Rishabh and Prerna Bajaj ff updated pg 22 - Page 9

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Posted: 19 years ago
#81
Hey cool story Sammie...loved the last part...KAsak & Rish have a lot of explaination to do now 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#82
I'm just in love with the situations in your fantabulous fanfic sammie(man, kya baat hai rocking vdo mixes n ff, way to go!) got it featured on the front pg of our BnB shweta sticky :D!
man, I'm not the sort to read ffs, this namzydi had to gaud me into reading them..and I'm getting addicted now!!I want more PRB action lolz!!really fits the chars as in the canon..kaas kekta implemented this storyline sigh..

Here's some tryout template covers for ur ff!
other PRB ff writers can incorporate them in their ffs too if they want :)!









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Posted: 19 years ago
#83
rick thanks so much for the support, i am glad u like my fan fic, by the way hang in there, for the big show- 20 mins long hahahah!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#84
awsome riki .they rr really cool.And whats with this didi 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 hey sam,

awesome stuff, fantabulous fanfic is what i can say about your posting. as always, i am happy seeing your fanfic, thanks again, keep smiling and posting
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Posted: 19 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: nuts4kzk

wow sammie,its wonderfull,totally rocking and whats with this sam pregnancy and bajaj gtting shocked 😆 😆 does he want prerna to go in same direction in this age or what 😆 😆



no re he is just shocked that anurag at this age is still u knoww...lolzzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
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LOL sammie 😆
he should know anurag is one rockstar!!! 4-4 wives is not a joke 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: nehavarun

LOL sammie 😆
he should know anurag is one rockstar!!! 4-4 wives is not a joke 😊



i know but, u r right!!😆😆😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#89
Bajaj hands over the phone to Prerna, he gives it to her, as if he scared that she might do something to him, lolzzz.

R: yeh loh Prerna, baat karo

Prerna just snatches the phone from him and

P: Hello Kasak!

Kasak has hung up.

P: Hello, Helloooooooo!! Aare isne toh phone rakh diya.

Rishabh wants to laugh but can't, Kunal asks him to control himself.

Prerna looks at father and son, and is a bit annoyed, she looks up her number in incoming calls and calls her back.

P: Hello, Kasak, phone kyun rakh diya!

K: Wrong number!!

P: Dekho Kasak, I know its u, I am ur mother, I know.

K: Oh mom!!! U! I thought it was someone else, trying to bother me.

P: Shut up! ( Neha I so wanted to write , mein tera sarvanaash kardungi lolzz)

K: This is not fair, dad asks me, to not to say anything to anybody, and when I obey him, its u who is mad at me.

P: I am sorry beta, but u should have let me know, I am ur mother

K: U right mom, but we were scared that u might ruin our plan. I should have, I am sorry… I am coming to meet u, and dad now… I hope he is doing fine.

P: Yup I will be waiting for you, beta. I missed you so much, love ya beta.

K: Love u too, mom. Bye.

P: Bye beta.

They hang up and Prerna goes to Rishabh, and sits by him.

R: So, u have changed. I mean u were very cool with her, good job!

P: Mr. Bajaj, I was cool with her, because it was not her fault, but its ur fault.

R: How's it my fault? Kunal, is it my fault?

K: You know what, I will go and pay the bills and stuff… since we have to check out, this evening.

P: Mr. Bajaj, aap mujhpar vishwaas nahin karte? Or yeh kis plan ke baaremein Kasak baat kar rahi thi.

R: Dekho Prerna, u know that I trust you, but u were living at a place, where nothing was safe to disclose. If u would have known, where I was and all, I am sure someone would have found out as well.

Prerna, gets up and is about to feed her Rishabh some medicine.

Rishabh looks at her lovingly, Prerna gives him a cute loving smile.

P: Aapko meri yaad nahi aayi.

R: nope, not a bit

P: Jhooth bol rahe aap.

R: U missed me, I didn't miss u.

P: u didn't miss me?

Rishabh nods in a negative.
Prerna keeps quiet and goes on changes his dressing on the head.

Rishabh sees her Prerna, a lil upset, while she is continuing to change the bandage on his forehead, he says.

R: Kaise miss karta tumhe Prerna, there was no time for me to miss u.
Tum mere saath hee toh thi, 24/7.

Prerna is surprised, she stops. He holds her hand and says

R: Humari beti, Kasak mein mujhe tum nazar aati thi. She is just like you. Like mother like daughter. She took such good care of me, she is a papa's girl.

Prerna smiles and says

P: Jaise Kunal aapki parchayi hai, I am sure jab aap mujhse door honge, toh Kunal mujhe aapki kammi mehsus nahi hone dega. After all like father like son.

Prerna and RIshabh hug, they look at the door and they find their kids, Kasak and Kunal looking at them.

Prerna and Rishabh look at each other, and share a moment, and then look back at the kids.

Kasak goes running to her parents, and gives them tight hug.

Prerna and Rishabh kiss their daughter and call Kunal towards them too. Kunal joins them in the hug as well.

P: Kasak, u have grown more beautiful.

Ka: Thanks, mom. Aakhir beti kiski hoon?

P: Thank u kids!

Kasak and Kunal are confused.

Ka: Thanks? For what mom?

P: For taking care of my husband.

Ku: Excuse me matashree, but he is our father too.

P: But my husband first.

Ku: true. Ur welcome ma

Ka: Yea, u r welcome mom.

Rishabh feels like his family is complete when he sees his kids and their mother together, but then he suddenly notices the absence of Tushaar, Kuki, Vishakha and most importantly Sneha! He didn't forget Prem either.

R: Prerna, baaki sab baache kahaaan hai- Sneha, Tushaar, Kuki, Vishaakha, and Mukti.

P: Basu house, mein hain.

R: Hmmm… do they know, I am?

P: Tushaar and Anurag had come here, Tushaar is in office asked me to call u when u are conscious, but I can't get through, he is very busy these days trying to get a contract for Kay channel.

R: ok…K channel, the one that u are, interesting.

K: Dad, are u ready, I mean I think we should leave now.

R: Yes son, let's go…

Prerna sees this disappointment on Rishabh's face, when he heard about k channel.

P: toh mein kya karti Mr. Bajaj, I wanted the things to be the way they were before u left, so that u will find it exactly the way it was.

R: How could u, prerna?

Prerna is shocked

Kunal and Kasak are like here we go again. They decide to pack their dad's stuff while their parents fight.

R: How could u possibly think, that a small channel, like that will bring things back to normal. It took me 2 decades to bring BTN to where it was, and u were tryin to bring kay channel at that position, there is absolutely no comparison. BTN was at its pinnacle of success, Prerna, no matter how hard u tried, Prerna, things would not have been the same, they never will, and that's the bottom line.

Prerna is shocked, but at the same time understands what her RIshabh's trying to say, she agrees with him, things would not have been the same, coz BTN had Rishabh Bajaj, and Kay channel had Anurag Basu, it was his channel at the end.


P: Aap thik keh rahe hai, Mr. Bajaj. I couldn't have bought things to where they were before.

(She smiles).

Rishabh takes her in his arms and says…

R: But now they are gonna be, soon.

He kisses her cheek and they smile.
Kunal and Kasak smile too

They are on their way to the car. Kunal and Kasak are in the front seat, Kunal drives them home, to their new home, Bajaj mansion.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#90
AWESOME stuff Sammie, loved this part:)

Kunal is MINE!

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