prem n mukti dance(updates pg 20) - Page 7

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Posted: 19 years ago
#61
great.....

please continue soon 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thnkz well my next part which i update todayor tomorrow ill be damn long- nawaz thnkx
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Posted: 19 years ago
#63
update soon ...its been 6 days already 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i will today evenin or tomorrow, but will surely, awwwwwwwww ur counting dayz, i had my examz jaan, but i'll update today evenin 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hain hain koi bahana nahi challe ga!!!!!
update soon yaar!!
dont be like ekta mai!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#66
nahin yaar, dekhlena abh se 1 ghante mein the fanfic will be updated, dnt compare me wid ekta-lol
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Posted: 19 years ago
#67

bus bohoth hogaya lol

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Posted: 19 years ago
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welcome😛

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Posted: 19 years ago
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part 8

prem starts to ride the car even more faster-mukti gets really scaired, she tells prem yh kya kar rahein ho tum, dheere chalao, prm doesn't listen to her n starts to ride the \car even double the speed, then finally they meet with an accident, nothin happens to prem but mukti is hurt on her head-prem sayz, sorry, mukti, im really sorry, he goes to touch her wound when she puts his hand way n sayz, dnt touch me, then prem sayz mukti , listen im very sorry, mukti getz out of the car n starts walking on her own, prem doesn't want to say anything so he take shis car n goes to the nearby beer bar.

for a shcok to him, mukti is sitting there 2, oh! vishal had called her , she was searching him everywhere but she didn't find him there n she started wondering oh! i must be late but why did aman called me in a beer bar-then she takes a seat n sits down, then prem see's her, getz even more angrier but goes to tell her sorry again-but she doesn't listen-so prm tellz the waiter to give hima drink n he lookz at mukti n goes on drinking even more, mukti getz really worried by looking at him n wants to stop him but doesn't go forward.

then prm tries to get up frm there n falls , mukti runs n catches him, prem tellz her sorry again-he gtz up n tries to walk on his own but again fallz n agian mukti catches him, then prem tellz her im sorryagain, maine tumhein bohoth dukh pahunchaya hai na!!!!!!! mukti on one jhand cathes him n sayz tumne bohoth pi rakhi hai, tum ghar chalo,she takes prem out of the bar n walks, n they finally reach an empty road, but she can't find a rik or taxi, on the other hand prem is drunk n keepz on telling sorry repeatedly, mukti getz really worried n prem tellz her, mukti main tumse kucch kehna chahtha hoon, mukti is worried n sayz par mein kucch nahin sunna chahthi hoon.

then prem leaves her , getz angry n goes walking forward, mukti runz behind him n catches him, prem lookz into mukti's eyes n mukti lookx into prem's eyes' prem holds her face n sayz again, mukti main tumse kehna chahtha hoon, but mukti sayz maine kaha naa, mein kucch sunna nahin chahthi, prem finally sayz mukti, mukti 'i love u'mukti is nearly shocked, as if her whole liofe has stopped in 1 way-she doesn't know vat to say, for 10 mins they just look into each other's eyes.

then mukti realiese vats goin on n moves way, prem puuls her back n tellz her 'i love u again' but muktinever listens n sayz 'main tumse pyaar nahin karti' prem gets angry n sayz ky a kaha tumne, she sayz main tumse pyaar nahin karti, prem sayz mere aankhhon mein dekh ke kaho ki tum mujhse pyaar nahin karti' mukti cries n sayz main tumse pyaar nahin nahin nahin karti, n she sayz that n prem n mukti hug tightly.


hope you'll liked it guyz
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Posted: 19 years ago
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fantastic yaar!!!! so sweeeeeeeet!!

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