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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey great update plzzz continue soon!!!
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Hey everyone, here's Episode 5:

Prerna is shown facing a small house's front door. Next to her is Tanvi clutching PD's ball. Prerna rings the bell.

Tanvi: Big P, Big P, aap ney to kahaa tha keh hum PD ki ball guard ko de dege, to hum yahaan par kyun aaye hai?

Prerna: Woh is liye kyunki mujhe PD ki Mummy sey milna hai.

Tanvi: Yay, aap PD ki Mummy sey milna aur PD sey miloogi. Mujhe usse bahut saray sawal poohney hai jaise keh woh aaj park main kyun nahin aaye.

Prerna's thoughts: Sawal to mujhe bhi bahut poochney ney hai.

She rings the bell again and someone is heard running from inside. The door opens and PD looks out, she recognizes them and starts shouting.

PD: Mujhe pata tha keh aap Mumbai jaane sey pehle aao gaye. Mamma, Mamma dekho kaun aaya hai!

Mukti comes from inside the house.

Mukti: Prema, main ney mana kya tha keh aap aak bilkul nahin bhaaage gi. Phir bhi....

She stops and looks at Prerna.

Mukti: Mrs. Bajaj. aap yahaan par kya kar rahi hai?

Prerna: PD ki ball park main reh gaye thi. Main usse laotane aaye thi.

Tanvi hands over the ball to PD.

PD: Meri ball mil gaye! Thank you Tanvi.

Mukti: PD, aisa karo Tanvi ko apna kamra dekhao. Mrs. Bajaj, aap andar aaye na.

They walk inside the house. The living room is filled with pictures of PD. PD and Tanvi disappears inside PD's bedroom.Prerna walks over and picks up one of the pictures.

Mukti: Mrs. Bajaj, aap kuch leye gi, chai coffee?

Prerna: Uski koi zaroorat nahin. Tu kaisi hai..Muk..Devki?

Mukti: main bilkul theek hoon. PD keh rahi thi keh aap keh saath pehle do chhoti bachiyaan bhi thi. Woh kaun thi?

Prerna: P2 aur Krutika. Sneha aur Kasak ki betiyaan.

Mukti's face breaks into a smile.

Mukti: Sneha aur Kasak.... woh dono kaise hain?

Prerna: Sneha to saahin hai liken Kasak... woh is duniya main nahin rahi.

Mukti's eyes widen with shock and then fill with tears. She is obviously grieving.

Prerna's thoughts: Devki nay kabhi bhi Kasak ko nahin dekha tha.. ussey is baat par itna odaas nahin hona chahaye. liken Mukti ney to Kasak kay saath apna bachpan guzaara tha..

Prerna: Tu theek to hain?

Mukti: woh aise kaise. Woh to mujh sey bhi choti thi. Ab woh is duniya main hi nahin hai..

Prerna: Tujhe kaisa pata keh woh tujh sey choti thi? tu to us sey kabhi milee bhi nahin thi.

Mukti: Haan.. liken..

Just then, the girls come running into the room. Tanvi rushes up to Prerna.

Tanvi: Big P, Big P. Aap ko pata hai keh PD ka favourite colour red hai. Aap ko yaad hai keh pehle aap ko bhi yeh colour kitna pasaand tha?

PD: Red mera favourite colour is liye hai kyunki woh meri Mamma ka favourite colour hai. Aur on ki Ma ka bhi favourite colour laal tha. Right Mamma?

Mukti: Yeah, you are right. Acha ab tum apne kamray main jaoon.

PD: Nahin.pehle aap mujhe baatain keh Big P aap ko kaise jaanti hai?

Prerna: Tujhe kisney kahaan keh main teri Mamma ko pehle sey jaanti hoon?

PD: kyunki us din park main aap ney un ka naam liya tha... aap nay unhe Mukti kahaan tha. Batiye na, Big P, aap Mamma sey pehle kahaan milee thi?

Prerna looks at Mukti, who averts her face. PD rushes towards Prerna and once again trips and falls in front of Prerna. Prerna catches her at the last moment, and they are face-to-face. Both their eyes are shown, whcih are the exact same shade of gray-brown.

PD: Aare Big P, aap ki aankhein to bilkul meri jaisi hain.

Mukti closes her eyes and opens them again. Her voice is filled with emotion.

Mukti: PD, please apne kamray main jaoo.

PD shrugs and then grabs Tanvi's hand and they both go back inside. Mukti stares after them and refuses to look at Prerna. Prerna comes up from behind her.

Prerna: Tu kab tak yeh jhoot bolti rahegi? Main bhi jaanti hoon aur tu bhi keh sach kya hain. Mukti, kyun kiya tu nain aisa. Kyun door rakha apne aap ko. Aur yeh bachi, yeh Prem ki beti hain na. Aur phir bhi tu nay kisi ko bataya kyun nahin?

They are both crying. Prerna grabs Mukti from behind and shakes her.

Prerna(shouting): Kyun? Kyunk Mukti kyun dor rakha tu ne Prem ki beti ko Prem sey aur meri beti ko mujh sey. Kyun ghar waapas nahin aaye? Tu jaanti hai, teray baghair Prem... Mukti, main jaanti hoon keh tum Mukti ho! Tu Mukti hain na? Aur yeh Prem ki beti hai na? Jawab dey!

Mukti falls on the floor, she is finally broken.

Mukti: Haan Choti Ma, main hi Mukti hoon. Aur Prema meri aur Prem ki hi beti hai. Aap saahin keh rahi hai. Liken..

she wipes the tears from her face.

Mukti: main Mumbai waapas kabhi nahin aa sakti hoon.

End of Episode.

Next Week: Why Mukti pretended to be Devki

Sorry if its too short. I am seriously sleepy right now.

Dont forget to comment!😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsomw 👏
If I had money I would make Mukti Prem kzk again.now jaldise old Palchin ke lie ek naya pati lekar ao or PM ke shadi karado 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow i cant wait to find out muktis story! and cant wait till prem finds out!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow, cnt wait to find out her story
i think it has something got to do with komo and debo
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was very good !! cnat wait until u update agin!!
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ohhh wow .... i read alll episodes 2day ...... 😃 😃
it s really awesome ff ..... 😛 😛 😛
plz do update it asap .... 😳 😳 😳

i ll b eagrly waiting ...... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey great update plzz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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LOVE your fanfic = ) It's amazing. Please continue soon. And if you can try to update more often. I'll be eagerly waiting for the update.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey you guys, I am so sorry i couldnt update earlier, I got sick on Friday. I will try to be more regular. (hmm, maybe i should get a substituite😉).

Note: This is a two-part episode because the entire story is too big to be in one piece. And it has a lot of old scenes in it but as most of them are during Prem and Mukti era, I am sure none of you Premikas will have any trouble remembering them.

Anyway, here's the:

Sixth Episode- where Mukti tells all:

Mukti's voice in the background narrates:

Choti Ma, aap to jaanti thi keh Prem aur maine Pamcheshwar main Valentine's Day ki raat saath guzaari thi.

Flash of the night when Prem and Mukti sleep together is shown.

Main samajh rahi thi keh woh bhi mujh sey pyar karta hai liken phir mujhe pata chala keh usne to kabhi mujh pyar kiya hi nahin.

Flash of the scene when Prem warns Mukti not to interfere.

Aur phir us raat, party main Sharad ney....

Flash of the rape scene are shown.

Main bilkul tooth chuki thi. Choti Ma. Liken phir aap ney mera saath diya. mujhe himaat di. Mujhe laga key main phir sey ji paoon gi, phir sey lar paoon gi.

Flashes of Prerna, shielding Mukti, yelling at Sharad on the roof of the half-constructed building.

Phir us din jab Sneha hosiptal main thi aur mera accident hua, aap mujhe hospital ley kar gaye. Jab aap kamray sey bahar gaye to meray pass ek doctor aaya jisne mujhe kahaan keh main maa banay wali hoon.

Choti Ma, mera dil to chaha keh main aap ko tabhi bata doon liken jab main room sey bahar gaye, maine aap ko Mr. Bajaj key pass dekha. Aap ko Sneha kay kamray main jaane tak ki ijazat nahin thi. Meri wajay sey aap key saare rishtey chin gaye thay. Main aap par yeh ek aur bojh nahin daal sakti thi.Maine socha, ek baar sach ko samney aa jaane do, main aap ko is bache kay baray main bata doongi.

Flash of the scene where the court convicts Sharad for raping Mukti.

Liken is sach kay saamney aane se Sneha ka bacha us sey chih giya. Mr. Bajaj ney apne bhai ko kho diya aur Prem.. mujhe pata chala keh Prem ney sach jaante huay bhi Sharad ka saath diya, meray baladkari ka saath diya. Choti Ma, main jaanti thi keh aap keh dukh abhi khatam nahin huay hain. aur main nahin chahti thi keh aap ko is bachay ki waja sey, meri waja sey aur pareshaani ho.

Scene of Prerna and Bajaj when they see Sneha crying in her room is shown.

Aur phir aap hi nai to mujh sey kahaan tha keh aap mujhe ek aur Prerna nahin banay deygi. Aur main kiss moon sey aap ko batati keh main ek aur Prerna ban chuki hoon. Main bhi ussi mor par khari hoon, jahaan tees saal pehle aap khari thi.

Flash of the scene when Prerna tells Mukti not to be another Prerna and then another scene when Prerna finds out she is pregnant with Prem 1.

Jab Prem ney mujhe propose kiya, Mera dil to chaha keh main haan kar do. Liken woh mujh sey pyar naihin karta that, Choti Ma aur agar main us sey shaadi kar leti to woh kabhi khush nahin reh paata. Aur meray andar ek darr bhi tha keh shayad yeh bacha Prem ka nahin balke Sharad ka ho. Aur main nahin chahti thi keh Prem mujh par taraas kha kar, kisi aur keh bachay ko apna naam dey.

Flash of the scene when Mukti rejects Prem on the opening night.

Liken main ghar chor kar nahin gaye, kyunki meray dil main ek choti si umeed thi keh shayad Prem bhi mujh sey kabhi...

Flash of the scene when Prem and Mukti are working on the project and bang their heads together and smile at each other.

Magar Prem ki zindagi main Debonita aa gaye aur jab maine un dono ko saath dekha..

Flash of the scene when Mukti walks into the room and Prem and Debonita are in bed together.

Aur phir un ki sagaai ki khabar sooni, mera andar kuch tooth giya. Main ab aur Prem ka intizar nahin kar sakti thi, woh to kissi aur ka hogya tha. Maine Baba ko sab kuch bata diya aur wahaan sey chali gaye. Maine aap ko tak sach nahin bataya kyunki agar main aap ko batati to aap Prem ko mujh sey shaadi karne par majboor kar deti aur woh to mujh shaadi karna hi nahin chahta tha.

Scene of Prem and Mukti when Mukti is about to leave the Bajaj House.

Main aur Baba Satara aa gaye. Liken meray dil kay andar hamesha woh darr tha keh shayad Prem is bachay ka pita na ho. Phir maine Prema ko janam diya. Aur us din jab maine apni beti ki aankhein pehli baar dekhi, mera saara darr chala gaya. Kyunki us ki aankhein bilkul aap jaise thi. Us ki Dadi jaise. Maine us ka naam Prema rakha, Prerna aur Prem ko mila kar.

A scene is shown where Mukti is lying on a hospital bed and has a small baby in her arms. She raises the baby to her face and kisses it.

Mukti: Prema. Main tera naam Prema rakhoogi.

Jab Prema ek saal ki thi, main use ley kar Mumbai aaye. Liken mujhe pata chala keh aap jail main hain aur Prem nay Sir ki saari property kabzaali. Mujhe pata bhi nahin tha keh Sneha aur bakhi log kahaan hai. Maine aap se jail main milney ki koshish ki, liken mujhe pata chala keh aap kissi sey nahin milna chahti.

Flash of the scene when Prerna announces she doesnt want anyone to visit her in jail.

Main Satara waapas aa gaye aur maine khud sey waada kiya keh main waapas nahin jaaon gi. Liken main waapas gaye. Mujhe jaana para.

End of Episode

Hope you liked it!😊

Edited by Karrie - 18 years ago

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