'premukti'(FanFic) My heart to Urs... - Page 6

oh thanku for updtaing!!! Can't wait for the next update

nice yaar 👏 👏 👏 it just rocks yaar, cant wait till another diamond piece of urs yaar

really good please continue soon...u have a really realistic story 😃

hey guys i am back with another update...

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They all reach the concert and while they were about to check in...Simran get's there with Sameer....Prem and Mukti are just starring at eachother....thinking what the heck is going on....

Simran: This is my special friend i brought along...Smiles😃

Sameer: Special friend?????? I am just a "special friend"? I see how it is..

Simran: Stop acting like a child Sameer...Notices Snea and gives her a hug...

Snea: Whispers...i am so happy for you!

Mukti: Umm...Ok...i think i have had enough shock for the day....

Prem: Umm...Yea...Sameer remind me to have a little chat with you later.

Simran: WHat arent you guys happy?

Mukti and Prem both at the same time: Ofcourse! we are happy! just took us by surprise...

Sameer: Hey whose this....pointing at Sparsh.

Sparsh was just listening to the whole conversation...I am Sparsh...Mukti is my SISTER and if i HUG her dont misunderstand me....its what we do in our Country...says smiling at prem😃

Prem: Stop it Man, You are embarrasing me...I am sorry about that ok!

They all laugh....and enter the concert.

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Kripa and Angad appear on the stage and sing their hearts out....

Sparsh: OMG!! I know him....and remembers that one time in USA....

FLASHBACK: Angad was at the train station and kripa already got on the train...and Angag was late...the train was about to leave...and Sparsh noticed Kripa's sad face and Angad running and waiting to get in...the doors were going to close before Angad could make it...Sparsh puts his feet in the middle of it...till Angad gets on....That day they all became friends on that one ride of Subway and Angad said to Sparsh if he ever comes to India and needs anything just call him up....

Back to Reality:

Sparsh looks in his pocket and see's a torn piece of paper with Angad's number on there...Who knew a number like this could fetch me Millions in India he thought...

Mukti: How do you know him?

Sparsh: I met him on a subway once...

Mukti: Oh Ok!!

Sneha: Really!! You know him in person!! i would do anything to meet him in person....Anything!!

Sparsh: Grins....anything?

Sneha: Just exited Anything...

Sparsh: Starring at her Anything?

Sneha: Stares at him and this time in a dreamy tone...Anything at all...

Sparsh: Well then today is your lucky day...you can meet him! 😉

Sneha: Is juming up and down in joy!! Yes!! Yes!!!

Noticing this Sparsh gets happy for her too...They all go backstage and the security wouldnt let them in...Kripa sees Sparsh and runs up to him...

Kripa: Oh My God!! Oh My God!! Its my Angel!! Angad!! Angad!!

Sparsh: Gives her a hug...looks at Prem and says...SHE IS NOT MY SISTER...Do you think prem that i can hug her?

Prem: Gives him an embarrasing look😳..i said i was sorry.

Mukti: Stop it Sparsh let it go...My poor Baby (referring at Prem) wants to hug Kripa too...😉

Prem: Gives a Mad look at Prem and Sparsh!😡

Mukti: Ohhh sorry sorry! we are just kidding...

Angad gets there: Sparsh! Man! How are ya!

Sparsh: Same as last time you saw me....

Angad: Yup...you are the same guy!

Sparsh: But, you have changed from being my buddy to a ROCKSTAR!

Angad: I was rockstar back then too...but i am still your buddy and always will be!

Kripa interrupts...How about we all go out to Dinner?

They all agree and leave for the Restaurant.....

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Will Sheetal and Rahul be comming to India soon? Will Mukti find her memory back? Will Sparsh and Sneha fall in love? Will Simran and Sameer still be in love?....Stay Tune to find out on my next update!

hey continue soOon!!! 😊
i noe u just updated but still... 😉

Originally posted by: usbabe101

thanks for your comment Muna.

u welcome😳 but continue soon...

Hey everyone there is the other Update for today's part...I am tired but just so you guys can enjoy it...i am up at 12:00 at nigh to post it!

They are all at dinner and talking about random stuff....All of a sudden...Someone plays footsie with Mukti...

Mukti: Looks at Prem (Thinking it might be him😆)

Mukti: Pushes his leg away and whispers him to stop.

Prem: What? What Stop?

Simran plays footsie with Sparsh now...

Sparsh thinks its Sneha and tries to play back but unfortunately hits Kripa's....

Kripa thinks its Angad and Plays footsie with Sameer...(Sameer is Playing Footsie with Mukti)....They are all confused....

Prem gets up...what the hell is going on...Everyone is shocked and looks under the table...and start laughing hard😆....(A Funny Scene)

They all say their goodbye's and leave for home....

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In the Car....

Sparsh: You kno i have a new plan on my mind...

Mukti: Oh yea...Sneha you can help him...

Sparsh: Yea..she is the only one who can...

Sneha: I would Love to...as soon as your office is really ready to get going...

Mukti: Dont worry about it...its almost done...and..

Sparsh: Prem can help her with the rest...Right Prem??

Prem: Driving...umm sure...

Sneha: Ok then if you think i can help...i will be glad too..

Sparsh: Oh you are the ONLY ONE who can help me finish this plan and bring it to reality...

Mukti: Knows what's on Sparsh minds and smiles at the thought of Sparsh and Sneha together....

Sneha: is blushing...😳

Mukti's phone ring....

Mukti: OMG its Sheetal...she is going to kill me...i didnt call her to let her know you are here safe... Hello my darling sister...before you say anything i want to say I LOVEEEE YOU!!

Sheetal: Dont try to cover it up with i love you! both of you and Sparsh...i cannot believe tha..put your phone on the speaker i want him to hear it too...

Mukti put's her phone on speaker...

Sparsh: Hey...Hello...Hi Sis!

Sheetal: Dont you Triple Hey Hello Hi me!....You and Mukti are out of control...you both don't call...you are being too careless....And...Rahul comes on the phone...

Rahul: Sheetal...Sheetal...they are not kids...will you let it go and please attended the wedding...the groom will be here any minute...

Sheetal: Shut Up Rahul! you dont know anything...both of them have changed....

Mukti: I am sorry....I am...I really Am...dont worry about us...go enjoy the wedding...

Sheetal: ufff...its ok this time but call me tomorrow first thing and as soon as the wedding is done...we will be comming to India...

Mukti: I think you should...as Sparsh has found....Sparsh puts his hand on Mukti's mouth...

Sparsh: Found a great way to establish more business here...

Rahul is listening to this: Sheetal OMG you are right...Sparsh has changed...he is talking business...we better get there soon...

Sparsh says bye and hangs up and takes his hand of Mukti's mouth.

Mukti: Bites him...you didnt even let me finish..

Sparsh: Ouch...I have to Finish first (looking at Sneha) then you can finish it!

Mukti Nods...Sneha says: Wow your sister loves you so much...Prem doesnt love me so much...

Prem: Yea Right! The love i have for you...no other brother in this universe has...

Sneha: Thats true...because its very less. (They all laugh)

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At home Priya is still awake...

Priya: Papa...i am feeling sleepy.

Prem: Honey...Sweet Pie...why arent you in bed yet?

Priya: I was waiting on you...

Prem: Aww...Pumpkin...thats sooo sweet...and gives his daughter a kiss...

Sneha interrupts: I hate to do this, but Prem we have got a meeting with the Sharlon Internationals and we havent decided on the final presentation and we dont...i wouldnt be able to finish it tonight...

Mukti: Aww...i will take Priya to bed...do you mind looks at Prem.

Prem: Umm...ofcourse not.

Priya: Yess!! Yess! really exited grabs Mukti's hand and pulls her towards Prem's bedroom(which has a door that leads to Priya's room)

Prem: Smiles at first but then remembers that there are pictures of Mukti everywhere....Asks Sparsh to help out..and Runs towards them....

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What do you think...Will Mukti find out about her past? Will Prem be able to Stop her? Whats going to happen next...stay tuned

wow nic yaar, keep it coming, we need more ppl lyk u