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anywayz ill continue.. 😃

part#9

recap= sneha and samarth spend the night, mukti sees sneah crying and running oput of the hotel.

now=scene#1

sneha is crying and wiping her tears and runnig as fast as she can she wanted 2 move far away from this place from her past from samarth and from what happneed last night.

mukti sees sneah heading out she gets scared to see sneah ion that situation she follows him..and prem is sleeping in his room..when he sees mukti is not der in the room..he gets confused...so decides to see if she is with sneha..

mukti- rukko sneha stop kaha jarahi ho..

sneha dos not listen to mutki and runs as fast as she can wiping her tears..and her mind was on what samarth told her how he only loves mujkti and last night was only a mistake for him..sneah gets tired and stops..

mukti catches up and prem sees mukti and sneah standing in the corner..\

mukti- kaha jarahi ho sneha whats tong kaha thi tum appne kamre mein bhi nahi thi?..whats the matter?..problem kya hai..tum ro kyun rahi hai..

sneha- mein jinna nahi chahti mukti i want to die

mukti- kya hua?..mujhe batao mein tumhari dost huna..

sneha starts mumbling..mei..inmein..wo voo..mein aur samar t..samrth

mukti- tum aur samarth kya?

sneha- samarth aur mein kal raat ek saat thay..

mukti is shcoked..

mukti- what?,..\

sneha- falls on the ground and starts crying mein samarth se bohot pyar kerti hun..per wo sirf kal raat ko ek mistake samajh ta hai..maine ussay apna tan mann sab sopa aur wo kehta hai ke ussay sirf ek choti si galti hui hai..mein ma kya kya kahungi aaj maine mom ka bharosa tor diya mein kahi mu dikhane ke layak hi nahi hun..mein marjana chhati hun..

mukti is in tears..and remebers how she had 2 go trough the same pain when..she was with prem..

mukti- mein tera dard saamjh ti hun per iss baat ka

solution sirf ek hai..saamrth ko tumse ]shaadi kerni paraygi..chinta maat ker choti ma koissbaray mein kuch bhi pata nahi chalayga..samjhi tu..eb rona band ker..mein samarth se baat karungi..

sneha and mukti hug they start 2 leave and tunr around..when they both stare in shock

they see prem...crying in anger..mukti sneha try stopping him...tbut prem runs baq to the hotel..he is really angry burning up in fire..

mukti- prem suno meri baat...prem dos not listen he keeps walking...he bursts into samarths room...

and hold his color..
prem- what the hell do u think of yourself..sneah coms in between tries to let go his colar off prems hand..

sneha- prem what r u doing..choro samarth ko..

prem- hat jao sneah i said move..

prem is still holding saamrth- meri bahen ke saath raat guzar neke baad tu kehta hai ke ye ek choti si galti hai?..tu aapne aap ko kya samajh ta ahi ha?..meri bahen ki saat assa kerna ka haak maine abhi tak kissi ko nahi diya hai../prem punches saamrth

samarth- prem meri baat to sunno?..

mukti- stop it prem leave him kya ker rahay ho..dcen starts the real fight..dishum dishum.. 😆 samarth hiting prem prem hiting samarth

prem was about to kick him..realy hard when samarth lifts up his finger saying STOP..

samarth- bohot ho chuka mr,sharma..mein tunhari bahen se pyar nahi kerta jana chahte ho mkiss se pyar kerta hu..ye ye ladki jo tumhare paas hai..tumahri khud ki biwi MUKTI DESHMUKh..prem gets even mad and punches saamrth

prem- u bas***d..how dare you?..tujhe saram nahi ati meri samne meri hi biwi ko pyar kerne ki baat ker raha hai..tune khud mujhe aur mukti ko milaya tha aur aaj tu ye kehraha hai..nahi i dont care..tujhe meri bahen se hsaadui kernji paraygi ..wo koi khilona nahi ahi ke ek bar khela..to phir phek diya..

sneha coms from nowhere..and givs prem a slap.. every1 is shcoked..

sneha- mr,prem sharma aap kon hotay hai meri zati zindagi mein dakhal dene bhala?..ha...kaha tha tumahra pyar jab tumhe sharad ka saat diya kaha tha tumara pyar jab maien utmhare waja se aapne bacha khoya..

prem is heart broken..and cries and leaves..mukti follows him..

mukti- prem

prem- mein sneah ne thik hi kaha hai mein kabhi acha bhai nahi bensaka..kabhi nahi..

mukti- tum assa kyun soch te ho abhi jo tumne larai ki wo to aapne bahen keliye kina..cmon dont worry wo janti hai ke tum usse bohot pyar kerti ho..aur gussay mein kehdiya ussne dil pe maat lo..thik hai..

prem- nahi mukti i dont care what sneah says samarth ko usse shaadi ker nahi paraygi nahi to

mukti gets scared...kya karo ge tum?

prem- then i sure to god ill kill him

on the toher side..debo is watchign all the fun

debo- ooo..to ab samarth aur prem ke beech darar per gayi hai..aur samarth hi wo ek dor hai jisse use kiya ja sakat hai..prem aur mukti ke beech unnka history bhi to reh chuka hai..samarth ka pyar mukti ke liye kam nahi hua..aur ab prem- samarth ki larai acha mokka hai..prem aur mukti mein duriya lanay ka..per kaise?..she then givs an evil smile..ya phir mujhe sahi mokkay ka intezar kerna chhaiye..ill do that kehte haina sabar ka phal mitta hota hai..

samarth is packing his bags mukti coms to see him..

samarth- tum?..

mukti- saamrth..tum kaha jarahay ho?

samarth- dekho mein sirf yaha aya tha tumhare liye ab mujhe jana chahiye..

mukti- ager tumhe sneha se pyar nahi tha tol kal?

samarth- please mukti i dont want to talk about last night..please..wo sirf galti thi aur mein pahle se sherminda hun..mukti tries to stop him but samarth decides he wants 2 leave...sneha also decides she wants to leave..but before that she wants 2 talk 2 prem..she feels sad and gulity for accusing prem..the borther who care sos much for her.

knock- knock

prem- com in..

sneha- prem
prem stands up he moves to the window

sneah- i am sorry..

prem- nahi sneha i am galti meri hai emin kabhi acha bhai nahi ben saka..

sneah- kon kehta hai?..tumne kal jo kiya usske baad tum duniya ke sabse achay bhia ho..mein karahi hun prem mera dil nahi legraha hay yaha..tum aur mukti raho enjoy karo..ye tumahra honeymoon hai..aur meine aur samarth ne milker issay kharab ker diya..

prem- nahi sneha tum ne kuch nahi kiya uss samarth ko mein nahi chorunga usse tumse shaadi kerni paraygi and ill make that sure..

sneha- koi faid anahi cmon prem..jo humse pyar na kare ussay shaadi ekr neka kya faida?..bolo i might not be happy my entire life after marrying samARTH HE WILL AL;WAYS LOVE SOME1 ELSE..aur mein uss per ek boj nahi bana chahti per mujhe yakeen hai ek din wo mere sachay pyar ko samjhay ga zor zabardasti kerke hum kissi ki zindagi berbaad nahi ker saktay mere khayal se..ye shaadi ke baat meri zindagia ur bhi buri ho sakti hai
mein ek asshiq ka intezar ker lunga per kab tak ek pati ka intezr karu?..ke wo mujhe apnay issliye sab bhagwan per chor do aur iss mein mera bhi dosh hai not only..samarth oer im equally in fault wiht him

prem- thik hai i think your right..per mother india

sneha- mein unnay bata dungi mein jhut bol na nahi chahti...maine galti ki ahi aur mein aapni galti manugi..they both give e ach toher a hug..prem kisss her forehead..

prem- take care...

debo on the pther isde is frustrated that her plan..didnt quit work samarth sneha are leaving..and now she has to think of a different plan..

prem and mukti stay in mauritus..for 2 more weeks..dey njoy every moment of it..and they are coming baq to india..and also debo coms baq to india with empty hands..the promise she made to komo she couldtn fulfill it..now will debo-komo make up a different plan?..what will it be?..will p-m get seperated?. to know more keep reading...

to be contin.........
guyz please leave comments...let m know how this is so far i know its not much acciting..but i promise..my fan-fci will be hatkay then all here..in one way so plz keep reading..

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it is hatke congrates yaar u r brialant so nic poosr sneha ejzoooooooooo don b so mean but hes luv wid som 1 else 😭

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hey guyz sry for the delay anywayz enjoy!!!

recap= sneha,samarth go baq to mumbai leaving prem-mukti they spend 2 weeks in mauritus and now they are kuming baq to mumbai from their honeymoon.

now

prem has soap allover his face and his hands. he touches the door knob but is unable to open it kuz of the slipperyness..but manages to be loud enough...

prem- mukti..mukti mera towel..

mukti is wearing her earings..

mukti- uff..prem i dont understand kitni baar maine kaha hai..shower mein janay se pahle towel lay jana tumhari adat kabhi nahi badlaygi..

prem-with much difficulty he opens the door..and says..aur honi bhi nahi chahiye..tum jo ho towel denay keliye..

mukti- prem..tum bhi na..ye brush yeh towel ye pants..ye sab kya hai..thik se closet mein kyun nahi rekhte..
mukti gos up 2 him tries to give him the towel..

prem takes it from her hand..den jus givs a smile..[ahem ahem.}.wo mera..blue shirt dena to..

mukti gets confused..and shakes her head..thik hai per wo green shirt diya tha na tumhe. usska kya hua?..

prem- vo wo vo..i dont lyke it..mukti takes it out of the closet..and tries to pass it on 2 his hand..when prem pulls her to the bathroom..getting mukti all wet..

mukti..gets red..PREM..she starts wining ye kya kiya tumne?..meri poori dress kharab kerdi..prem pulls her towards him..

prem starts to move muktis hair which was bothering her.and was bolcing his view.and coms close to her

mukti- dekho prem not a good idea..tumhare intentions thik nahi lag rahay hai..anywayz..dekho airport nahi jana kya flight keliye der ho rahi hai

prem pulls her even closer..

mukti- flight chut jayegi..

prem- chut ne do..he coms even closer..

mukti- india nahi pohoch payenge..

prem- pohoch ne maat do..coms closer..

mukti- choti ma chinta karengi..

prem- kerne do..now prem is abt to kiss mukti..when mukti all of a sudden..squeezes..a whole bottle of shower gel on his face..

prem- shit shit..shit shit..

mukti starts loughing out loud...and dosnt stop

prem is frustrated..

mukti- ahem ahem..der ho rahi hai, honay do,flight chut rahi hai.chut ne do,india pohoch nahi payenge, pohoch ne maat do , choti ma chinta karengi kerne do..hai mera prem..bilkul budhu 😆 ,..she sees prem 😡 burning up and senses he is after her..so she runs as fast as she can

prem- mukti ki bachi abhi sikha ta hun..mukti is tried and dosnt find anymore space where she can run or hide..

prem again pulls her..

mukti- ouch meri churiya..

prem- good..aur dard hoga to acha hoga..

{btwprem washed his sopy face already..} 😆

muki- choro na its hurting..prem now..grabs her dupatta..

mukti- PREM..

prem- to aap kya keh rahi thi basanti..ji..

mukti- acha baba kaan pakar ti hu..ye kya ker rahay ho..

prem- kuch nahi bas badla layraha hun..mukti rolls her eyes..thi hai..prem..

mukti runs to the bathroom and closes the door..
and the dorr hits prems nose..

prem- ouch...

MUkti OPENS THE DOor A LITTLE..
mukti {loughing}..prem dear tum se kuch nahi hoga so dont try..

prem-MUKTI..

next scene-

mukti took a shower and came baq..and so did prem..

mukti is done packing when she sees the t.v on..

mukti- prem tum bhina t.v tak band nahi kersakta kya?..uff..

she is about to turn it off..when she hears somthing on the t.v and is shocked

mukti is crying..and is extreamly scared shes shivvering prem coms..

prem- mukti chalo flight ka waqt ho raha hai..
suddenly he seees her shaking..
prem- kya hua mukti?..tum ro kyun rahi ho?

mukti- wo..ah vo..

prem- relax ye lo pani..

mukti- remember prem do haftay pahle maine tumse kaha tha ke uss vo bathroom something is rong in der..aur aaj news pe dikhaya geya ke ek aurat ke tasveeray kheech ker ussay websites per..mukti couldnt talk anymore and is crying and crying..

prem is shocked..

mukti- k ka h..u m-e-mri..

prem- nahi assa nahi ho sakta..tumahre saath assa nahi hua hoga..mein abhi jakay police ko bula ta hu tum maat ro..

mukti- p-r-e-m..mujhe bohot der lag raha hai..prem- kuch nahi hoga..dont worry mein hunna they both hug..

prem calls the police..and they found the chip that was hidden in the bathroom..

police officer- i am sorry mr,prem about this but its good that you guys informed us on the right time mrs,sharma dont worry this hotel will have to pay for this it is der fault

hotel manager- i am so sorry we had no idea about this case..this illegal act had taken place in alot of places but this is the first time in maurius..

prem- but my wife?..she thinks hers was recorded too..
mukti is constantly weeping..

officer- dont worry sir we will find out..s0on please give us some time..

prem- mukti decide to stay back for few dayz and 1 day they recieve a call from the police

offcier- dont worry mr,shrma we have found the culprit..these things been happening around the globe you might have heard about them and now everything is ok..your wife is safe..all the records are being burned..from this hotel..shes lucky

prem smiles..thank you so much..

he hangs up mukti asked what happned..

prem- dont worry unn honay usse pakar liya hai

mukti- takes a long breath,,uhh..ey bhagwan..

prem- chalo mukti ab hum ek pal yaha nahi rahenge..lets go..prem-mukti leave the place..and take the 1st flight to mumbai..
and they decide not to tell this to prerna or the family..or they would get worried for no reason..

mumbai..

prem- mukti arrive..

debonita and komolika are still seeking for the right time to seperate prem- mukti..and on the other side prem- muktis rishta is getting stronger and stronger..dayz flow...months flow..p-m are still together..one change is sneha getting married..guess who with SAMARTH😆 samarth finally realyses he needs her and her saath so..and they decide to get married..

PREVIEW- 6 MONTHS LATER..SNEHA'S MEHNDI RASAM

KEEP READING..GUYZ.. 😉 AND LEAVE COMENTS AND IF U GUYZ ARE CONFUSED ABT THE..ISSUE IN MAURUTIUS WITH MUKTI THN SORRY IF SOM OF YOU DIDNT LIKE IT..BUT THESE THING took place ..IN REAL..AND IS SOMTHIng TO WORRY ABOUT AND I WaNTED MY STORY to be A LIL DIFFERENT..SO PLZ READ..AND IM SO0N GOIng 2 TAKE A 5 YEAR LEAP..SO STAY TUNED.. 😆 😛
LOVE U ALL LOTS.. MEHNOOM

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