luv birdz ff PG 31 Part 21 UPDATED

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hey guyz after eading a big pile of the fanfics at if i would likreto start mine i noe i am not a gud writer but just a try 😳 plz leave ur comments 😊

prem is guy from rich family its his second ear of college. he is really cute and everysingle gurls is fida on him u knoe why bcz he is cute nad the main point is he is rich. he lives in a apartment with a old women far away frm his mansion for study. he reaspect the old lady alot who cooks food for him and take care of the house. he treats her mother like his own mother. his dad who is really rich and busy guy his mther who take care of te the little sistersf him who are 17 and 19. his parents dont want him to stay at the hostel so they bousht him the aprtment which is really beautiful surround by beautiful mountains. but still he is looking for his dream gurl. but he didnt find any of the gurls from his college who will a perfect fit for him bcz he knoews dat the gurl likes him bcz of his looks and money but he dont care since he take them as a time pass.

mukti a gurl frm middle class family. and she is from prem's highg skool. she oves prem but she never told him about it nad prem hardly notices her. she is really butiful gurl but bcz of her step mother nad a step sister she dressup eraly simple she dont do makeup and she does every single work at home and she is grade A studnet. she wants to be a lawyer.her dad lovesher like a princess and her mother always being nice to her infront of her husband. she is going to join the same college as prem but she didnt know about ti. she havent forgot him since he left the hihg skool. but she kknows dat even she will purpose him maybe he will not except her as her tru luv.so she is afraid frm telling him how much she loves him.

first day of college.
scene by ithe college door
prem is standing by the door woth his cool yamaha bike
with his frends having fun. sub=ddnly a bus stoped at the bustand infront the skool. we see some goons inthe bus who were troucbling a gurl who was wearing a blue suuit with some books in her hand and her back was facing prem. prem who was pretty busy and he didnt notice it. the goons got if from the bus and pulled the gurl out from the bus by lifting her frm her waist. the gurl screaams bcz on of the hold he hand really tight taook that tbehind he back. prem looks at the scene when he heard th e scream . he saw none other than mukti. who was scramin in pian. prem got up and went to the busstand.
prem: hey guyz wat's goign on huh?
goon1: hey whoever u r and leave us alone else.?
peRE: ooooooooo i am scared alrite i am goign .
prem was leaving whe onre fo the goons pulled out mukti's viel and throw it into air. mukti ws crying and screaming for help. the viel dropped on prem's face and he felt guilt. he run towrad the guoons toi save hte gurl when one of the goons take out a knife from his pocket. aftrer watching this all prem's frenz s ccame their running toward in anger and hsatrt to beat up th goons. the goon who was holding mukti throw her and she hit her head on the wall and her forehead start to bleeding and she fell unconcious. on of the frend went to mukti to help her when suddenly the goon lift her in he arms and satrt running toward the jeep. pem saw this and ran after him and blocked his wasy.
prem: lweave her alone or i swear to hod i will kill u/
goon: hey i dont care watever u r sayin u have no gutts to do it.
prem got mre anmgry and her snatched mukti from goons arm and put her on the side of the road sart beat him up the goon ran frm there after a while. in all this suddly prem forsot bout mukti and the blood dat was running frm mmukit's forhead. pem took her to hospital where docotr sid that it is really ba condition and we nee to gotrugh lots of xrays to amke sur e there is not injury to the brian .
prem: u dont woirry doc. sd o watever u want to do i will take responsiblity odnt worry about money.
docotr smiles at him and put his hand on the shoulder and left frm ther prem saw mukti lying on the bed ith a bandage on her forehead un conciouse.

that's it now
leav eur comments 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yay I'm, the first one to read it and tell you that you should continue soon!!!! 👏 👏 👏
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thats great mann!!! doo continuee soon i''llll definaltelyy be waiting be wiating for the nestt part!!! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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so gud!! it was pleasure readin it!! plz cont.!!
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good job!!.. please continue soon.. i really liked it 😃 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome!! plzzz continue...i wanna read more 😃
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cont soooooooooooooooooon 😭 😭
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Dat was sooo gud!Plz continue soon!
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wow......
continue soon 👏
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it's fantastic......continue soon.... 👏

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