi: Dekh PD, main tumhe saab sey milati hoon. Yeh meri Mamma hai.

She indicates Kuki. Kuki turns to PD.

Kuki: Hey PD.

PD: Hello, Kuki Auntie.

Kuki: Tum mujhe Kuki Mausi bolao

Prerna smiles as she hears this and remembers how Kuki hated being called "Kuki Di" by Mukti.

Tanvi takes PD to Sneha.

Tanvi: Aur yeh Sneha Mausi hai.

PD: Kya main aap ko bhi Sneha Mausi bolao?

Sneha: Of course. Main agar Tanvi ki Mausi ho, to tumhari kyun nahin.

Tanvi now drags PD onwards.

Tanvi: Chalo main tumhain bakhi keh logo sey milati hoon. Doris Mami, Palchin Mami.

PD stops and looks at Prem, who is watching the scene, amused

PD: Tanvi, woh kaun hai?

Tanvi makes a face.

Tanvi: Woh. Woh Prem uncle hain. Tum unko..

She stops as PD breaks off and runs and dashes up the stairs towards Prem, who looks surprised as if he cannot comprehend where this little whirlwind has come from:

PD: Hi, I am PD.

UD: UD. My name is UD.

PD: Par Tanvi ney to aap ka naam Prem bataya tha.

UD: Aur Sneha nai tumhara naam Prema.

PD: Liken mujhe Prema naam pasand nahin hai.

UD: Aur mujhe Prem naam sey chir hai.

PD: To phir aap ka naam Prem kyun rakha?

UD(now irritated): Mother India sey poocho. Tumhara naam Prema kyun rakha?

PD: Meri Mamma sey poocho. Aap ko Prem naam kyun pasand nahin hai?

UD(visibly uncomfortable with the question): God, enough with the questions. Itne chote bacho ko itne saray sawaal nahin poochney chahiye.

PD: Par hum ab nahin poooche gaye to kab poochey gaye. Aap ki umar main to yaadash chali jati hai na.

UD: Mother India. Yeh aap kya utha kay ley aaye. Main to yaahaan sey ja rahoon. I can't deal with kids.

He walks back up the stairs into his room.

PD watches him go.

PD: Kharoos! Kharoos Uncle!

End of Episode

Hope you liked it.

Dont forget to comment!😉

outstanding episode. 👏
and finally. was waiting
4 this update.
can't wait till basanti comes to mumbai again
and when UD finds out that PD is his daughter
hurry up and post the next part soon

haha like father like daughter! great part, continue soon!

Thanks, you guys!!! I am really glad you liked it. 😳 😳

So what do you guys think so far of Prema(the child)aka PD?

i think that she is just like her dad
wonder if he will eva notice that she is his
daughter

hey that was a great update! plzzz continue soon!!!