chalenge says alvida{last epi page-133} - Page 11

hey all thnx for the lovely comments 😛 ..but i want u all 2 guess what is rong with mukti that the doctor refuses 2 abort the child...please keep guessing...and i will be posting the next part relly s0on..😛

when update soon
da suspense is killing me 😛

Wow fantastic part keep it up
I think (guessing) prem cums 2 know and he gives doctor more money thn debo and so doctor refuses 2 abort mukti's child
Do continue soon
It was a nice part

omg..that was wonderful 👏 keep it up..dear 😛 and i relly dun kno wah it can be,,,hmm,,,i kinda agree with shilpa.. tho😃

here u go guys cnt keep u guys waiting any longer..enjoy!!!..

recap= debo and doctor plan to abort mukti and prem's child.

debo goes home with mukti..mukti drops debo home..suddenly debo recieves a call from here mamma komolika..
debo is sitting down with the whole basu family she excuses herself nervously aND GOS TO A CORNER TO SPEAK SHE CHECKS HER RIGHT AND LEFT TO SEE IF ANY1 IS DER..

debo in a shaky voice.. kaha tha na maine yaha fone maat kijiye bohot risk hai mom..

komolika is mad and frustrtaed..komo- what the hell is this debo maien tujhse kaha tha ke doctor se baat ekr lena..aur doctor ne mujhe abhi phone ker ke kaha ke tunay bacha girra ne se mana ker diya,,

debo gives a evil smile..and dos her regular nautanki..

debo- chilax mom..aap samajh nahi rahi hai mere paas isse acha plan hai jisse mein sirf prem se shaadi nahi balke..prem ke dil mein bhi ghus jaungi..

komo- what r u saying mere samajh mein kuch nahi araha hai..

debo starts to explain what really happened in the hosptal..

FLASHBACK..

debo troughing money on doctor's desk..
debo- ye lo paise aur kaam jald ho jana chahiye..

doctor- mein assa nahi ker sakti..

debo is schoked..dont worry doctor aur paise chahiye?..to thik hai..day dungi paise ki fikar maat ker samjhi aur iss bachay ko duniya mein anay se rok..

dcotor is scared..and is sweatin relly badly..dekho debonita its not a eASY JOB TUM JANTI HO..MEIN EK BACHAY KO TO MAAR SAKTI HUN PER DO DO BACHAY?..NA BABA YE NAHI HOGA ISSE TO MUKTI HI MERJAIGE..

debonita is shocked..jaise usski paro se zameen khisak gayi..

debonita- a doctor what do you mean?..

doctor- mukti deshmukh ke kok may do bachay hai..she is pregnant.. with twins

debonita- TWINS?...ab ye ek naya shot she bangs her hand on the table and walks out...she keeps thinking and suddenly givs a evil smile..and says

debo- mukti tumahre dono bachay iss duniya mein zarur ayenge per dear tum..she loughs tumhara kaam tamam..she plays with her dupatta..
she gos back into the cabin..she explains her plan to the doctor both giv weird smiles..

debo- ye plan zarur kaam karayga acha hua ki mukti jurwa bacho ka janam daigi..isse meri problem bhi asan hojaigi...doctor loughs..and sasy you are so smart debo tumahra demag..kya kahu ha per iss baar paise bhi utne zyada kyunke ye bhi bohot risky hai..

BACK TO REALITY..

komo is now holding her heads..as if shes gonna faint..

debo- mamma mamma u okya?

komo- baap re baap do so bachay?...jurwa..

debo - yes mom aur maine doctor se keh bhi diya hai..ke mukti aur bajaj family ko pata nahi chalna chahiye ke usske jurwa bachay hai..both lough out loud..debo suddenly feels som1s steps towards her and taps on her shoulder she gets scared and hungs up the fone..

debo -tum?..ab-bab..
prem- ha mein..wo tum sab logo ko invite kerne aya tha..aur khas kerke tumhe your my friend aur tum lai gayi thina mukti ko hospital mein..anywayz..aglay haftay mukti ki god baraihay aur mei tumse kehne aya hu ke dont go back to kolkata ok?..

debo to herslef- thank god ussne kuch nahi sunna..naywayz prem darling tumhe chor ker mein tumhe kaha jaungi...hahahah 😡

back at bajaj house..every1 is happy..that a new member is coming..every1 is buzy shopping, preparing for his or hers arrival..mu7kti's god bharai..is in few dayz..

mukti is lying down in her room with a confused lo0k as if shes relly troubled by something.,

prem coms in..from offcie and kisses her forhead..

prem- good evening..kya hua?..u seem tensed,,

mumti- thr is definitely soemhting rong?..

prem {smiles}..with what?..

mukti- wth my pregnancy..

prem- gets worried..r u okay doctor ne kuch kaha kya?..

mukti gets irratated..nahi baba doctor sasy everything is fine,, mukti gos up2 prem and outs her head on his shoulder..

mukti- you know kabhi kabhi assa lagta haike..kuch garbar hai..assa lagta hai ke mere ander sirf ek zindagi nahi ek aur bhi hai..

prem lough out loud..- r u crazy?..mukti he cheks her forehead..u dont have fever right?..

mukti- stop loughing..

prem- u mean 2 say u feel like..thr is 1 more baby in yr womb?..

mukti- i dont know...ek ma bata sakti hai its a owne's instict..

prem- oh cmon mukti ager humaray tiwns hotay to dcotor mujhe bata da tina bata tina?..

mukti- yes per mujhe assa lagta hai..that not only 1..

prem just shuts her up..kuch aat kaho just relax nothing like that..

mukti- ahh..ouch,,she smilles..

prem- kay hua?..

mukjti- laat mari...

prem- what ?..kisna i didnt mukti i didnt..

mukti slightly hits him on his head..bewacuf bachay nay..

prem embarassed...o.i.c per mein pahli baar baap ban raha hun mujhe kaise pata chalta?..
prem gos up to mukti..and outs his head..

prem- wow..i can feel it..
assa feeling mujhe kabhi anhi aya..
mukti smiles..its such a gr8 feeling..per tumahra shaitan sirf mujhe tang kerta hai din bhar..

prem- relly..?...he gos close to her stomach and points a finger,,

prem- aap mammi ko parayshan kerte ho?..good lagay raho..

mukti opens her mouth..U..

prem runs out of the room..

mukti- prem tumne keh to diya..ke assi koi baat nahi hai..per mujhe abhi lag raha hai..ke mera sirf ek bacha nahi dusra bhi hai..ek ma ki baat kabhi galat nahi hoti per doc ne to?...mukti then realyses its probably rong ,,

prerna gos to prem's samadhi where she meets anurag..

anurag- bohot khush lag rahi ho..

prerna smiles..ha kyun na hun..kuhc mahinop ke baad hum dono dad aur dai banay ja rahay hai..

anurag- mein nahi tum aur mr,bajaj,,

prerna is shocked..and heartbroken..

suddenly prem sees both his parents siting doen he hears thr conversation and gets emotional..
prem gos up2 anurag and hugs him...both prerna and anurag are stunned,,

prem- papa phir kabhi aap ye mat kahi ga..jitna haat daddy aur ma ka hai utt hak aap ka bhi hai mujhper mukti per aur hamare bachay per..aap ki wajay se he to mujhe ye khushia milli hai..

anurag confused- mere wajay se?..

prem- ha aapki..ussdin ager aapne mujhe samjhaya na hota to mukti saamrth ki ho jati..aaj aapne aapne dono bacho ki zindagi sawari hai aap kehte haina..ke zindagi mein aapne sirf logo ko dard diya hai..aap kabhi kissi ka acha nahi ker sakay per dekhiye na..appne mujhe mukti daidi aur sneha ko saamrth..

ager mukti- saamrth ke shaadi din aapne mujhe vishwas na di laya hota to uss din sneha aur mein hum dono bekher jatay per aapne..aaj hum dono ko khusiya di hai hum dono ko..anurag basu ne zindagi bher dukho ka samna kiya ahi poer aab bas mein prem aur sneha hum dono mil ker aapki zindagi sawa renge aur ap aapka pota ya poti bhi to ayega..jo aap ko samhalay ga..

anurag gets really touvhed tears of happiness..are flowing..anurag hugs prem tight..and prerna coms from back..and hugs them too..kasakuti happy song is played on the back...

prem- ab bas sneha ki kami hai..
three of them lough..and put thr flowers on prem samadhi..

mukti appni shak ko mita na chahit hai thats why she gos back to the doctor..to get re checked..incase doc make som mistake but she is relly sure about having twins..

mukti is passing by the doctros cabun whn she sees a door opened of another cabin she sees sneha and saamrth sitiing down with a doctor disscusing..mukti listens to thr conversation...and is shocked...

prevew- sneha is in tears..the whole family try controllling her..when prem speaks up..

prem- with tears in his eyes.."mein appna aur mukti ka bacha sneha aur saamrth ko dena chahti hun"..eevry1 is shcoked..mukti stunned..and faints..

wow dat was a great update who would hav thought dat mukti was gonna hav twins i wonder why mukti faints well update soon can't wait 2 read da next update

mehnoom i hav 2 say dis u relly do stick 2 yr words u said yr fan-fic will be diffrent thn others n here u go its different and the best..please update s0on its 2 gewd 😛

omgggggggggg it's awesom i can't wait 4 da next part. plzzz can u write next part soon. love u 😊

Just started reading your fan fic, it is really good. Kept me rooted to the chair. Keep up the good work. And continue soon.

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thnx 4 posting its really hatke plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz con soon poor smarath don say dis wid him mukti sis so mean 😡