prem n mukti dance(updates pg 20) - Page 3

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Posted: 19 years ago
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its coomin up very soon hope you'll r enjoyin seeing jealous prem
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Posted: 19 years ago
#22
its good... 👏
wirte more plzzzzzzzzzz 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#23
bus kal tak ka intejaar and then it will be up
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Great job contiue plzzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
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cant wait for the next one!
plz cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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heres part 2

abhay arrives!!!

he sees mukti prem together and mukti-prem were just looking in each others eyes-mukti was holding prem. abhay called mukti once, but she overheard it-then again he said miss mukti-mukti seenabhay and was shocked. he went there-he said vat happen mukti who is he?. she doesn't answers then another man from back coms and says-i seen this guy throughoput the party he's a drunkard pata nahin yeh log kaha kah se chale aaate hai muh uthake.he says aare abhay, mukti ne use haath diya hoga-gir raha tha woh. abhay says its ok now, common mukti lets go. mukti looks at prem and thnk can she leave him in such condition n go-then she rwcalls all bad thngs prem did with her-she remembers when he was flirting with all the girlz and avoided her-she leaves his hand in anger and goes.

prem lies down on the beach coz he couldn't even wa;lk noe he was so drunk. even tjough mukti was in the party she was only hnking about prem and how would he be now? after 2 hrs abhay said mukti do u want me to drop u home-mukti slatters and says actually my dad will be up here to take me soon. you'll go. he said r u sure mukti-mukti says yes im sure sir-he says ok c u tomorrow then n he smiles and leaves. everyone leaves the party except mukti.

she runs 2 the beach where she had left prem and searches 4 him but she doesn't find him anywhere-she shouts prem-prem but there is no answer she gets worried and tears run down her eyes. then suddnely someone calls her from back-basanti!!-o its prem it couldn't handle himself he was standing behind mukti-he falls down n mukti catches him again ans sits down-he says basabti kise dhundri thi tum!!! she sais woh!!-he asks woh kya jab tum mujhe yahan akale chodh kar chale gayi thi party mein enjoy karne ke liye tab tumhe mari yaad nahin aaya-tab tum woh tumhare sir ke saath thi-aur jab woh sir chala gaya tab tumehein meri yaad aaye-mukti cries and shouts angrily prem-agar mein yaha tumhare saath rehte toh woh log kya sochte-mein yeh job se apna haath nain gavahna chahtein. he's quite and doesn't say anythng-mukto says chalo tumne bohot pi rakhi hai mein tumhein ghar chodh de ti hoon.

he laughs and says ghar-dekho tum mujhe utha toh nahin sakti-mein ab cxhal nahin sakta- aur gaadi to tumhein chalane aati nahin to bolo tum mujhe gha kaise chodogi-bolo-mukti is quiet-prem says listen basanti u go home-mein yahin thik hoon-she says no!! he saus why!! she says mein tumhein is halat mein chodke nahin jaaonge-he says tum mere phikhar mat karo mujhe to aadat hain-i can manage anywhere- u jus go-she says par-he says just go varna tumahara old man vapas ntuhein-she puts his head slowly on the ground and goes-then suddenly he shouts ouch aand mukti hears it she runs back n hold him up again n they both hug each other.

hope you'll njoyed it guyz
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwwwww super sweeeettt!!! 😃 😃 plzzzzz do continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#28
plss continuee :D was awesomeeee 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome yaar.. but y do u always stop at such an interesting point..... cont soooooooooon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwwwww, that was sooo good!!just awesome!! now i am dying to read more!!!

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