luv birdz ff PG 31 Part 21 UPDATED

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Lima

@sweet_lima

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#141

i just red your ff it s just wow 👏
so plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz

continue soon

Edited by sweet_lima - 18 years ago

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Janki

@pm rocks

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#142

it great!!! continue soon!!!!! bring PM back!!!! its great....keep up ur good work!!!! 👏

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Robin

@Robin_M

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#143

glad to have you back tina! lovely update, and pleeeaaasssed keep going! update soon 😊

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bittersweet93

@bittersweet93

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#144

omg tat was just amazing!
do update soon

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Aisha

@Xo-PuZen

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#145

hi i just read you whole ff, and i just want 2 say that its MIND BLOWING 😃
plz continue soon 😃
Love
Aisha 😳

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bittersweet93

@bittersweet93

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#146

its been so long since u cont...do update soon 😳 😛

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tina

@kvashishat

Voyager

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Posted: 18 years ago

#147

guyz i am so sorry i coudn't continue for some reason got busy.... i hope u will forgive me for my mistake. i know u will ok here we go with the next part

mukti woke up. the tears on her cheeks were dry with the kajal of her eyes leaving a mark. her eyes were swallon and there were no more tears in her eyes. her heart was still heavy like she has a huge burdan of something. she rememberss eveything she said to prem yesterday and she thought that she was doi waht was rights. she got up from the floor and went to the window. she opened it.it rained all night heanily and the air was cool. a breez came in though window and touched her hair and her face. she felt some kind of peace and closed her eyes. she was thinking the moments she spend with her dad and then she thought of the moments she spend with prem. she dosnt wanted to think about him. suddnly she saw some crowed by on the beach. she doenst noe wat was it and she was not in the mood of noing about it. a knock on the door break her concetration from the view. she opened the door. a waitess came in the room and greeted good morning. mukti didnt find it really good but she greeted back wiht a smile. the waitress put fresh flowers she brought iht her onnt he side table and start to bring the new towels and everything for need.

mukti asked : ummm what is all this crowd all about at the beach?

waitress with a smile: ohh thats. well some guy was there all night in the rain and he have a really bad cold and fever and people say he will die if he didnt go to doctor and he is refusing to go inside.

the waitress turned around and saw mukti running towards the door.
witress: mam where r u going?
but mukti was not aware of her surroundoings. all she knew that some1 she loves a lot is in trouble. she was running toward the beach . she reached the place where people were stading in a circle. it was hard to get though them but mukti tried really hard. and she was shocked her frea tunrned out to be. prem was sitting there shivering and his eyes were tired. mukti went close to him and sat down beside him. a tear rolled down her cheek and prem noticed it. prem gave her a a smile adn he started to felt evertyhing dizzy . he anted to touch her and tell her how he felt without her. mukti touched his face. he was warm as fire and he was shivering. prem fell into mukti's arm and fainted. mukti creamed. but no use prem was not responding back.
mukti: prem plz prem dont do this. i am sorry it happened bcz of me. plz help me some1 plz.

some ppl helped mukti to get prem to the hospital. mukti was waiting for dcotor and aming forth and back. prerna came running and so does bajaj. prerna was crying and mukti hugged her back. she was crying. she asked for forgiuveness and she told evrything to prerena wat happened last night. prerna cried more and she told mukti that it wasn't her fault and she shouldnt call herself manhoos. she is not. plz have faith in urself. baja plced his hand on prerna's shoulder and told her that she is right.listen to her. and have faith in urslef.

after some hours docotr came out mukti was anoxious to hear about prem

mukit: docotr. how is he?s he fine? whjen can we take him? did he gained cocious?

docoter smiled: hold on lady and take some breath. yes he is fine but he still go some fever and cold.

mukti: can we meet him?
docotr:yes but one by one ok.. tkae care

mprerna went in there and hugged her son .
prem: mom i ma fine dont; worry. then they had a ecmotinal scene{PS. actually i just want it to be pm no one else so that's why i m nopt showeing the talk of paretns} baja and prem had little dad son moment.
prerna: chal beta now rest.

prem: ok mom

prerna comes ouside and sees mukti. prenra wne t and sat by her...

prerna: mukti dont u wanna go and see him.

mukit: nahina choti maa. it happened bcz of me.
prerna: ab blame kia apane ko to marron gi. go inside.

mukti hesitated but she went in.

mukti stepped into the room. prem was lookin at the window lying . he fetlt the presence of some1 and he knew it was mukti.

prem: turned a little bit ans find himself right.
prem: hey.. with a smile

mukti was waiing to hear something anything and when she did she start to cry.

prem: hey come here. ro kyun rahi ho main zinda hoon isliye.
mukti ran toward him and hit him on his shoulder and then they hugged

mukit: i am sorry prem i am really sorry. plz dont say that. i will die without u.
prem cried too but he didnt let mukti know he was trying to hide his sighs but his ter rolled down and fell o mukti's cheek mukti got up and look at prem.

mukti: plz prem dont cry i am not worth tears. they are more precuious than me.plz dont.
mukti was about to leave when prem grabbed her hand.
prem: mukti main mar jaoonga tumhre bina.
mukti turned around and hugged him: plz prem dont say this i am sorry
prem: promise me u wpont leave me ever again.
mukit: promise i wont leave u ever .

prem kissed her on her hand and then for head. and they hug each othr for a long time. mukti dindt realise when prem went to sleep. mukti got up very slowly and realise that prem was sleeping peacfully. mukti tried to go outside but prem got a hard hold for her hand and mukti didnt want it to be disturbed.

ok guyz thats it for now
hope u will like it

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tina 😳