prem n mukti dance(updates pg 20)

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let me start with-mukti is sitting in her room after talkin to prerna and there is thunderstorm outside she was thnking about prem-the nxt day mukti goes to her office and f her boss greet her-abhay the boss-he says goodmorning miss mukti, ihave noticed dat since when you've joined work you have worked very hard, keep it up!-she says thank-u sir. he says miss mukti we have a beach party today because we won a contract and i would be grateful if you come to it-all other staffs r coming-she says sure sir-i'll surely be there. he smiles and leaves.

meanwhile prem is talking to his new girlfriend on the phone and telling her dat o! the beach party today, how can i forget(prem's girlfriend works in the same office as mukti) i'll surely come ther baby-cyaaaaaa

mukti tella prerna about the overnight beach party-prerna says you have to move on in life and forget about ur past-u don't need to ask me permission 4 dat, u go and n'joy urself.

at the party every1's dancing, loud music. prem is busy flirting with his girlfriend,and suddenly mukti comes-she wears a black and red salwar=kameez and looks damn good. she suddenly stops and see's prem with his girlfriend-prem see's her 2. he looks at her and leaves his girlfriend's hand. mukti doesn't pay much attention and leaves. abhay comes and says to mukti-wow its so glad to c u mukti-thnkx for coming-she smiles and says thank-u sir! he says o! no!! call me abhay-im only sir 4 u inside the office-she says thnkx abhay. evry1 r at the danc floor. prem leave shis girlfriend n takes a bottle of drink in his hand, and looks at mukti. abhay comes and asks mukti 4 a dance, mukti says ok-and they bothr at the dance floor.

prem sees them and drinks all the more. he drinks for an hour and gets fully blocked, he can't c mukti dancing with abhay. mukti goes near the beech and has a wlk-prem comes there and is falling-he can't handle himself-he pulls mukti's hand n looks in her eyes. mukti tries to get rid of him but he says angrily-tum kiske saath dance kar rahi thi haa-mukti says prem haath chodo-prem says javvab do kyun dance kar rahin thi tum uske saath-mukti again says prem mera haath chodoo-he doesn't he asks the same question more loudly, mukti angrily replies vat ids ur problem prem? prem doesn't answer he asks the same question again- mukti slaps him- he's shocked-he realizes vat was he doing. he leaves her hand and then walks away-he couldn't handle himself anymore and was about to fall down-mukti runs down and catches him and they both look into each others eyes.

ABHAY ARRIVES!!!!!!!

TELL ME IF YOU'LL LIKED IT GUYS BE FREE-AGAR NAY PASAND AAYA THEN JUS TELL SO DAT I KNOW WHTEHER TO CONTINUE IT OR NOT!!!!!!!!!

Edited by jennymanoj - 18 years ago

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Jennifer.L thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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aare baapre, did u really find it intersting yaar-thnkx sweetheart-coz i wrote 4 the first time.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwww gd job!!! 👏 continueee sooooooooooon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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im really-pehle baar maine koi story likhaaa-tumlog ko pasand ayaa-im so happy
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Posted: 19 years ago
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it was great! plz plz continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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tht was lovely😛
plz carry on😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was gr8 !!! ohhhh so prem is finally feeling insecure over mukti!!! good going n plz plz plz do cont. soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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it interesting
plz do continue that to soon plz
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Tht was very good! It was very real..I can imagine Prem drunk and asking her tht and mukti saying PREM WHTS YOUR PROBLEM!? continue soon! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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tats really very nice.. plzzzzzz continue.... wud luv to read more

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