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Posted: 18 years ago

plzzzzzzz continue soon....its wonderful!

and can u plzzzzz make the PM scenes longer...they're so cute!


soha


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Posted: 18 years ago
aww riya is sooo sweeeeet... plzz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow...it's amazing....u r way better than ekta...atleast we cn see romantic PM scenes...and ya continue soon...love reading ur fanfic... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Absolutely fantastic.... Keep it up.... 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont sn i beging u
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome Jaan! 👏 👏 ...plz cont! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thanks for all the great thoughts…. I know it's a bit slow…and a bight boring…but im trying not to go soo fast like I did with my first fanfic…so hear is the next part…

RECAP: Riya's birthday party…she got the gift she was waiting for….

ONE MONTH LATER:


A month had past….jai still didn't have his voice back, the house felt too quite…the arguing had stoopped…but mukti missed it, prem could tell it…prem longed to hear his sons voice…after soo long he had heard it…but he couldn't take not being able to hear it aging….even Aryan wanted jai to started critizing him on every little thing…..they were in Dr.Veerma's office, he was the one handling jai's case…Prem and mukti entered the office….mukti in a yellow sarree and prem in a jeans yellow shirt with white blazer…jai had come with them…Aryan Piya and Riya were at the basu house….

Prem went and talked to the receptionist: Umm Hello, Im prem Bajaj…I'm hear with my wife for my son's appointment..Jai Bajaj…..
The receptionist looked at him strangly….
Receptionist: Yudi…? Are you kidding me?.....are you just hear to flirt with me….?
Prem got a wired look on his face…he realized she was most likely on of his 'ex-groupies' but he wasn't the only one that realized that….mukti did too….
Mukti: NO. He is NOT FLIRTING WITH YOU!! He is hear for our son's appointment…now will you please do your job and conform our appointment..?
Jai just smiled….he would have joined in the bashing with mukti….but he couldn't talk……
Receptionist….who was quite embarresed: ummm…yess just wait five minutes….Dr.Veerma right?
Prem: yess…thanks..
Mukti just shoot another dirty look…prem laughed…..

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DOCTORS OFFICE:

Prem and mukti enterd with jai…and shook hands with the doctor….he seemed nice…he was very nice to jai..jai seemed to like him too…which was very odd…jai rarely hit it off with strangers…..finally they got to the main point….

Doctor: well Mr and Mrs Bajaj…Jai serious is very serious…..the bullet that hit his neck really ingured his voice box….but I think we can repair it…
Prem: that's great!
Doctor: yess that is….but he is going to need extensive speech theropyy…..
Mukti: that's no problem what ever it takes to make my sweetheart better..
Prem: soo are you going to be giving the theropy?
Doctor: no…Dr. Kapoor will…..
That name rang a bell in prems ears but he couldn't really remember who it was…..he let it goo…
Prem: suree…so when can we have the operation done?....
Doctor: Well we have to take a lot of test before we start so atleast a month…
Mukti: that's no problem, we have to go to Canada next week for a trial anyways….
Doctor: trial?
Prem: yeah….the trial that will decide what happens to piya (O)….and if I get my kids…..

Prem and mukti walked out realizing…even though piya was a total physco she was still the mother of the triplets…she could still get coustody…..

Jai tugged on prems pants…and pointed to the receptionist to reminde prem of mukti yelling at her…that brought a smile to his face….

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BASU HOUSE:

Prem and mukti walked in Jai ran to anu and hugged him…anu was happy to see jai too….

Anu: soo jai did you miss me…?
Jai just kissed anu as a sigh of effection….
Jai pointed at were Riya Aryan and Piya were…so anu let him down to go and play….
Anu: prem…what did the doctor say?
Prem smiled: there's hope…
Mukti laughed: prem you should hear jai be sarcastic…..he's just like you….
Anu laughed: father like son….
Prem: dad….can you take care of the triplets and Riya?
Mukti looked up….
Anu: SURRE!! I love spending time with them…I barely get to anyways…so why not…where are you going?
Mukti: yeah where are we going?
Prem: well, Mr.Mehra is in from Canada, and since we didn't get the project party in Canada, I thought we could throw the party hear then…
Mukti: sure…sounds like fun…
Prem: ok enough talking lets go home and get ready…

Prem and mukti both touched anu's feet…and kissed the kids, and left for bajaj house, were the party was being set up……they went home to go get ready
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mukti had come out of the shower in a towel, she took out a red sarre, with matching jewllery for herself, and dark jeans with a red shirt with a black blazer for prem…she was humming a sweet little tune and lost in her own little world as she set up the clothing and put on her light and simple makeup…prem came out of the shower…he saw her looking sooo sweet…and not to metion wet…he got a devilish idea…he loved scareing the hell out of her…mukti might have disagreed….
He went and grabbed her from behind mukti screamed…..
Mukti: prem!!! Why do you have to scare me ALL the time?
Prem: because…it helps to know that even the great fearless basanti gets scared….he kissed her neck…
Prem: by the way…you smell geourgeous….
Mukti blushed: okeay okeay….if you didn't notice romeo…we have a house full of guests downstairs waiting for us…were 10 minutes late….
Prem: you always have to spoil a perfect moment don't you?
Mukti: yess…I love seeing the look on your face…
Mukti went into the washroom to change she knew there would be no progress if they stayed in the same room….

Prem shut the door…he put on his jeans and was buttoning up his shirt…when the door oppend he thought it was mukti but it wasn't ….it was some girl…she looked really embarrassed….

Girl: ohh…im soo sorry…I was looking forr the washroom…I've gone into 3 different rooms soo far…all kids rooms…god, this couple must have soo many kids…you must be one of them….she streached out her hand, expecting prem too take it he didn't…instead he laughed…

Prem:those kids are mine……
The girl: nooo…there mukti's my dad told me….
Prem: mukti's my wife…

Hearing her name mukti came out…

Mukti: prem whats wrong…cant you get dressed yourself?
Mukti was surprised to see the girl in here bedroom…
Mukit: ankita what are you doing hear??
(you guys might have to remember ankita…read back…I for got on which page..remember mr.mehra's daughter..)

Ankita: mukti….this is your husband…but wasn't he dead….
Prem went and kissed mukti's head….: no…prem dosent go away that easily..right basanti?
Mukti: prem shut up..this is ankita mr.merha's daughter
Prem: that guy has kids?...god…I thought he had grand kids…..
Mukti gave a dirty look…..
Prem gave out his hand and shook it with ankita…
Prem: soo Miss. Mehra…would you escuss us?
Ankita: uhh…sure…
Prem: and the washrooms the fifth door….to your right….
Mukti: come I'll show you…
Prem just grabss mukti's hand and twirls her into his arms….infront of ankita…
Prem: your not leaving me are you basanti?
Mukti who was redder then a tamato: ummm…prem get readdyy and I''lll see you downstarirs….
Prem kisses her on the forhead and lets her leave……

In the hall ankita felt aqward…..
Mukti: hears the washroom…sorry about the confusion…there are a lot of bedrooms in the house…
Ankita: no problem….

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The party hadd gone great everyone had an amazing time….mr.mehra and his daughter were the only ones left chit chatting…when Dr.Veerma came in…..

Prem went and shook his hand…mr.veerma looked really nervous….
Prem: Doctor you just missed the party…would you like to eat anything….?
Dr.V: no…mr.bajaj….im not going to be attending your sons case…
The expression from prems face was blowen away…..
Mukti: WHAT!!....why…were paying you more then you make in a year!
Prem: yeah why…do you need more money that's no problem you know….
Dr.Veerma: Dr.kapoor has refused to take your case…and I cant do the case without him….
Prem: why did he say know?
Dr.V: something about his daughter getting custoddyy…..
Prem didn't get it…but mukti did….
Prem: what the hell are you talking about….
Mukti: prem Dr.Kapoor is Piya's (O) dad…..
Pre litrally grabbed Dr Veerma by the shirt…mr.Mehra was pulling prem back….
Prem: I SWEAR SHE'S NOT GETTING MY KIDS WHATEVER THE HELL SHE TRYS SHES NOT GETTING THEM!!!!
Mukti: just stopp let it goo we'll find another doctor…its alright……
Dr Veerma stormed out…prems eyes were wellowing with tears….
Prem: mukti…he's the best doctor in this field………how …how will my jai ever talk…..?
Mukti was too bussy crying her eyes out to speak…
Mr Mehra: mr Prem do you need a doctor in the field of speech theropy?
Prem: yes….
MrMehra: my son Neal can do it……he's a doctor and he might know a lot of people that can help….
Prem: you have a son?......but I thought your daughter wsa your only kid?
Mr.Mehra: noo…umm welll Neal is adopted I adopted him when he was four…god knows what happennd to his parents…but he is a very studious person…he lives in Dehli with is Wife Nisha and twin boys…..

Prem couldn't help but hugs mr Mehra and thank him……..ankita was wishing she was the one reciving the hugg….

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TO BE CONTIUED….
PRECAP:
The next day Prem and mukti took the first flight to dehli too meet Dr.Neal Mehra………

Sorry it wasn't sooo interesting…Soha I promise in the next one I'lll put in a lot of prem and mukti seans….My mom and dad are putting a lock on my room……soo they can limit my computer time…that's why I havnt updated….i swear I'll try to update soon guys….SORRY!!!

Loads of love…
Reeha 😛



Edited by reeha...k - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
hehe I get told off for being on the computer all day to 😆 , my mum was gonna nick my laptop 😭 Luckly I still have it 😉
Anyways good part reeha, hope jai gets better soon and piya (O) goes to jail 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

WOW~~!!!! this part was great too yaar! do update soon!


we'll all be waiting eagerly!


thanks and take care
Soha
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Posted: 18 years ago
Tht was awsomeee... plzzzz count.. soon...

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