luv birdz ff PG 31 Part 21 UPDATED - Page 16

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Posted: 18 years ago
whn r u updating? update soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
aww that was cute 😳 plz continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
soooo sweet 😳
FINALLY you updated....
Great as usual

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Posted: 18 years ago
yayy u updated! very well written 😛 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
than guyz i will update tonite for sure

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Posted: 18 years ago
😳 will be waiting for the tonite to come 😳
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ooops sorry guyz i worte the next part ino tthe MS word but felll alseep and then thought i postedf it up herer u go for the next part sooory hope u will like it... plz forgive me.



After a week form prem being hospitalized. Family decided to stay longer since they didn't do anything due to prem's weakness. Mukti was doing her best by taking care a really good care of prem from feeding him to give his medicines on time. Prem was really happy becz he got his love back and so was prerna and bajaj to see their son happy. Prem wanted to get marry as soon as possible. He always teased Mukti about running away from him. But it always bothered her but she always took it as a joke. And laughed with Prem. Prem talked about it to Sneha. Sneha refused to talk about his marriage to the parents. But Prem convinced her. After another week or so family returned. They had a great time. Bajaj took some rest after a long flight after they reach home. Prerna started to unpack with the help of Mukti and Sneha. Prem was in his room and was getting bored. He wanted Mukti to be with him so they and have a romantic chat. But he was too shy to call her in front of everyone. But he really wanted to talk to her. After a long boring hour Mukti came into room with the medicines of prem. The moment he noticed that Mukti was there, he pretended, as he was asleep. Mukti went near him and try to wake him up for the medicine, but prem did not wake up.

Mukti sat in front of him for a few seconds looking at his face. She smiled like a fresh blossom in spring. She came closer and sat beside him. A tear rolled down from her eye to her cheek and fell on prem's cheek. Prem felt it and opened his eyes. He saw Mukti wiping the eyes.
Mukti: hey prem, u r awake well I came here to give you medicines. U know the afternoon ones. Ok now wake up and have them common.

Mukti gave him the medicines and prem swallow them with a glass of cold water. Mukti took the glass form prem's hand and turned around to leave. She was about to leave when prem grabbed her wrist tightly.
Mukti: ouch prem leave I have to go and help chotti maa.
Prem: loosen up a little, mukti why were you crying?
Mukti: with a fake smile no why would I cry? Huh.
Prem: pulled her towards the bed and clean the side of eyes with his finger and showed it to mukti.

Prem: umm tumhara kajjal tumhara assoon ke saath beh raha thaa plz don't lie, wat is wrong.

Mukti has another tear in her another tear in her eyes.

Mukti: u know wat prem I am so unfortunate that I am not able to understand what I have in my life which is really precious in my life and loosing that up will be my biggest mistake of my life. I had you but I was about to loose u because I was so stupid to think that u weren't mine and something will happen to you. My dad left me since god wanted this to happen. U knows wat he was the only person who used to listen to everything. Helped me in my life's problem but since he left. I can't share my happiness or my sorrow or my problems with anyone. U gave me wonderful family and everyone who can I talk to. But I don't have that confidence left to talk to some1. I just wish that I have some1 to talk with.. But I guess I don't have any1.


em who was listing to all this was really upset. He took her hands in his and wipes tears.

Prem: why u always does something, which hurt u from inside and me too. We were will be life partners for life in some time and I want u to never leave anything in your heart which will hurt u. because I ant see u in pain. U r my first and last love. Nobody can take you place. Plz I want u to share everything with me. U happiness and your sorrow and I promise u that I will share mine with you.

Mukti: promise naa????
Mukti: premise
And they both hug.
Some one: uhem uhem.
It was bajaj and prerna: and mukti u r our daughter too. U can tell us your sorrows too. I promise me and Mr. Bajaj will be always there for you. And I have something to tell you.

Prerna went outside and she grabbed Sneha by the ear.
Sneha: ouchhhhh mom it hurts oww bro plz help…
Prerna: prem tumne mujhse yeh baat khud kyun nahi kii?
Prem looked away with a smile.
Prerna: look he is blushing turning red like a tomato.ok ok don't do that prem I am going to faint. So Mr. Bajaj wat u think? Shall we tell them?
Mukti was confused looking at both of them
Mukti: wat r u talking about Chotti maa?
Prerna: u shud stop calling me Chotti maa right away. [With an angry tone>
Mukti was shocked: what did I do?
Prerna: burst out laughing and then she moved closer to mukti.
Prerna: u will call me maa from now.
Mukti understood wat she was taking about. She has tears in her eyes.
Prerna hugged her and so did bajaj.
Sneha winked ad gave being smart smile to prem. Prem whispered him thanks.

Prerna: ok I will talk to pundit as soon as possible and we will announce you engagement party on shub muhurat.

Prem: I love mom and dad…
Prerna and bajaj: we love u too son. Every one left except prem and mukti. Prem get down form the bed and walked toward mukti.
Prem: thanx mukti for coming back in my life.
Mukti: thanx for giving me my lives most precious gift back ur family. Oops I mean our family.

Prem and mukti hugged back.



hope u will like it

luv

tina 😳
Edited by adorablegurl - 18 years ago
karen singh thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
awww thats cuteee!!! 😳 😳 😳 plz continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwww...they're gonna be gettin married soon 😳 😳 😳 ...great update...plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
😳 aww thats cute,


pl cont soon.... 👏 👏 👏

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