Ok, the story basically starts where P2 and Krutika are a year old. The second leap hasnt happened yet.Everything is as it was pre- leap except that Prem is played by Manoj.😳
Note: I can actually picture the episode as I write, therefore I am writing a script version of it. I have tried to keep the characters and dialogues as close as possible to Ekta's shows, so dont mind the melodrama.
List of Characters:
Prerna Bajaj:A year has passed since Prerna killed Anurag. She still hates love for it has devastated not only her life but also her children's especially her son, Prem.
Sneha Bajaj: Recently widowed, Sneha has deal to with the responsibilties of work as well as caring for her year-old daughter, P2.
Prem Sharma Basu (played by Manoj Bohra): Prem is still in love with his ex-lover Mukti who died in a car crash. He is also married to a woman named Palchin
Palchin Basu (played by the old Palchin aka Kasturi): Palchin is in love with her husband Prem and pregnant with his child.
Mukti Deshmukh (played by Tina Parekh): Mukti apparently died in a car crash. A month after her death, her look-alike appeared on the scene but she too suddenly left. The mystery behind the Mukti-Devki saga will finally be solved.
Prema Sharma Deshmukh: She is a six- year- old girl that Prerna meets.
Playing small roles:
Koki Bajaj
Tanvi: her five year old daughter
Doris Bajaj
P2
Krutika
The story starts:
Scene 1
Bajaj House(main living room)
Prerna walks in the room, holding Krutika. She is on the phone and is about to hang up. Enter Sneha, carrying P2
Sneha: Good morning Mamma. Good morning Krutika. (she smiles and plays with her niece)
Prerna(hanging up the phone): Good morning, Sneha. Aur hamari chhoti Prerna ki raat kaisi rahee?
Sneha: Bilkul theek. Pate hay Mamma, P2 ne mujhe bilkul taang nahin kia.
Prerna: Woh is liye kyunki saree Prerna achi hoti hai. (She kisses P2)
Sneha: umm, Mamma ,mujhe kal raat office se mail aiee thi. Mujhe kal subha Satara mein kaam hai. So main aaj raat P2 ke saath Satara ja rahi hoon.
Prerna: Tum kaam karogi ya aisey sambhalo gee. Chalo, main or Krutika bhi tumhare saat chalte hain.
Sneha: Agar aap chali gaye to Palchin aur Doris Bhabhi ka khayal kaun rakhe ga?
Koki enters from behind her and says: Woh tum mujh par char do. Liken meri ek shart hai. Tumhain apne saath Tanvi ko bhi le jana hoga. Woh kab se zid kar rahe hai keh koi usse kaheen ghoomne jana hai.
Sneha: Shart manzoor hai Di. To,Mamma hum aaj raat ki flight se nikal jaye gai. Ok?
Prerna: Ok
Scene 2:
Still the Bajaj House.
Prerna is sitting on the sofa. Prem walks in and goes right past her.
Prerna: Prem!
Prem stops but doesnt turn around.
Prerna continues: Prem kal Palchin ho clinic le jana hai. Main nahin ho gi. Kya tum....
Prem cuts her off: Dekhaye Mother India, mujh se yeh hospital kay chakkar nahin lagte. Besides, us ke saath Koki aur Doris bhi to hoon gi. So, why does she need me?
Prerna: Liken beta, woh tumhari patni hai, tumhari...
Prem cuts her off again: Listen Mother India, I am not in a mood for bhashan. Mujhe office ka bahut kaam hai.
He walks on. Prerna stares after him, thinking.
Tu mujh par hi gaya hai, Prem. Apne dil ka dard kaam se halka karne ki koshish kar raha hai.
Scene 3:
Satara
Prerna is sitting on a bench in the park. P2 and Krutika are on a sandbox nearby and Tanvi is standing nearby.
Prerna: Acha Tanvi beta, main yahi bethi hoon, aap jaa kar swings par khel lo.
Tanvi: Ok,Big P.
She kisses Prerna and leaves.
Prerna smiles after her and then pulls out a three pictures frame out of her bag. The three pictures are of Kasak(old one aka Kaajal), Prem (the first one) and Mukti.
Prerna smiles and strokes the picture on the left, of Prem 1. Prerna's thoughts:
Jab bhagvan ney mujh se tujhe cheen liya, to main bahut taarpi thi, liken phir bhagvan ne tujhe lauta diya, tere bhai Prem ke roop main.
Prerna then strokes the picture on the right and thinks
Kasak, tu meri zindagi gi thi, woh kari jo mujhe Mr. Bajaj kay saath jorti thi. Tu chali to gaye liken meray pass teri aakhiri nishaani hai. Teri Krutika hai.
Prerna then looks at the picture in the middle. She touches and thinks:
Liken Mukti, tu to apni Chhoti Maa ko bilkul akela chhor gaye. Yeh nahin socha keh teri Chhoti Maa tere baghair kya karengi. Agar tujhe jaana hi tha to apne koi parchaye chor jaati jis kay saaharay hum jee paatay. Kaash, Mukti, teri is duniya main koi parchaye hoti.
Just then a voice interrupts her thoughts. We cannot see the speaker, her face is blocked by Mukti's picture.
Child's voice: Excuse me, please
Prerna looks up and put the frame down. Replacing Mukti's picture in her line of vison is the face of a cute little girl. She is about six. She is dressed in light blue shorts and a T-shirt and is wearing cute little pink sunglasses. She flicks her bangs impatiently out of her eyes and then presses her sunglasses against the bridge of her nose, exactly the way Mukti did. She points to a red ball lying near Prerna's feet.
Little Girl: Can I have the ball, please?
Prerna: Of course, beta, whats your name?
The little girl once again flips her bangs out of her face and extends her fist towards Prerna in an all too familiar fashion for every premika. There are two large rings on her fingers with letters carved on them.
Little Girl: PD. My name is PD.
End of Episode One.
Ok.... please comment on this and tell me if its any good and whether I should update. Sorry if its too long. I wanted to end it right.
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