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Jennifer.L thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#41
o sorry, his name is vishal, mukti calls him aman-he has 2 names 😳 -prem more jealous
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
ohh kl two names
count soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yes coz u'lll cheque out in the next part his real name is vishal but mukti calls him aman with love
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
hmmm tats the mystery behind 2 names 😉
cont soooooooooooooon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
plz rite soon, i m dying to know wat is gunna happen next. pllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeezzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sorry for the late update guyz-too busy wid examz this week-ok here's the next part..

mukti and vishal(aman)leave out of the hospital-and then prem is ver sad in the hospital himself about vat he did to mukti on the beach he hugged her the night before and then he said that he doesn't know her to her girlfriend. prem reaches home he goes to his room upstairs and see's mukti leeping in her rrom. he looks at her from far and then he goes to his room and puts the blanket on her, after he goes out mukti opens her eyes and feels good about vat prem did but gets angry about vat prem did to her on the beach. prem goes to his room, meanwhile mukti gets up and gets fresh and goes to see prem in his room-mukti shocked-prem with a girl again drinking and enjoying himself-mukti feels sad-a song of kabhi naa sukoon aayaa is playedd and she waljs off without even meeting him-she wanted to meet because she wanted to say thank-u to him dat she was feeling cold and he put the blanket on her-then she says to herself-this guy is never going to improve-vishal comez up and mukti sayz aare aman i was just suppose to come n meet you-prem comez down with all his girlfriend and see's vishal o! he says n call him mr lifesaver and tellz him vat the hell r u doing in my house-he sayz mein mukti se milne aayaa hoon, he sayz mr lifesaver yeh ghar mera hai,mukti ka nahin, mukti is just a - and he stops before saying anything else mukti feels bad about vat he said-mukti tells aman lets go-aman an mukti go off-prem makes an evil face and aman an mukti go to the beach and mukti tellz aman i was thinking of leaving MUMBAI.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
wow!!!now that's sum twist!!!plz plz do cont. soon this time n yes fab part!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thnkx n thkx tanya 4 understanding dat im too damn damn busy wid examz -u c i have 3 examz a day from monday-o! god! plz help me-i find gcse's too tough yaar 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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here's the nxt, sorry 4 the late update tanya and shabd, im too busy wid examz-but here it is,

mukti tells aman she wanna leave mumbai aman asks kya zarurat hai iski, ab to mein bhi mumbai settle ho chuka hoon- tum mumbai se bahar jaake kya karoge- mukti says no aman i really want to leave mumbai- mujhe ab yahaan ghuthan si lagne lagi hai- aman why? mukti bus aisi hi-she thnks about prem-aman sayz common mukti-mukti sayz plz aman-amna sayz thik hai tumhein mumbai chodhna hai-tum shok se chodho par mein bhi tumhare saath aaungaa-.. i'll reject the offer i got from a grand comapany- mukti says no aman-i'll go u stay here-but aman sayz im coming with you-mukti says thik hai-tumhare liye mein yahhan rahunge-aman smiles -they both leave-aman gets a call. n he says sorry mukti i need to leave-i hve some importanat work- but u go.

mukti goes to a disc and feels sad-about vat can she do- she's fedup wid her life-she wants to end it-she thnkz about all the memories of her n prem n she takes a drink n then begans to cry loudly-the music stops veryone lookz at here- unfortunately premwas there-he see's who's cryin n he see's dat its mukti-he's shocked, he runs to her and tries to hold her but she puts her hand back- again he tries to hold her n she pushes her hand back- finally prem lifts her up n carries her out of the disco-she has no way but then 2 look into his eyes-they both look at each other-prem finds his car- he puts her slowly on the back seat n begans to drive.

then after going further his car sudedenly stopz-n he see's around there's no garage nothing- he tellz mukti-tum andar hi rahoon mein jaakar aata hoon- mukti doesn't say anything-he leaves-5 mns passed-10 min paased 30 mins passed but prem doesn't come back-mukti lookz out of the car n gets worried she shouts- mpre,m! prem! but there's noone -she starts to cry-then suddenly prem comez from back n says mukti-she turns back n cries n says - kahan chale jaate ho tum ha! she hugs him but he doesn't hold her back- she's falls unconscious n then prem says mukti! mukti! get up- mukti get up! get up i say! but she doesn't prem is almost has tears in his eyes-

find out in my nxt vat happens-does mukti wake up? vat does prem do? vat will happen
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50

Great job contiue sooonnnn

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