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Posted: 19 years ago
#81
u r awesomeeeeeeeeee i just love da story 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thats really gud plz continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
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im really sorry guyz for the late late update,

link to part 9
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=285526&TPN=1 2

part 10

mukti n prem seem to be really very very happy wid each other, they r at the beach n prem bends down n proposes her n ask her dat will u marry me, mukti blushes at the start, but then she she finnally says yes, it was very hard for her to believe dat prem wants to marry her, but sh now trusted him , prem decided to go home n hve tell this to every1

prem at home scene

when prem reached home, there was a big surprise waiting for him, dat was his previous girlfriend was tanding there wid her father, mukti gve a surprised luk to prem , said vat , vat the hell r u doing here, mukti the gal's father said, after spending a night wid my daughter, ur asking me this, prem is completely shocked n he then recalls vat happended dat night, n hw he did a mistake(vat happened dat night, will be revealed in my nxt part), mukti is really shocked, prerena tells prem to marry dat gal, but prem says...at the hell.....marry shaadi....prerna saya tumne galti ki hain aur tumhein bugatna hi padenga n leaves-every1 leaves

mukti-prem scene
mukti has tears in her eyes n gves a sad luk to prem n leaves, prem runs bck of her n tells her mukti...mukti listen to me, but mukti says she doesn't want to hear anything, its been justa few hours when she had started trusting him, and he already broke her trust, ans she calls him a looser , and she says thnk god i knew this, or i would hve sopiled my life by marrying u, prem says mukti......listen to me.....mukti doesn't, prem pulls her hand n pushes her to wall and says, dat was just a mistake, mukti says just a mistke, and how many more mistakes u might hve done prem, im sorry prem but i cant spend my life wid u, ur a ,losser, n she pushes prem n leaves, prem runs bck of her but bymistakely hits a stone n falls down n he gets hurt really badly , mukti see's dat n runs back saying prem, prem, she stsrts crying, prem says tumhein to yehi chahiye tha na, why do u need me, prem gets up tries to walk n falls bck n mukti cathces him , n says prem , prem says just leave me alone n go waya, i agree i had comiited so many mistakes in my life but i had loved spmeone or the first time, n u dnt wnat me, just leave me alone he saus again-n is neraly in tears, mukti also seee's all this n starts crying n says im sorry to prem, but prem doesnt listen, mukti n prem hug each other!!!


coming up-mukti n prem's engagement!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#84
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i love it yaar
sooo cute!!!!
waiting for the nxt part!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#85
wow!! jenny didnt kno u had a fanfic. i started on it. n it looks fab.
do continue...
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Posted: 19 years ago
#86
keep up 😉 how romantic ..... 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yaar jenny ur fanfiction ROCKS!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#88
awww how sweet 😛 plz cont soooonnn
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Posted: 19 years ago
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aww jenny lucly fanfic yaar do count soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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AAAWWWWWW, Jenny, your ff is ssooooo cute!!! Great job and keep up the good work!!

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