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Posted: 19 years ago
#81
it fab 👏
do count soon!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#82
daht was gr8 please continue s0on.. 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guys thnx for the lovely comments ill try to continue relly s0on.. 😃 love you all 🤗
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Posted: 19 years ago
#84
Ya plz continue soon
it's 12.30 a.m in India and i m awake hear only to read ur fan-fic so plz continue soon
i just luv ur fan-fic and p-m cute romantic scenes
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i am so sorry SHILPA and jazmeen and eveyr1 else..sry for the delay and i hope you..enjoy this part...

recap= sneha's mehndi rasam is on, mukti dissapears during sneha's rasam..

next morning..it is really un believable that mukti is still sleeping and prem woke up..at 7 bkuz of the preparations of sneha's wedding.after 6 months and for the 1st time..mukti is sleeping so late..and every1 is confused..and are damn sure now that somehting is wrong with her...

prerna- rpem whats rong with mukti?..wo kaha hai kitna kaam baqi hai somehting is definitely rong..she didnt even com down ones..

prem with a confused lo0k ha ma i know per subha se wo lati hui hai i dont know usse kya hua hai..mein usske liye breakfast bhi kayke geya tha per she didnt want to it..

sneha- dekho na aaj meri hsaadi hai aur mukti kah bhi dikhai nahi day rahi hia sneha makes a sad face..

prem- dont worry sneha mein usse bulla ke lata hu..now smile

prem gos up to his room opens the door..he sees her..walking around the room holding her head he gets confused..

prem- mukti mukti

mukti- KYA HAI?..

prem- gets scared..kam down whats rong?..

mukti- prem get out of here samjha7y dont bother me just leave me alone kitni der se dekho mujhse raha nahi jaraha..mujhe to lagta..h-a-ai/../she runs ot the bathrrom..

prem loughs..mukti tum thik to ho na..
mukti coms out of the bathrrom wiping her face with a towel..

mukti- tumhe hasi kyun arahi hai..mera dam ghut raha hai..ab ek our minute intezar nahi ker sakti..oh god..log ye sab samhal te kaise hai..

prem- chill chill mukti..tum itna gussa kyun ker rahi hu..?..what is the deal

mukti- BHUK..

prem what?..he startd to lough relly loud..

mukti starts to wine and cry..subba se mujhe bhuk lagi hai kissi ne bhi aker mujhe ek baar bhi nahi pucha ke breakfast kerlo..bhook se mein mar rahi hu..urrrrr

prem cant stop loughing.. to issliye meri mukti itna gussa ker rahi hai..tumhe bhuk lagi hia?..mein to breakfast le ke aya tha per tumne hi mana ker diya tha..aur btw..tum aaj kal kuch zyada hi kha rahi ho..
prem loughs even louder..

mukti is burning up..

mukti- urrrrrr...prem...i will kill you..

prem- acha baba im leaving aur ye lo khalo..

prem loughs and tries to leave when mukti holds his hand..

mukti- prem mujhe tumse kuch kehna tha?..

prem- ha bolo kya kehna hai?.,

mukti- wow -wo..suddenly prerna coms in..

prerna- bata niche chalo sab tumahra intezar ker rahay hai..

mukti- ji choti ma..prerna leaves..

prem- ha to tum kya kehna chahti thi

mukti- vo..mein..kuch nhai baad mein bata ti hun..niche intezar ker rahay haina.,mukti gos down

mukti- sneha?

sneha- mukti..ye kya?..she gigiles..ye sari tumhe fit nahi ho rahi hai..i think u gained a lil weight..

mukti smiles..yahi to problem hai ab mujhe kuch fit nahi ayega,,oh god...dekho mein kitni moti lagrahi hun..na?..

sneha- anywayz..dont worry..hota hay..

all the preparations are on..when wedding time arrives..
mukti brings sneha down along wiht few other girls..

and few other girls are kuming her way with a hughe thalis..
sneha and mukti are going donw the stairs..when this girl accidently poushes mukti..

and mukt's stomach hits the stare railing..

much- AHHHH..

every is shcoked thy look up,,

mukti is holding her stomach reaaly tight now..

mukti- ahhh..p-r--e-m.. every1 run to mukti..

prem- mukti u okay?

mukti- mera mera -bach..

den she gains control and gos up to the girl who pushed her shez walking in fool force... 😆

every is confused to see mukti over react..

she gos and slaps that girl..

mukti- tumhe dikhay nahi deta aandhi ho kya ager mere bachay ko kuch ho geya to..mukti is crying relly loud now..

girl- s-o-rr-y..mukti..maine tumhe atay hua nahi dekha..

every1 is totally stunned and speechless..

suddenly pandit ji speaks out..- muhurat ka samay ho raha hai..evbery1 gos accept for mukti prem and mukti keep stareing at each other..prem and mukti both have tears in there eyes..mukti cries and runs to her room..prem stays thr in snehas mandap..

mukti..is wiping..she calls her doctor..

doctor- kya?>..mukti i told you to take care of yourself tumhari pregnancy ko 3 months ho chukay hai..you shouldnt be careless..kal maine kaha tha na stay out of danger anywayz i am coming..

suddenly prem bangs in he locks the door..he looks at mukti with a helpless lo0k..

prem- m-u-kti..bacha?

mukti- ha duffer..yahi to mein tumhe kal se bata neki koshish ker rahi thi i am pregnant..

prem- what?>..u mean pregnant like whne you have a baby..

mukti- ha baba..

prem- u mean MY child..mera bacha,

mukti gets mad and says- NAHI PEROSI KA..OBVIOUSLY TUMHARA,,

prem gigiles..prem yanay ki mein prem prerna sharma baap banay vala hun..

mukti- ha ha ha ...mprem couldnt cntrol himslef..he lifts up mukti ..

prem- oh my god i cant believe this mukti u dont know tumne aaj mujhe kitni nari khushi dihai..i love you mukyi i love you..

mukti- ahh..prem choro na mujhe chakar arahai hai bring me down,,

prem- oh i am sorry..
prem- months?..

mukti smiles..- 3..

prem- aur tumnbe mujhe bataya nahi?..

mukti- prem kam down mujhe hi kal pata chala sneha ki mehndi kay time per mujhe docotr ka phone aya mujhe shak tha to mein check up ke liye chali gayi..

prem suddenly realyses what happened downstaris he is crying now..

prem- mukti hamaray bachay ko kuch ho ga to nahi na niche wo..

mukti is in tears..mukti mujhe vishwas hai bhgawan mere saath assa nahi karayga..ek baar ussne mujhse mera bacha chinna hai dussri bar nahi..
they both cry and hug each other..

on the other side sneha and samarth weeding is over..suddenly some 1 coms in..

prerna- yes..

doctor- mukti?..whwre is she?

prerna- upar..every1 follows her..upstairs..

doctor- dekhiye maine innka check-up ker liya hai shes fine and her baby too..take care of her tisra mahina chal raha hai..

eevry1 is extreamelyu happy..

bajaj- array prerna ji ab to aap dadi banay bhali hia..
prerna- aur aap dada...they all lough..
and prem kisses mukti on her cheeks..
debo and basu family congratyulate them..debo smiles..
she gos to a corner and calls komo..

mukti is pregnant..both gic evil Loughs

preview-5 months later..mukti leaves..for shimla..
Edited by desi_gr3l - 19 years ago
Jasleen thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#86
That's soooooo cute. Plz countinue soon.
And good job= )
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Posted: 19 years ago
#87
tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooogud i luv it plz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#88
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thnxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx a lot 4 postig well done
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Posted: 19 years ago
#89
sooooooooooooooooooo sweet, plz con soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#90
dat was great continue soon i hope debo doesn't do anythin 2 harm da baby 😡 hope there will be more sneha n samarth scenes

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