updated pg.177: FINALLY FINISHED :D! - Page 8

Created

Last reply

Replies

1.1k

Views

98.3k

Users

80

Likes

8

Frequent Posters

180506 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#71
AWWWWWWWWWWW thanksss yousss!!! your sooo sweeettt....sorryy forr keppping you guys waiting...hears the next bit....OH and when i type i get confused between younger piya and older piya...soo for younger its piya(Y) and older piya(O) alright.....

RECAP: piya(O) took jai and riya...wanting to shoot riya she acidentially shot jai....

The was a crowed surronding them there...the doctor had come adn taken jai out of prems arms....mukti ran after jai like a wild women...wanting to be with him at all costs.....piya(O) walked over to the other triplets....with handcoffs in her hand...aryan and piya(Y) ran up to prem...they were scared to death of her...

piya(O): eyy...sweethearts no need to beee scared.....im not gonna hurt you....
aryan:OH YEAH!!! WHY DID YOU SAY THAT WHEN YOU HURT JAI!!!!!
piya(O) cryed: no...jaan i..dint...no....i would never....
piya(Y):NOOO!! JUST GOO AWAYY!!! LEAVE US ALONE.....B..evause of you we...we...might...never see...jai....bhia....again.....

prem: JUST GOO AWAY LEAVE ME AND MY FAMILY IN PEACE!!!!.....officer i think she should leave....before i KILL HER!!!

the officer took piya(O) away in the police car...

mukti was sitting in a corner...all currled up in a ball...crying her eyes out...aryan came up to his mom....he couldnt bare to watch his mother in more pain...she had suffered enogh as it was.....he went and help his mom....

aryan: mumma...you know how stobbern jai is...he'll come back...he'll come back....
mukti just held her son and started to cry...
prem was about the go to mukti...but riya was in his lap...fast asleepp...cluching jais necklace in her tinyy hands...

12 hours had past.....aryan had his head in his mothers lap...and was fast asleepp...prerna was holding piya(Y) and both had gone to sleep...mukti had her head aginst prems shoulder while riya was still aspleep in prems arms....prem and mukti were teh only ones awake....
prem:mukit....im soryyy....
mukti:for....what....
prem: for...for...for not being there...with you and the kids...
mukti:no...no...its not your fault....prem....??
prem: yes?
muktis eyes were filled with tears....: prem...nothing will happen to my jai right?.....if...if somthing does.....i...i wont be able to live....i wont.....
prem realised...mukti could have resentited the triplets for piya(O) being there mom.....but she didnt....she loved them with all her heart....he could se it in her eyes....prem put riya onto the chair beside him...and held his wife...the were both crying when the doctor came out.....

Doctor: Mr.Pream Bajaj?
Prem stood up and shook the doctors hand...the doctor could see how tensed he was....
Doctor: ummm welll....your...you son....
Mukti: STOP STALLING TELL ME WHAT HAPPEND TO MY BABY!!!!
the doctor knew not to mess with mothers...
doctoor: well...ummm he's fine now...we restored well....um fixed his punctured lung....but i doubt he'll ever talk again....
prem stood there in disbeleif.....mukti talked...
mukti: WHAT THE HELL IS THIS NONSENS HE WAS TALKING JUST FINE .....EVEN WHEN HE GOT SHOOT!!!!
doctor: well...he was shoot twice one bullet in the lungs...and one on the neck...the one on the neck...damaged his voice box...he 'might' get better...but the theropy is VERY expensive....
prem: money...is not a factor...i have plenty...
the doctor looked at him in disbelief...cause prem looked really bad right now...(trust me he looked like he hadent eaten and showerd and sleept in days...)
Prem: WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU LOOKING AT!!!
doctor: ummm...do you want to know how much...?
mukti took out a cheack book..she signed a cheack....
mukti: Take how ever much you need....if you want anything else let us know....
the doctor realsied...they were the bajaj family....the one that all the buissness people were soo excited to see...
prem: NOW!!! CAN I GO SEE MY SON!!!!
doctor:ummm...sure.....

Prem and mukti walked up to there son...he looked soo restless...tired....ill...mukti ran her fingers through her sons soft brownhair...prem held her and jai's hand...just then riya walfed in...

riya:jaiv bhiva?
prem: jaan..what are you doing upp.....its 2:30 in the morning....go to sleep....
riya walked upto the bed.....and climbed onto prems lap...she kissd jai's forhead...opend her tiny hands...

riya: lookk jaiv bhiav...i kepted you necklavce safe!!! wake upp....you alreaddy tooks such a long nap!

mukti held riya and kissed her: sweet heart...bhia's a little tired...let him sleep...

riya was about to leave when she realised jai was holding her hands.....

prem smiled...he took the necklace out of riya's little hands...and placed it back onto jais nceck...

riya:good puppa...thats were it belongs.....

========================================================

TO BE CONTINUED!!...

sorry i wrote soo little...i still hope you guys liked it...i'lll update soon! PROMISE!!! please do post your thoughts

Reeha 😊
Zoe89 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#72
yay first one 2 comment...am glad jai's not dead n cntinu very very very sn
Ashi91 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#73
oh im so happy jai is not dead ......plzz continue soon .......i luv ur fanfic
Peanutt Butterr thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#74
thxx so much 4 updating...plzzz continue soon..i m glad jai is not dead...
sweety567 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Groupbie Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#75
πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘

πŸ‘
Shabzz thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#76
I'm so HAPPy Jai's not dead.... Its a great read... so do continue soon
karen singh thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#77
thats so gud plz continue soon πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
pm4eva thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#78
omg!!!!!!!!! riya is soo cute and i hope kai gets to speak again πŸ‘ πŸ‘
amber0802 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#79
i hope u cont sooon...its really touchinn.... 😭
kvashishat thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 18 years ago
#80
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sp sweet i lked the little gurl awwwwwwwww cont soon πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".