luv birdz ff PG 31 Part 21 UPDATED - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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plz.. continue soon.. its awesome! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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herz the next part
thaNX FOR ALL COMMMENTS
mukti saw a shawdow wandring around her room. mukti was really scared she was walking slowly to peek thruogh the curtain. suddnly the shadow dissappears. mukti took a deep breath and lift the curtain slowly ans she looked outside. she saw no one. she took a deep breath of relief ans smiles at herself thingkin how crazy she id and darpok toooooo 😆
when mukti turned arounfd she was shocked it was guy behaind her who she cant see really well. she turned white as she saw sdome kind of ghost. she was about to scream when that guy put his hand on he mouth and dragged her to her bed. it was prem. mukti didnt get to know and she closed her eyez.
prem: preomise me u wont scream i will lt u go
mukti who was scared to death didnt recognized the prem's voice and she nodded her head with close eyez.
prem remove his hand he was still on top of mukti. he was watching her as he neva saw a gurl be4. mukti was unaware of all this with closed eyez and brething heavily. prem wiped to little tear that was fallin aside frm her eye and
prem: mukti!
mukti opened her 1 eye and she was shocked.
mukti: tum???????? is waqt yahan kya kar rahe ho? plzjao yahan se plz nahinto mom will kill me.
mukti stated to get hyper and start grab him toward the open windoe.prem who was bearing all this and getting angry on her. pull her towards him .
pre,: jkyun sehti ho yeh sab???? batao?
mukti got tears in her eyes.she want some 1 to console her. prem let her go and she went to her bed and sit on the floor and start crying. prem who was watching all this felt a little guilty and he sits beside her.
prem: mukti u r a really nice gurl and tum meri dost ho i wa just getting worried about u bcz u werent comeing to college.
mukti told him everything
prem: wat the hell??????? i think ur mom is out of ur mind well meain kuch karta hoon. and he put his hand on mukti's hand. mukti whoi was crying stops and look at him and her angele eye prem was lost in them for a second.



wat will prem do now??????????????
well dat's it for now guyz
i have to go somewhere.
i will post next part tommrrow
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
thanks for the update, cont. soon! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
thats awsome so gud plz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
so short but it was good.........continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guyz tahnx for the gr888888888888888888 comments i am getting to many views but that many replies plz give me some feedback and and other thatn dat thanx for vieiwng my fanfic and thanx to leave the comments
here d next part its gonaa be not toooooooooo short but not too big either. 😆

herez the next part.
prem decided to do something for his fren mukti. he was at his house thinkingfor some ideas suddnly he emebers soemthing. he take out his cell and dialed some1. he did some conversation with the person which we can't hear and then he hang up and he has a cute smile of releif on his face.

next day in morning. mukti is doing some work in the kitchen. susddenly the door bell rings. mukti aata gonndh rahi hai and her hand are all dirty she is not able to open the door . mukti calls out of her step mom to open the door. mukti's mom opens the door wiht am angry face. and we see a lady in light pink saari with some books in her hand and she has glasses. it none other than anu frm ek ladki anjanii si{ gueast appearance}.

anu: namaste. kya yeh mukti deshmukh ka ghar hai?
mom with confused look: haan
anu: kya woh ghar pe hain main usse milna chahti hun.
mom with a fake smile but angry voice: kyun kis khushi mein?
anu makes a confused face : actully main uske chemistery teacher hoon. actully woh kayee dino se college nahin ayee to college wallon ne mujhe yahnn bhejha hai.
mom: kyun ???????????
anu: humare college ka ek rule hai bache ki admission ke samay ek form pe likha jhota hai kli collge ke sab saal shuru hone se degreee khtam hone tak bachaa scholl miss nahin kar sakta. woh kissie bigde hue waqt mein hi kar sakta hai aur iss sab ki zimdari hum teachers ki hoti hain...
mom: maine yah rule ajj tak nahin suna. khai koi batt nahin to aap mukti se mlna chahit hain??????
anu: jeeeee
mom: mukti tumse milne college se koi ayya hai.
mukti comes out after washing her hands. her mom tells her dat her teachers is here. and told her to not to tell anu anything about the behaviour of her mom and sister. mukti noded and went outside and her mom follows her. mukti saw and she is shocked bcz she dont know who anu was.
,mukti: aaaaappp... ummm woh
b4 mukti could say anyhting
anu: hi mukti kaisi ho tumhari tabiyat to theek hai naa. ho wcum ur not scomin gto vccollege actully prncipal said that u have to attend college else u have to pay 20000 rupees for the fine.
mukti's step mom heard that shge xome came running to her.
mom: woh iski tabiyat theek nahin thi . yeh kal se college ajyegi tab to theek hai naa.
anu: yaeh ok then cya.
mukti has a smile on her face while her step mom muttring siomethuing and gave her a dirty look.

mukti was smiling on someone who did that for her.



well dats it for now my sister is bugging me
tc leave acomment
bye
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
OMG.. juz catch up with ur ff.. itz awsomeee... plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
i must say....canada ppl are very good at writing...u, reeha..gr8 job....continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thats so cute 😳 😳 😳 awww u should have writen more plz continue soon
👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
P-M are soooo cute 😳 😳 😳 Prem is so sweet

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