prem n mukti dance(updates pg 20) - Page 4

well written plz continue siooooon

thanx

Originally posted by: sunnykrishi

awesome yaar.. but y do u always stop at such an interesting point..... cont soooooooooon

well dat makes it more intersting then

i'll continue very soon-and thnkx all of you'll 4 liking my fanfic

Originally posted by: rukshana

plezzzzzzzzz cont sooooooooooon

here's part 3

mukti and prem hug each other, not ready to leave adnd mukti and prem both have taers in their eyes while hugging each other. mukti says i love u to prem again and again , prem doesn't say anythng but cries. mukti drops down on prem and they both fall asleep. next morning mukti getz up and realizes dat all night she was sleeping on pprem and dat she was with prem. she knew she had to get home quickly. she goes to wake up[ prem , she just goes to put her hand on his head but suddenly prem's girlfriend arrives at the beach.

she pushes mukti back and says prem prem get up common prem-prem getz up and his gf tells him all night i was seraching for u, whre the hell weer u prem sayz-where was i-he sayz o no not again maybe i was behosh drinking dat beer. mukti watches from far she thnkz does prem not remember vat ahppened last night-dat they hugged each othe. his gf lookz at mukti and sayz o so she was d girl who removed me out of th room on valentines day and got in so dat she could be with u-and now she's come again, vat is she doing here.

prem sayz im i sup[pose to knoe that-mukti is shell shocked. i don't even know vat the ehll is she doing here. mukti has teras in her eyes. prem knew everythng but didn't tell anythng. then prem's gf sayz baapre yeh ladki tumhara peecha kab chodegei? prem sayz jab woh is duniya se chali jaayehi- i don't thnk its possible before dat. mukti cries loudly-prem is shocked mukti leaves.

she walks on the way thnking vat prem did to her and suddenly one car comes and rashes her and she is hurt on her head. and her head is bleeding. who's car is it. o its prem's car prem and his gf are in it. prem comes out of the car to c who is it and he's shocked to c itz mukti. he runs towards her and is about to touch her forehead whre it was bleeding but suddenly mukti getz up and puts his hand back in anger. she gtz up from there and leaves everythng is blank in front of her. prem tells his gf to take the car and go home . and prem runs back of mukti because she didn't knew vat she was doing. and when she was about to fall he catches her again but mukti again pushes him back and tellz him loudly and in anger-just stay far from me!!!. prem leaves here but couldn't stop following her. she realized vat he did on the beach in front of his girlfriend but he had to do that otherwayz hhis class would get down if he sayz he was with basanti all night. he just follows but then suddenly a guy comez and catches mukti-mukti hugs him-prem is shocked-he puts her in the car and they both leave. prem is shell shocked!!!!!!!!

who's the guy and why did muktoi hug him? find out in part 4!!!

OMG PLEEEEEEZ KEEP WRITING. UR FANFIC ARE SOOO INTERESTING. O N Y DO U ALWAYS STOOP AT THE GUD PARTS LIKE KASAUTI DOES. PLEEZ RITE SOON OR I WONT BE ABLE TO SLEEP!!!!!!!!!!!!LOL LOL LOL

niceeeeeeeeeeeee keep going! 😊

that was gr8!! plz do cont. soon!! u have a very good job on the fanfic!!!

here's the next part

pren runs behind dat car and see's dat he is taking her to a hospital-prem also reaches the hospital and mukti is badly hurt on her head.

prem feels sad 4 her but then wonders dat who the hell is dat guy-he see's mukti in her hospital room and the doctor is bandahing her wound-prem feels sad and a song of kabhi naa sukoon aayaa is played back of him.

then mukti comez out she see's prem there and lookz into his ayes-they booth look at each other but then mukti gets wild about vat prem said to his gf on the beach about her-she goes to at guy !-o who'#s dat guy dat guy is mukti' s childhood friend aman-

mukti hugs him and prem gets jealous and mukti and vishal go out o fthe hospital and prem is sad.

sorry guyz i know it svery short but i have to study for my examz so i'll continue it ver soon

u wrote two names aman and vishal which one is it

nice part!! i hope prem gets jealous more often cuz of mukti!!!! newayz, take care n cont. soon n yeah, u wrote two names visha n aman, which one is it?