chalenge says alvida{last epi page-133} - Page 10

👏 keep it up babe
thnx sweetheart

👏 keep it up babe
thnx sweetheart

wow plz continue fast i cant wait plsss 👏

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EXCELENT ,AWMAZING , FABULAAS, SUPOP I HAVENO WARD TO SAY I CAN DO IT

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that was so gewd desi_gr3l 😛 keep it up 😛

here u go guys enjoy!!!

recap= every1 finds out mukti's pregnant..

mukti is sorounded by the netire family every1 is smiling and our extreamely happy...prerna sits next to mukti on the bed and holds her hand and kisses her forehead..

prerna- tune humay boht khushiya di hai jabse tu iss ghar mein aayi hai tabse hum per dukh ki ek bhi perchay nahi pari hai..aaj mujhe naaz hai ke tu meri beti aur bahu dodno ho aur ab ek bohot bari khushi derahi hai iss khusi ka khayal..tumjhe rekhna hai..

mukti is sin tears..lucky to mein hu ke mujhe ye pura parivar milla choti ma..iss khushi ko mein samhal ker rakhungi den suddenly prem interupts der conversation..

prem- ahem ahem..wo-v-v 0 rat kafi ho chuki haina..yea i think..we all should go 2 sleep now..aur sneha ki bidai bhi ho chuki hai so..
prerna senses that prem needs tot alk 2 mukti..and wants to share his feelings she nods..and says..

ha humein abhi jana chahiye..she takes out bajaj and all..
prem- ahem ahem..he coughs..and sits on the bed next to mukti..

mukti- um so?

prem- so..

mukti- utho

prem- what?..ab maine kya kiya?..wiuth a confused face..

mukti smiles..your siting on my sari..

prem embarassed..oh sorry..
prem gos coser to mukti..

prem- tum janti hun issi pal ka mujhe kabse intezar tha?..hmm?..fnally ab humara parivaar complete ho jaiga..

mukti i know prem..sab kitne khush haina

prem- jumps up on the bed and puts his head on mukt;s lap..

prem- ladka ho ga ya ladki?..

prem- obviously ladka..

prem- eww..nop wayz ladki hogi..

mukti- ladka

prem- ladki

mukti- ladka

prem- ladki..

mukti- wait wait wait y r we fighting?..waise kuch mahino mein pata chal jaeyga y dont we do this..mukti gets out of the bed and gets a pen and papaer from the desk..

prem- kya ker rahi ho?..mukti annoyed offo just wait.

she tears a paper into 2 pieces givs 1 2 prem and she keeps one for herself..

mukti- ok ye tumahra chit hai issmein tum ek apne pasand ka naam likho of a girl..aur mein ek naam ek ladkay ka likh ti hu..usske baad..we will mix this up..and one of us will pick 1 chit and read it...aur ager ladki ayi to usska naam wo jo tumne likha aur ager ladka to wo naam jo maien likha mukti smiles axpecting a delighted smiel from prem..but prem just gets up saying..

what nonsence?..

mukti- what do you mena?..cmon lets do it..cmon..

prem- nahi yaar this is too childish..

mukti makes a sad face..thik ahi maat karo..

prem holds her hand...thik thik hai lets d this..

prem is thinking what the name should be and so is mukti..thye both wriote thr respective names..both smile..

prem- so whos gonna pick it up..

mukti- mein.

prem- mein

mukti- mein..

prem- mein

mukti- stop it..why r we fighting again..both lough..idea?..sneha..

prem- what crap?..

mukti- sneha we will let sneha pik..

prem- per itni raat aaj unn dono ki shaadi hui hai mukti cmon they need 2 spend time..

mukti- ok your right..to kal jab sneha ayegi ussay chit uthayneko hum kahenge..akhir shes the bua..

prem gos to mukti and hugs her...both go to sleep..

suddenly mukti wakes up..and mooves the blanky form her face..

mukti to herself- oh god neend nahi arahi hai ek kaam kerti hun dheeray..se prem ka chit khol ker..usska naam per leti hun she smiles and gos to the desk and opens his up..


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hse has a huge smile on her face..mukti 2 herslef- how nice..she ogs bak to sleep but few hours later prem wakes up..

prem to himself- jabtak mein mukti ka chit nahi perta tab tak mujhe neend nahi ayegi..god..plz firgive meh and you jaan too...prem reaches to the desk and picks 1 of them..

aman he smiles..how nice..he also gos baq to sleep..

in the morning..we see prem- mukti searching the whole room..all the papaers clothers are on the floor.

prem- kaha rakha tum ne kat raat yahi table per hi to tha,,

mukti- now its my fault?..prem dekho mein nahi janti wo chit kaha gayi sneha samarth coms in..

sneha- aray dont wprry phir se chit banalo..

prem gets angry..nahi forget it..i dont want to do it anymopre..justleave it he walks out of the room..leaving all three of them..

few months paas..mukti is doing well..every1 in the house are taking care of her..

mukti calls up prem in his office..

prem- yes basanti

mukti- doctor ka apointment?>..

prem- bites his toung..oh shit im so sorry per mein..bhul ok dont worry ill kum with u just giv meh half hour..

mukti- rehne do mein khud chali jati hun..mukti hangs up prem feels guilty..

and den anurag and debo com in..
anurag- kaise ho batay
muktit ake ashirwad,,

mutki- thik hu papa..aap kaise hai?..

debo- hello mukti how r u?..

mukti- i am gewd what about u?..

anurag- prerna..

mukti- bulati hun mukti gos to call prerna..and mukti is about to leave the house..when prerna interupts..

prerna- kaha jarahi hai aur wo bhi iss halat mein?..

mukti- dotor appointment..

prerna- akeli?..samjhi prem bhul geya hoga tu aek kaam ker sneha ko fone ker dono ek saath jana thik hai debo givs an wicked smile..and speaks out loud,..,

debo- mein chalti hun waise mujhe kahi jana tha il be glad 2 acompany mukti..

prerna- hesitates..t-ymu?

mukti- thik hai debo u can com with meh...debo smiles..and follows..her..

debo 2 herslef- ab prem ko mera honay se koi nahi rosakta..mukti mein tumhe iss kadar badnam karungi..ke tum..mu dikhanay ke kabil nahi rahogi..she smiles.. 😡

mukti and debo reach the hospital..

dcotor- mukti i did all your check-ups and eveyrhting is normal..next time bring yr husband babies weight is also perfect..lagta ahi aapna acha khayal rekh rahi ho..

mukti- thnx doctor ab mein chalu?..

doctor- ya sure..

mukti heads out and sse debo is not coming with her..

murti- debo? chalay..

debo coms out of her world and says..ha chalo emin abhi aati hu need 2 go to the bathrrom ..

mukti- ok..

we see debo goign inside this cabin..she troughs som bundles of money on the table..the person turns around..and its non other den the doctor...rima tripathi..

debo- ye lo paise and keep your mouth shut forver..

rima smiles..{the doctor}...yes debo i will just keep..feeding meh.. 😆 my mouth will neevr open both ladies lough out loud..

debo- ab mukti deshmukh kuch hi din baki hai..and den your finished...

doctor gets worried..doctor- f-i-n-i-s-h-e-d..what do you mean?..tum kahi mukti ko marwa,,

debo- kuch assa hi samhaj lo..

doctor is shocked..

preview-..i am sorry mein mukti ka bacha girra nahi sakti..

debo= per kyun?..

doctor- kyun ki wo....?

debo-what?..i cant believe this ab mushkil aur ber gayi hai per dont worry..ye problem bhi mein solve ker dungi...u dont have to kill the child..u will have to kill mukti...

doctor- shocked..

guys guess what is the reason the doctor cnt do this abortion or kill the baby?..keep gueesing this is the 1st time..SOEMHTING LYK THIS WIL TAKE PLACE IN KZK FORUM FAN-FIC..AND I HOPE U ALL LYK IT. 😃 ..so keep guessing let me know in your comments what can it be?...

to know more keep reading and love you all lots...yours only mehnoom..aka desi_gr3l 😛

that was lovellyy seriously u r an amazing writter 😊

That's soooooo good= ) plz continue soon: ) the suspense is killing me! = )

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww dat was fabulous nice 1 thnxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx a lot 4 posting early and i think da child is related 2 da docter well i don kno whos reems may b shes mukti's relative or prem or mukti's relative or may b other docter checked up mukti some 1 new entry or smarth( is he docter i don kno wat his carrer in dis ff) and doc doesnt wanna tak da risk of her job

wating 4 da next part plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz con soon and break da suspense 😕

i luv readin these..please con't soon...