luv birdz ff PG 31 Part 21 UPDATED - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hy guyz thanx for the gr8 comments and i hope u willlike this part.

recap: prem saves mukti from some goons. mukti got injured in the fight and prem took hr to the hospital

prem saw mukti throught he window of the door she was unconciuse witha bandage on her head. after an hour or so docoitr came to prem .
docotr: mr. prem she is fine now. but she need to take care of herself bcz she lost lots of the blood but she is fine. u can take her home after she will be concious again.
prem nods his head and sat on the bech and waiing for muki to get up. he waited and waited. after an hour or so he went to mukti's room to check on her. there he sawe mukti was lying down. he felt someting inside. he got a little smile on him and then he sat on the chair. he didnt get to now when he fall sleep on the chair. after sometime mukti woke up . she has a little headach. she was touching her bandage when she saw pem who was sleeping uncomfertably on the chir and was trying not to fell from the chir. mukti looked at him and smiles when she saw that prem was about to fall. she got up and run toward prem and save himto falkling from the ground. prem woke up.
prem: uhhhhh umm sorry actually mujhe pata nahin challa ki main kab so gaya!!! woh how r u felling now??????
mukti.: i am fine. thanx
prem{ with smile} dat's alrite.
she was looking rounf the room suddenly she saw that it was 10:00 pm.
mukti: oh nooooooooooooooo!!!!!!
prem: kya hua? dadaho raha hai?
mukti: nahin main late ho gayi. mom will kill me.
prem: nahin she will be worried actually bcz she didnt know wdat wat happened to u? rite{ with a smile}
mukti who's smile was gone: no woh mujhe.... i gotta go now. thanx umm prem.
prem: how did u know my name?
mukti;l i know everything about u? bcz u an me we were in same high skool. and mybe u never realised that.
prem:ohhhh!!!!!{ with a fake smile}
prem: can i give u a ride hme?
mukti: no thanx it's ok
prem: common u r not in good situation. u need to take care of ur self
mukti. uhhhhhhh ok

prem satrtvto walk with mukti toward mukti it was cold outside and mukti start to get colder. prem was watching all this.
prem: r u cold?
mukti: yeh but its ok.
prem take of his jacket and put it on mukti's shoulder and satrt to walk toward the car again. mukti was looking at him with a different feeling. prem opened the door for mukti and make her sit in the car carefully and then he drove her to her house. prem asked the address. mukti told him and they eachd there in an hour bcz of the traffic.
mukti who was tensed thinkin about her step mom and he scolding didnt ealise when she reahed out of her house.
prem; ehhhhhhhh, ummmmmmmmm ur name is ....
mukti: mukti
prem:o hok
mukti: thanx for the ride.
prem: it's ok
mukti get off the car and satrt to walk toward her house fat.
prem was still there watching mukti.
mukti knocked on the door. a fat lady opened door for her. she slapped her and drag m,ukti in ot the house. prem who was watching all this was stunned. prem got off form his car and walked toward the house and start to look inside through a window. he was stunned wat he saw in the house.
lady: maine kaha tha na ki college khatam hine ke baad seedha gahr ajjna. kahan ti ab tak?
mukti: par .... mom woh mein hospital meni thi.mujhe chot lagi hai. i was unconciouse for a long time.
lady { who was red in anger} slapped her one more time.mukti fell on the floor and her bandage was pulled out by the lady while she was beatin her up.
ylady: yeh khooth ke natak mere samne mat kiya kar. chal uth aur kahan bana kab se nhooke mar rahen.
{oh well guyz mukti's dada is a salsmen so dat' shy he is always out of city}
mukti got up crying and holding her wound on her forehead which started to bledd agaig and went to her room. prem who was really shocked to see a mom's behaviour with her kids. he drove off from there. he didint know dat wat he was goign through. lots of different questions were goign on in prem's mind. he decided to look for the answer. and he know wat he suppose to do.
on other hand mukti who was crying all the time cooked food for her step mom and her step sister. she went to her room after she put her mom to sleep. she sat infront of the mirror to take a look at her wound which was without any bandage and whicvh was hurting really bad. she was try to do dressing but she couldnt do it. she just throw everything out stat to cry on her bed. after a while she got up and put a cotton swab on her forhead with some detol and put tape on it. an went to sleep after cleaning the mess her step sister made in her room searching for some stuff.

in the moring she got up at 5 o clock bcz she had to got to mandir to do her reall mom's barsi. she went to mandir and did the pooja and come back be4 her step mom wake up. she prepared the food for her mom and sister and left toward the busstop. she took the bus and she reachd at the college and there she saw......................................................

ell tah's it for today
i hope u guyz will like it plz leave ur comments
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow!! her step mom is mean!!! 🤢 🤢 🤢 i hope you continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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plzzzz continue soon...and its really good
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Posted: 18 years ago
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all rite guyz sorry for the late update
herez the next part hope u will like it.

mukti saw prem by the main door f xolage who was looking at her with lots of questins in his mind... mukti was confused and ignored him and left toward college.
prem approches her. and blockd her way..
prem: woh ummm uhhh how r u today?
mukti{with a fake smile} i m ok. and she left frm there
prem who stood there for 1 min run after her and stops her.
prem: umm mukti maine kal raat woh maine dekha ki ur mom. well is she always like dat??
mukti whowas shcked: prem wat r u alkin about???? meri mom kya????//
prem: comon i know everyuthing.i know its nota right thing to do for any1 but when i saw she slapped at the door and pulle du really hard inside. i was kinda scared bcz i thught u were later dats why ur mom is behaving like dat.. but when i saw her beating u up like a beast. i was shocked. inever saw a mother can do this to her kids.. meri mom to asisa nahi karti. meri nhi mom hai. she is too nice.
mukti:{with a tear which is about to roll dwn} lekinmain tumhri jaisi luckynain hoon kyunki meri maan nahi hai.{ she looked down}
prem: { with a confused expression} to phir woh kon thi jo tumhe ...... mera mutlab, who is he???????/
mukti: she is my step mom. she dont luv me bcz she think dat m,ain un par ek bojh hoon.
she started to cry. prem who was watching her cry couldnt take it naymore and came closer to her.
prem: why dont u tell ur dad? kahin woh bhi to ??????????
mukti: witha fake smile and wiping her tears: nahin nahin he is the best father in the world. he loves me alot. and he also luves his wife alot. or main nahin chahti ki meri wajahe se un dono ke beech dooriyan paida hon. bdw he is usually out of town.
suddenly she felt a sharpapin in he wound which she got in the accident. she hold it with a pinful expression onher face.
mukti: ouccccccccchhhh...
prem: r u alrite.
mukti: hann ouchhhhhhhhh bas thoda dard ho raha hai.
prem: let me see.
mukti: no its ok
prem: comon let me see.
he carefully removed the hand and then badage of her head and he was shocked. it was in really bad conditon and the blood was dripping slowly frm it.
prem: u need to go to doctor b4 its get worst. let's go
mukti: no prem thoda sa to hai i will be fine.
prem: tum bhut zyada zidd karti ho. lets go
mukti and prem started to walk toward the car. a sweet breeze start blew. mukti who was walking emotionless following prem toward his car felt something inside her. she saw dat he is the rite person she new dat b4 but he can br so carefula and gentle she never thought datw ay. bcz whenevr she used to see him he was the guy wioth an atitude who never noticed her.

prem whowas walkin without noticing dat mtukiwas staring at her and the different feeling inside him too. the feeling he had not felt b4. prem to himself: why i am so worrid bout her? she is so sweet so gentle and how culd any1 behave really bad with her.
prem opened the door for mukti and mukti sits iun the car hesitatly. she thinks: but i know dat he doesn't ,like me . he will not love a gurl like me. i am not her dream gurl. but prem maine hamesha tumko chaha hai. aur hamesha chahungi...
prem: whowas driving carefully was tryin to not to look at mukti whowas quite but her silnce was like death for him. he wanted to know more.
prem: so ummm mukti, how cum i never noticed u??????? witjh a smile on her face
mukti: well maybe u were lookin but arent really seeing!!!
prem: wow data nice answer. i thought u will never talk.
mukti smiles.
prem and mukti reached at the hospital and doctor did her dressing.
doctor: well jab maine kal yeh wound dekha tha tab to itna bura nain tha aur achnnak it turns really bad h.... humm strange ... how cum miss mikti???????/
prem adn mukti looked at each other. mukti nodds her head which say no to tell docotr.
prem smiled at her
prem: actully kal gir gayee thi......
docotr: plz take care of ur self......
mukti: ok docotr

prem dropped mukti off andwent hme. all nite mukti and prem were thinkin of eachother.

next morning
mukti was getting ready for college. suddenl;y mukti's step mom came in.
SM: mukti ajj se tumhara college jana band...
mukti whow as shocked: par kyun ma. main padna chahti hoon...
SM: oh is dat so. mukhe tumhare chal challna to padne jaise nahin lag rahe they
mukti: kua hua ma????????
SM: woh ladka kaun tha jo tumhe kal chodne ayya tha.
mukti: ma woh prem tha usne meri jzzn bahichi thi gundon se.
SM slaaped mukti: ab muhse jooth bol rahi hai. amine kaha na ki tum college nahi jaogi to bas anhin jaogi and she locked mukti inside her room. mukti started to cry and beg her SM to let her go but she didnt let her go.

its bin a week since mukti didnt go to he colleg......
mukti was abut to go on her bad when wshe saw a shadow wandring around her window.....
who is it..........
u will find next update which is tommroow and guyz plz do comment i hope u will like it
till then cioooooooooooooooooo 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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dat 100% is PREM!!! he knows sumthing is wrong to mukti!! LIFESAVEr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its great plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow thats really gud u should update it soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Plzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon!Plz!That was really good!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow, ur fanfic is so good!update sn!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwww.. its fab..
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plz continue soon 😳

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