luv birdz ff PG 31 Part 21 UPDATED - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
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GREATTTT....hope you continue soon!!!!! 😃
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wow kul pls continue soon plsssssss 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hwy guyz than for the comments and i am gonna post a long part today hope u will like it

recap: prem send some lady to mukti's house as a teacher who convinced her step mother to let mukti go to college


next morning mukti is wearing a light green suit with but her hairs asre tied and she seems reaally sick. she is walking really slowly and her dull eyez are looking for prem to say thanx but she find him no where. she asked his frenz who were looking at her nd say dat they dont noe where id he. mukti realises that guyz dont really wanna talk to her bcz of her looks ut she ignored them and went to her class. she had as long day . and she is feeling dizzy for some reason. she is looking fo prem all day but it seems he didnt came to college. mukti gives up and start to move toward her house. suddenly see coundt see really well and she was feeling more dizzy and she ais abkout to fsall when some hold her from her waist. mukti couldnt see reslly well who is he. and she fell unconciouse.


next morning. mukti wakes up and look around her and she is holding her had which was having an headache. she found heself in a beautiful room with big windown which face the ocean. she go up and went toward the window and open it. the cool breez went thorugh her hraus after touching her face. now she is having a small smile on er face. suddnly she realizes dat she is in some man's long kurta and longi. she is confused and look around the room suddnely she saw a picture of prem wo was having an icecream and lickingt he icecream cone. he was looking really cute in that pic. mukti smiled and then she remebers abo the cloth. she thoughtbthat prem chaged her cloth. which maked her so maad.

she yelled: prem, prem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
prem who was in washroom of other room comes out in towel running toward mukti's room.he even forgot that he is towel. prem was really tensed and worried
prem,: hey kya hua mukti ru alrite.
mukti saw him and turns around
mukti: beshram kapde to phene hote . tumhe ye bhiu nahin pata ki ladki paas ja rajhe ho.
prem who was confused that wat she is talkin about . looked down on himself and realises that he is in towel. he got shocked and started to lookmfor something in room to put on.but he didnt find anything then he runs toward thew window and hides himself behind the curtain.he was so embareced. mukti was smiling at him.

mutki: prem mere kapde tumne kyun badlke?
prem who was still behind the curtina stick put his head a little bit with a confused look on his face.
prem: tumm pagal to nahin ho gayee ho. tum ek ladki ho aur mein ek ladka tum jaisa samjhti ho mein waisa bilkul nahin ho. wo tumhre kapde meri dai maan ne badle the. actully woh tumkal behosh ho gayee to main tumhe ghar le aaya. aur docotre ne kaha ki tumne pichle 30 hours se kahay nahin isislkiye aur unho ne kaha ke tumhe loose kapde dalwane onge taaki tum comfort ho sako so i asked my dai ma to do that for u... undersatnd!!!!!!!!!!
mutki who was embarced on her behaivor.bit her tounge. and she turned around and saw prem who was hiding behind the curtain and turning red. she msiles and closes her eyez agin.
mukti: woh ia m sorry actaully i thgught that uUmmmmmmm i am so sorrry.
prem smiles and say : its ok hota hai.
suddenly prem and mukti heared some giglin . they try to find ait suddnly prem saw that some kids at the beach were watchin him all the time from his back when he was hidinig behind the curtin. prem was so embrade that he felt like kill himself right there. kida were laughing to death and mukti brust out lauginh tooooo. prem pull cutin down and put the curtain around himself and run toerad his room as fast as he could.mukti was laughinf so hard and suddely she looked at the time it was 12 o colock of noon her smile turninto feared expression. she got flashbaks of slap and burnin . she puts her cloths on and rundowbnstairs we saw pem downstais havuing his food.


He saw worried face of mukti and ogt up.
pem: mukti are u feeling ok. why are u loking o pale.
mukti: woh prem its been 18 houers i didnt went back to my house i am sure there will some hungama if i will not go there assd soon as possible. can u plz give me a ride?????????
prem: eh ya ure lets go
premn and mutki keft toward her house and wghen they get ther they saw her step mpther is sitin puside of the house with think stick in her hand. she saw mukti and yelled
mukti!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
mukti was tremblin and she went to her step mom who pulled her inside and slaps her 3 times prem who was watching this got off frommhis car and went to her house. he was walkin slowly and suddnly he heard a big screm it was mukti . prem runs toward the house and when he get ehr he saw mukti who was scrying in pain. and her mother was holding a wood piece from whic was on fire{{{{{ sorry guyz i forgot word for that 😆 }}}}} he saw that her mother burned her arm reaklly badly . he saw mukti who was in pain and crying. he wen her asnd help her to get up and wipes heer teasrs. and says.
prem: let's go mukti.
Step mom: yeh kahin nahi jayegi! and who the hell r u?????????
prem didnt find it neccessray yto answer the questuion and he loked at mukti eho was crying and lookin at him.
prem : lets go.
mukti: but where?????
prem: tum chalo.
mukti';s step mom tried to stop them.
prem yelled at her: mera raasta chod do warna mein police mein tumhari compliant kake tumhwe jail bhej donga .
SM: theek hai leja isse . mere gale padi musibat ab tuhi smbhal and she left
prem take mutki outside and help he to sit in the car and htey left. prem didnt say anyhtin while mukti was crying bcz of her pian. mukti and prem reached somewhere


We see a beautiful house suround by a green garden. prem got off the car and open the door for mukti. he took her inside and make her sit on the sofa. mukti ses the house which is really beautiful. prem; mom mom klahan ho aap? plz jaldi aao. we see a back of a women who is in pooja ghar doing aaprti and she heard the voice of prem and turns around its non other than our prerna. she smiles and got up after she is done with the aarti. she comes down ion her red sari smiling at her son. she some down and hugs him and then she notices a cute gurl siting on the sofa cryin.
prerna: prem beta yeh kyun hai??
prem: mom yeh mukti hai and then he tell prerna eveything in mute situatin after he took hjer to the corner. prerna was really shocked to hear the story of poor gurl. she had tears iun her eyez. she went to mukti and sits by her. she tried to houch her wound to look at it but mukti was already in pain so she back off. premr touchesd mukti face and sya
prerna: dekha beat i know ki tumhare saath bhut bura hua par aise rote hue usko koss mat. let me see ur wound and do dressing on it;prerna get the first aid kit and do the dressing on it .really carefully. prem awas siting on the opposite sofa and lookin at them.
prem: mom iske paas rehane ko jaghe nahi and to is it ok if she can liv here.?
pererna: of course yeh bhi koi puchne waali baat hai?/ she looke da t mukti who was not crying any moire and put her hand on mukti head she is so sweet gurl.
mukti: its ok aunty i cwill go frm here i will ive somewherr else but bas aaj ki raat keliye jaghe mil jaayekal subhe mein koi reahne ki jaghe dhoond loongi.
prerna: nahi beta plz aisa mat kaho mere liye tum meri beti jaise ho woh bhi tumhre umar ki hi haio tum uske saath reh sakti ho as lonmg u want aur jahan tak us ki tumhari maan ki baat hai usse to mahila mukti walle niptenge u got nad rest prem zara mukti kouske kapmre tk le jao i mean tumhari behn ke.
prem loosk a mukti and then he suddnly remebers mom isne pichle 30 ghanton se nahin khya. prerna who was confused looked at mukti.
perna; kyun beta??
mukti has a tear in her eyes: woh acxtully mom bhut naraaz thi so she locked me in then room and maybe she forgot to ask me about the food but nextmorning i didnt got a chace afeter if finshed aeverythin bcz i had college so issiliye.
prenra: beta aise mat kiy karo tumhari maan itni gir sakti hai uffffffffffff. tum baitho mein tumhre lkiye kuch lekar aati hoon.





ok guyz that's it for now i hope u will like it plz leave ur comment bdw i am not getting much ogfhte cooments but still tis ok bcz i got some i luv ya alll 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it was really good plz continue soon
keep on writing dear 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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It's awesome!! 👏
Plz do cont soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ur fanfic is really gud!i love it!!continue sn!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsome Jaan!...cont. soon! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome.. keep it up! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok guyz sorry for the dely . well wow i have over than 1500 views well i think ppl like my stupid fanfic. we i think dat gud. well herez the next part hope u guyz will like it.


recap: mukti met with prerna and goign to live in prems house.

mukti is having something to eat whcih was brought by prerna. prerna was lookin at her suddnly some says.
gurl: mumma mumma,
prerna looks aup and smiles. it s none other than sneha she is wearing a beautiful red churidaar and lookin stunning. she was comin runnin toward her and didnt notice mukti and prem.
sneha: mummmmmmmmmmmmma , oh mummmmma guess wat i wn the first prze in fashion desgining compittiton oh i am so excited. it s all bcz of u mumma thanx and she kisees her.
prerna: congo beta and u r welcum.
som1 taps on sneha's shoulder and she turns around and shocked then she screams.
sneha: ahhhhhhhhhhhh its u long time no see bro how ru ? waise bhut kanjoos ho ek phione nhi nahin kiya aur mails ka jwab bhi nahin....
and then they hug each other. suddnly sneha sees a simple gurl wiht a pale face and she asked: who r u???????
mukti doenst say anyhting and she looked at prerna. prerna smiled at her and understood why she is lookin at her. then prerna took sneha into cornor and tells evything about mukti. sneha and same expressions on her face as prerna had after listing to whole thing abot mukti. sneha went to her and sits by her.
sneha: hi ahh my name is neha kya tum meri dot banogi???????
mukti was hesitating at first and then she said yes. sneha smiled at her and took her iun snehas room.
sneha: ajj se tum yahn rahogi mere saath!!
mukti: thanz sneha ji u r very kind.
sneha : arrrrrrrrrrrrreee yaar plz yeh ji hata do main old feel karti hoon. {with a smile on her face}
mukti finlay smiled a little and said: ok sneha!!!!!!!!
sneha : dats right anmd they hugeach other.


it's been a week since mukti came to the bajaj mansion. evryboday started to luv her they enjoy her companyu specialy prerna. prerna could see that she is a wonderful gurl and she knows how to run a hous and hdle prblems and evything. mr baja also satrted to like this gurl she was so inteligent she also helped mr bajaj by giving some advices about bussiness and evry1 was impresses by her work. but prem was too busy with his so called gurl frenz so he didnt pay attention to it.

one day mukti was goign to baja mansion after the college was over she was wearing a simple skirt and a ok lookin shirt. everybody makes comments on her looks but she never paid attentions but really hurts her sometime even if she doesnt want to htink about ti. well mukti was walkin out of the door when some of the frenz of prem were stading blocked her way.

she tried to go away but they dint let her go away.
guy 1: excuseme ummmmmm bhenjee can u tell me where did u got these clothes from. well it really guud i wanna buy some for me . and then he laughed
guy 2: lets see hummmmmmmmm yaar iss stylish ladki ko toh bollywood main hona chhiye dont u think.
guy 2 plz gyz stop it id bhenji ko tang mat karo let her go plz. m
mukti was gettin upset and almost had a tear in her eye and suddnly some one says: guyzzzzzzzzzzz
mukti turned and its prem with a wicked smile on her face. miss beutiful; ko tang mat karo how can u do something like this kind of gurl. nonm no this is not right hanna pain jane .
mukti: prem plz stopit how can u do this to me its ok if i look this way some ppl like me this way too.
prem: look s around; who likes yu?????? him , or him?
well is dat so mukti i dare u to go and stand by those sxy gals and participate in the cat walk .
mukti was about to say no when a guy drag her toward the walkin ramp. muktiwas tryin her besty but it was no help.
hte guy forcely pulled her on the stage and ask her to walk.prem who was unaware that he was doin wrong said: comon mukti in know u can do it right miss madonna and he gave her a wicked smile.

evrysingle person of the college was loin at her and pointing finger s and aying behnji znd other kin odf bad stuff which makes mukti cry nad she ran away from there. she came home running and went the room and closed the door she was crying for so long when suddmnly prerna comes there.
prerna: mukti mukti beta kya hua.
mukti got up and wiped her tears: kuch nahi aunty woh aise hi and give her a fake amile.
prerna: nahi beta batao mujhe main tumhri mann jaisi hoon.
after hearin ma word mukti sarted to cry agin an ftold everything to prerna. prerna was so shocked dat prem could do such a thing. she wiped her tears and hugged her.
prerna: beta tu bhut sundar ho and i like the way u r par shyad tum apni khoobsurti ko chupa ke rakhti ho u know wat ab waqt aa gaya hai ki tum apne asli ropop mein aao.
mukti waslookin at her confused.prerna just smiled at her innocnese and the view faded out. we see prerna nd sneha wiht lots of amkeup stuff oin there hand as and we see mukti sititng on a chir in front of miror. we see mukti mis freaking out and try to run but noboday lets her run. after done eoht the makeup stuff prerna nd sneha are lookin for some thing to wear. they finaly choose a dress and show there thumbs up to mukti but they dont show mukti yet ..........




dat it for now

prercap: prem has his mouth and eyez open really wide............


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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks for the update.... do continue... will be waiting..

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