updated pg.177: FINALLY FINISHED :D! - Page 10

another bind blowing chapter, thanks and keep on writing. 👏

👏 gr8 work 👏
plz cont soon

aww!jst caught up with ur fanfic!its so good!continue sn!! 😊

Omg you guys are too nice! Anywaysss thanks soo much for all the great comments…im glad you guys liked it as much as I did writing it! ……

RECAP: Everyone is back home…poor jai still cant talk…riya comes and sleeps with prem and mukti for the night…..

BAJAJ HOUSE:

The light was shining through the windows of p-m's bedroom…prem was tired but he looked at the clock and it was 9:00…he got up and noticed…riya and mukti weren't there….he got worried…he got up and saw riya fast asleep on the floor?.....he was about to pick her up…when mukti stopped him…..

Mukti: nooo!!! ….dont touch her…..she kicks REALLYYY HARD!! Trust me I know….
Prem: why is she on the ground?
Mukti laughs: I don't know…she'll roll of the bed…even when shes in the center…and sleep on the ground….
Prem: YOU COULD HAVE GIVEN HER A BLANKET….my poor baby…shes soo cold…
Mukti: try giving her a blanket…she pulls it off…..
Prem: but why the ground…?
Mukti: I don't know…I think she went on you…..
Prem gave a dritty look….he was picking up riya…but she punched …really hard…..
Prem: OMG!!! You made my daughter a BOXER!! She's just like you VERRY VIOLENT!!!
Mukti: shut up…let her sleep it's her birthday…
Prem looked in surprise: really?....
Mukti: yeah you didn't know….? Then she realized that prem…really didn't know….
Mukti went up to prem and kissed his check….
Mukti: it's okeay prem…its okeay…
Prem: I know what I can soo to make her happy …..
Mutki: eat breakfast first….too late he already ran into the washroom…and zoomed out tooo….he came out in a red and white von-dutch hoddi..and jeans…with his hair gelled up…and a the '$' pendant….
Mukti: prem can you ever try to dress…as if your married and have four kids…?
Prem laughs: I could but then you'd want to divorce me….
Mukti gives a dirty look: prem im not shallow…I think you'd look better that way….and besides…jai and Aryan are following your habbits…they wear the type of clothes you wear….i don't want my sweet little boys looking like thugs!!!
Prem: there you boys…then there thugs…just lookk at riya..she looks soo sweet …but who knew she punched like mike Tyson…..
Mukti punched prem….
Prem: OWWW!!! SEE WHAT I MEAN!!!
Mukti just laughed……

THE PARTY:

The house was all decorated in white and purple ballons…riyas favorite coulor…on corner of the room was pilled with girtts…and the house was filled with kids…running all around..the parents were socialzing…..riya was in a whit dress with her hair in pingtails…looking cute as ever….mukti was in a white sarrie…with a purple dising…jai and Aryan were in identical black puma hoddies…with dark jaans with there hair gelled..mukti was right they did dress like prem….piay was in a pink skirt with a black top…everyone looked soo happy….mukti was worried…she was always worried when it came to birthdays….but was relieved when she saw prem come in…..before mukti could reach him…riya tackled him….

Prem: OH!!!! Happy birthday my little boxer!!!
Riya didn't get it…she just gave prem a kiss on the cheack….
Jai and Aryan came up…prem hugged both…then piya…finally mukti came…
Prem: looking hott dear wife…
Mukti: prem….the kids are hear….
Prem: sooo…?
Suddenly someone pulled on his pants…it was riya…
Riya: puppa…yous knows what todays is…?
Prem: yess…its riya sweethearts birthday…
Riya smiled: ok…now wheres my giftii?
Prem pulled out a box…the triplets knew what it was…it was engraved with a 'R'……
Prem: riya you know what I gave to your brothers and sister on there second birthday?....
Riya smiled and pointed to jai's necklace: NECKLACE!!!!
Prem smiled: yupp…and he pulled out a dimond incrested 'r' pendant on a silver chian….he tied it onto riya…he flipped over the pendat it read 'to my angle that boxes in her sleep'
Riya: puppa…I don't get it…?
Prem laughed: you will…some day…..

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The party went great...no faitalies this time around....prem was happy to see his family happy.....he went and tuncked in all the kids.....he went into his bedroom adn saw mikti un winding her saree infront of the vanity...she didnt realsie he was there....he went up behind her and grabed her waist.....
mukti: OMG!!!!! you scared the HELL OUT OFF MEE!!!
prem: SHHHH!! there sleeping..!!
mukti just proceded unwinding...prem grabed the sarees end and pulled her into his arms...and kissed her neck....
prem: soo basantii how many more kids do you think we need...i want another boy and another girll...
mukti: easey for you to say !!! you dont have to go through the PAIN!!!
prem laughed....
prem: im gonna go take a shower....would you like to join me?.....please?
mukti: i would...but i have to go clean up...theres a huge mess
prem: dont give me that sad excuss...why do you think we have all those srvents? (i dont know how to spell that in hindi...sorry 😆) and besides..your probly too late alreadyy...maa probly cleand it all up.....

Prem held her tight....he hadnt held he like that in soo long...in soo long....even mukti felt the same.....

prem: tonight...it's just you and me....no kids...no disturbances....
mukti blushed and turned off the light....

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To be continued....

i hope you enjoyed it...im sorry about the late and short update....i'll update sooon..PROMISE!! and do post your thoughts!

Reeha 😉

plz continue soon thats really gud 👏

good update reeha, the whole family is happily together, lets just hope Piya (O) doesnt escape from prison like komolika 😆

awww 😳 and i loved riya and the boxing bit 😆 😆 😆

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update that part was great

OMG!!! luv the fanfic reeha!!! keep it up and do update soon!!!!

absolutely LOVE the PM romance scenes, just wish u could make them longer though 😉 !!!!

thanks!


Soha

i absolutely love ur fanfic.. please update soon.. this is sooooooo goodd.. 😃