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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow 😳 falling in luv in first sight that also UD 😆 😳 gr8 👏 👏 👏 cont.soon jus loved it alot 😛 😛 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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RECAP: Prem falls in love with Mukti at first sight, he looses the challenge to his mother, Mukti & prem meet first time and prena has found out that Prem loves Mukti.

Prena walk into Sneha's room and told her about Prem's behaviour towards Mukti and asks her that to ask prem about all this as she knows that Prem will only talk to his sister. Sneha becomes shocked at first thinking that her brother has fallen in love with her best friend and sister but also happy that her brother has returned as PREM. She agrees to ask Prem about the situation. Prena thanks her and goes out the room leaving an EXCITED sneha to deal with the haalat and is now waiting for her bro to come back.

Meanwhile, Prem is at the beach looking at the sea, dreaming about Mukti. He dreams of her in a red saare . The song na tum jaano na hum 4rm Kaho Na Pyaar Hain (just had to do it. Hrithik Roshan is my fav actor) is playing in the background. He dreams of Mukti being their by his side (just like Amisha is with Hrithik in the song) all the way home. On reaching home, he skips inside happily through the door and was on his way up the stairs until he comes infront of mother india.

Pr - prena
P - prem

Pr: beta why are you so happy? kahin woh aunty tumhare kuch diya hain kya humko marne ke liya? yaa kuch to howa hain? she said smiling.
Prem just stand there looking at his mother smiling away. he pulled her in a hug and said
P: ma
Prena was beyond shocked. The words he had just uttered from his lips, how desperate she was to hear them.
Pr: prem beta, kya howa?
P: mom, i lost the challenge today because i understood the meaning of my name - PREM. u know that it is just a BIG coincidence that i happen to be in PREM, LOVE. u wanna who?
Pr: kaun beta?
P: won't tell you, u have to guess first and if you get it rite then i shall become Prem for the rest of my life which means that no drinking beer every time, NO more flirting with girls and bringing them home (which i never used to when i moved into this house) and no more calling dad basu dad basu, okay?
Pr: okay beta. now lemme see, who could you be in love with. it can't be MUKTI by any chance now can it? no not mukti, she's not the one for him.............
P: MOTHER INDIA? WHAT DO YOU MEAN "SHE'S NOT THE ONE"? OF CORSE SHE IS THE ONE. I HAVE FALLEN IN LOVE WITH YOUR DAUGHTER. wait that means that she is my sister. OMG. mother india why didn't you tell me this before?
Pr: who said that she is MY daughter. yeah she is but before that, she is my god-daughter buddu. my GOD-DAUGHTER. understand wht i mean by saying that
P: oh god-daughter.
Pr: yes, god-daughter.
P: yeah, i understand mom.
Pr: good, now i thought that you were NOT gonna tell me but tell ur sister sneha all this. she already knows that you are in love with Mukti. Let me tell you this right now, Mukti and Sneha are really close friends and are more like sisters and mukti is really close to this family as well as DAD BASU'S family, so if you eva do anything bad to her, then you will surely loose your right in this house and basu house. Samjha?
P: yes yes mother india oh sorry ma
Prena felt happy that he was calling her ma and so was sneha who had heard everything from the top of the stairs. she was happy that she got her brother back and her mom got the son she always wanted. All she had to do now as tell this to mukti and ask her if she herself was in love with prem or not.

Prem headed upstairs while prena went to go phoen up Mr.Bajaj and Anurag telling them the good news about her son. In the hallway upstairs, prem found sneha standing there and grinning away. He knew that she found out 4rm mother india and he hugged her in such a way that she was smiling and grinning even more.

P: u knw sister, i am SO happy today. I've fallen in love with the girl of my dreams and she is close to you.
S: i know prem. i am happy as well, i have my brother back and ma has her son back. This family has the son back that they always wanted. All i have to do is just tell this to Mukti and find out if she loves you or not.
P: no sneha don't tell her. I want to find out myself, but I need yours and mother india's help. I already asked mother india for help and she agreed so just need yours. Please help me. After all, I am your lil brother.
he put on a cute puppy face which Sneha couldn't resist, so she agreed to help him. After that prem went to his room and sneha to hers.

In his room, he was dreaming about Mukti, wondering that if she felt the same way or not. he couldn't help but smile at the thought of her. Just then, Anurag walked into the room with Mr.Bajaj and Prena. Prem looked at them smiling and went to them. Anurag embraced his son so tightly that Prem could do nothing but the same. he had finally found his family, found his mother and father(s), his sister and most importantly, the woman of his dreams. Anurag let go of Prem so that Mr.Bajaj could hug him. he too gave prem a tight hug and prem returned it with pleasure. Anurag and Prena were standing behind smiling happily. Mr.Bajaj let go of prem and said

MB - Mr.Bajaj
A- Anurag
Pr - prena
P - prem

MB: prem beta, we are so glad you are back.
A: haan beta. mujhe khushi hain is baat ki ke mera beta wapas aagaya hain mere pas. Hum sab kuch jante hain prem. Prena ne humko phone kiya tha aur hum dono ne sab kuch bata diya tumhare bare mein, ki tumne badal gaya hain aur .......haan, tumhe to pyaar hogaya hain woh bhi Mukti ki saat.
Prem blushed when Anurag said that
Pr: haan beta, aab mujhe lagta ki humhe ek party rakna chahiye, kyun Mr.Bajaj, Anurag?
MB: haan prena. mujhe to bhi yahi lagraha hain.
A: haan prena. Prem, aapna kyaar rakna haa.
P: yes.......dad
Anurag started to cry when prem said "dad". He too felt as if the long-lost son that he wanted had come back to him.

P: aab dad, why are you crying?
A: nothing son, this tears of happiness. My son called me dad for the first time. I wanted to hear those words for so long from you.
P: oh dad, now you will be hearing only these words from me okay, so NO more crying.
A: okay beta. Aab mein chalta hoon.
P: hey dad, do you mind if i come with you.......... u know.........to your house for a while. Mukti is not here and i have nothing else to do.
A: oh, so Mukti is not here, that's why u want to come?
Prem got embarrassed at that while Anurag, Prena & Mr.Bajaj laughed.
A: yeah okay. It will be nice if my son came round to his house. DO NOT forget Prem, that it IS YOUR house as well.
P: okay okay dad now can we go please?
A: yeah come on. Prena, Mr.Bajaj, hum chalte hain and they (Anurag & Prem) exited out of the room.
Pr: Bye Anurag, bye beta
P: by mom bye daddy kool
MB: bye beta.
With that Anurag and Prem headed downstairs, out of the house and into the car off to Basu Residence.
Edited by Patel 1993 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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okay guys need at least 5 comments for today's update. please comment guys. really need your feedback to know whether i should continue or not
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😊 😛 😆
Please carry on and it was really good...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow.. juz read ur ff.. its realli good and i luv it
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
hey that wasa great update just started reading! ITS realllyyyyyy gud! plzzzz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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need 2 more comments to the max. please comment guys. pretty please
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Posted: 18 years ago
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both the parts are very well written 👏 👏 great job 👏 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#19
wow loved this part 😳 😳 gr8 👏 👏
cont.soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks for all the comments. i shall continue tomorrow. til then intazar kijiye

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