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This fanfic is soo cute!!! I love it.. Please continue soon.. 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago

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You guysss are soo nice...thanks for all the positave feed back...how can i not update...you guiys aree ssooooo nice....

RECAP: Jia is alive....but may never speak again...piya(O) is in police custody....

ONE WEEK LATER...

It had been a long week...depressing and not to mention tyring too....piya's(O) trial had been fixed for two months later...the canadian goverment would be handling it....that means no chance of a death sentance...(DAMN THIS!!).....the whole family was on the plane...tired and ready to go home....riya was practically glued onto prem...he felt soo bad...he wanted to hold on to riya...but jai needed him more...but for some reson jai stuck to mukti...he had grown closer to his mother...and that brought a smile to prems face....

Prem had rented a private jet...the last thing the family needed was stragers looking at his family...for the whole week the 'bajaj family shoot out' was all over the news...the reporters woulndt leave them alone...piya and aryan were asleep...they were tired after arguing over the window seat....riya was asleep inprems lap...she refusedto sleep in her seat...jai was sitting with mukti as she read him a book....prem just looked at his family.....the family he loved soo much....

Mukti: ok jaan what do you want to read next...?
Jai just pointed to the 'peter pan book'...mukti understood....jai smiled and held his mom....
Prem laughing: jai...buddi since when did you become a mamma's boy?....
jai and mukti both shoot dirty looks to prem...
Prem: mukti you really have turned my son against me...
Jai went and kissed prem...and flipped over his pendent...to remind prem what it said....prem laughed....

HOME...

they finally arrived there...home sweet home...it had changed soo much...prem walked into the hall....the family portrait of him mukti and the triplets was still there....he felt someone tugg on his pants...it was riya....

Riya: puppa...im not in the picture....i wanna be in there tooo
prem picked her up and gave her a kiss: no preoblem angle...we'll go get another family photo taken ok..?
riya: OKEAY!

She wadled into her room....prem went and looked...it was purple...she had a huge phot of prem and mukti in there....and one of herself and the triplets...then on the night stand there was a photo frame saying 'Best brother' and in there was a picture of jai...

prem: jaan...how come you dont have aru's picture in hear?....
riya laughed: puppa....aru bhivas picture is on the other night stand....
and there it was...
prem: weres piya's picture?
riya: piya di's frame got brokii...mumma's gonna get it fixed
prem: wheres mine?
riya: your there with mumma
prem: nooo were the picture by myself?
riya: jai bhiiva has all your pictures....puppa jaiv bhiav missed yous alot....

Prem went into jai's room...well it was jai and aryans room....it was just the way he left it...the giant room was half red...and half blue....jai with the blue and aryan with red....he went to jai...who was fast asleep....he kissed his dons forhead...he opend the coberds drawer...what he saw made a tear rush to his eye...jai had all of prems necklaces...each and everyone...he had vertually every photo of him to...and the box...the box thats prem gave jais necklace in...the one engraved with a 'J'....

Mukti came into the room she saw prem had a tear in his eye...she laid her head on his shoulder....

mukti: he missed you alot....
prem: im a terrible father...
mukti looked up...: no...dont say that its not your fault.....
prem: i wasnt there for any of them....i wasnt there for you...
mukti: dont worry your not going anywhere no right?....
prem kissed muktis head: of course...im not going anywhere...ever.....

Prem and mukti went and made sure all the kids were fast asleep..and that they were....Prem walked into his bedroom...he hadnt been in side of it for soo long....he sat on the bed rememberig eahc moment he spent in hear and took for granted....mukti came out in her silk red hight gown...she had taken a shower...she sat beside him...she was about to get up to unpack the suit case when prem pulled her back....

prem: no...not to night....
mukti laughed: prem you may procrastinate.....but i dont...
prem rolled over ontop of her....mukti gave a dirrty look.....
prem: eyy basantii...come on...didnt you miss me?
mukti: noo...i was bussy witht the kids...
prem: speaking of kids how many more do you think we need?
mukti: prem.....we have four...i dont think we need a whole foot ball team...
prem: but i like foot ball.....
the two were inturrupted...

riya: puppa i like foot ball tooo puppa

prem jolted up...he didnt realise that she was there...mukti couldnt stop laughing...poor riya didnt know what was going on....

prem: jaan...what are you doning hear?
riya: i couldnt go sleepii so i came to you...
prem: bu..bu...you were asleep five minutes ago....
mukti: she's your daughter...
riya: puppa i wanna sleep with you and mumma...
prem was giving mukti a 'no...dont do it kind of a look'
but mukti let her arms open and let riya come...
prem didnt mind...but oh well....

Riya went fast asleep...she was sort of snoring....but cute ones....
prem: basanti my daughter went on you she snores....
mukti: shut up...i dont snore....
prem: yess you doo......
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TO BE CONTINUED

I hope you liked i'll update soon...do tell me what you guys thinks....thanks yous

Reeha 😊