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Posted: 19 years ago
madame shaina bullied me in to reading her fan fiction 😆 😆 😆 (kidding)but gud i read,its awsome man,seriously gr8 piece if wrk,read whole of it in 1 go,phew....contit,and u have 1 more avid reader confirmed 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
😆
Iam so happy!that my freinds r likking it!
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Posted: 19 years ago


PART 52
(Mayank & his mom r chatting..just then his father enters his room)
Father--"Oh Mu god!..Mayank u r a villan of my life"
Mayank--"Wat....?!?!?"
(Mayank's dad laughs & sits nxt to him.....)
Mayank's dad--"Son..when ever u r @ home..ur Mama forgets it toataly that she has a hubby.....hu luves her a lot & needs her time"
Mayank(laughs)--"Oh ho ho/....oo lalala! Romance @ the peak papa"
(All laughs & Mayank's mama hits him naughtly on head)
Mayank--"Papa..."
Mayank's dad--"Hm.."
Maynk--"Papa..I am sorry! Bcoz of me! U hv to take care the buisness alone...I wil b there today 4 sure"
Mayank's dad--"No problem son! U go there just a single day!..I wil b happy if u wil there daily"
Mayank-"I wil b there.papa!..but ."
mayank's dad--"But."
Mayank--"But after the lunch braek"
Mayank's dad--"O.K....but u hv to"
(Mayank smiles..and goes to get refreash)

ON THE DINING TABLE......
(All the family members r sitting there....and takinga breakfast)
Mayank's dad--"Mayank here is a file regarding to the meeting today @ 1:30 PM @ office & my son u wil lead it"
Mayank--"Papa..<Me!!"
Mayank's dad--"Ya mu son u"
Mayank--"O.K..but u hv to take this file wid u "
Mayank's dad--"No! I wil not"
Mayank--"Papap plz..! I hv to go @ many places..Iam fearing that it wil b lost"
Mayank's dad--"No son! U wil take this wid u! when u can protect ur Army file.w not this one"
(Mayank is lukking @ Anuja.....)
Anuja--"Uncle..try to understand na...Mayank wil go futher areas..&if sum thing happens to file...its an private"
Mayank's dad--"Anuja stop standing by his side!"
(Mayank's dad luks @ him in anger & leaves....& so does his little bro)

AFTER A WHILE....
(Mayank stands up & getting ready to leave..Anuja cums)
Anuja--"Mayank"
Mayank--"Yup"
Anuja--"Give that file to me....I wil give it to u @ ur office "
Mayank--"But.."
Anuja--"No but..give it to me & leave...sum one is waiting 4 u ."
Mayank--"Waiting 4 me.."
Anuja--"Ya..ur Surween called @ ur cel in late @ night....u wr sleeping...."
Mayank--"Oh! I hope that everything is fne"
Anuja--"Hope so"

continue..

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Posted: 19 years ago
somthing happend to Surween...?... hey Shai our Manyak is just like Rishu na...so adorable...... mmmmmmmmmm i love him so much........
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Posted: 19 years ago
Agree Mayank is a carbon copy of OUR Rishu!MAN Iam totaly Fida on him! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
PART 53
CONTINUS....
(Mayank& Anuja r still discussing upon Surween's matter...then Mayank's mom interfares..)
Mayank's mom--"Mayank.."
Mayank--"Yes mama"
Mayank's mom--"Son hurry up! go..u r getting late....& listen ur bike is bak"
Mayannk--"Oh..ya!..I..bye!"
Anuja--"Relax..u r a little bit late..dont b soo confuse! & dont forget to call her"
Mayank--"Oh! Thnx sweety! U r such a darling"
(Mayank says bye to both of them & leaves)

(Mayank's mom calls Anuja in her room)
Anuja--"Aunty..can I cum in"
Mayank's mom--"Anuja..daughter its ur own house & daughts dont need a permission to meet their mom"
(Anuja smiles)
Mayank's mom--"Sit down.......I hv to talk to u"
Anuja--"Ya tell me"
Mayank's mom--" Anuja du u like Mayank?"
Anuja--"Ya ofcourse! thats y I am stil here..."(wid carelessness)
(Mayank's mom..luks @ her & smiles)
Mayank's mom--"Anuja! b serious..Iam talking on a very serious issue.....c Anuja. u hv no mom! Thats y Iam talking this to u..Iam asking u daughter that du u like Mayank..I mean wil u choose him as ur life patner"
(Anuja is shell shocked.......................)
(Mayank's mom continues....)
--"Anuja y r u silent?..luk i dont want to pressurise ur self! I am just saying this bcoz I felt that u 2 know each other very wel & wil b happy together.....If u like sumone else..dont b shy & tel the truth..cum on"
(Anuja is still quite...............)
Mayank's mom--"Anuja..."
Anuja--" Aunty...I cant say anything now!.plz let me go"

(And leaves frm there.......goes towards her room....think8ing abt the whole situation.....)
Anuja(to her self)--"Wat was aunty saying..?...Me & Maynk...no....never! it does'nt means that I dont like him..I luv him but just as my best freind.....its true that I know him very wel but! it cant happen...Mayank luves Surween..& he wil never marry anyone else exept her..as through I know him!......But does Mayank really luvs Surween...?.. Iam not stil sure! hv to talk to Mayank....Anuja r u mad.... ofcourse he luves her! if not then y is he soo concious abt her....so wats in it! He is concious abt me too..that does'nt means that he luves me.....I hv to tel aunty that Mayank luves sumone else!......No..If it is not true then he wil b in big problem..his dad wil b bad wid him as ever he is~.....GOD!Wat hv to du........just wait 4 Mayank & talk to him.....)

BAK TO MAYANK.....
(mayank enters the CBI headquatres........walks towards the cabin..knoks it...)
--"Cum in.."
(Mayank enterz..)
Mahesh--"Oh my goodness! Mayank thnx to god that u r bak! man I was just worried abt u"
Mayank--"thnx buddy!....This is a file given to me....I read it whole @ night...man its damn confusing.....all the dta is missing that was given to me in mess.... there hu can I continue my task"
Mahesh--"Hu can it possible!......give it to me..I wil talk to general"
Mayank--"can u plz call him now! I want to talk to him.."
Mahesh--"OK I try"
Mayank--"ok plz try & tel me! I am in a cabin there"
Mahesh--"OK..dont worry I wil connect it to ur line.."
Mayank--"Thnx a lot man"
(And leaveas....)

IN HIS CABIN....
(Mayank enters the cabin sits there....& is thinking abt Surween.....Just then his cell rings.....Mayank cs the cli..& pickup the cell)
Mayank--Hello.....Saru!"
(Surween is continusly crying....)
Mayank--"Saru stop crying tell me wat happend?"
(Surween controls her self & tell her all situation).................................................. ............................................................ ............................................................ ......................................!!!
(Mayank gets angry)....
---"Hu dare he..ba*****!..Dont worry Iam cumming.Saru...plz stop crying I told u na! I wil b there in just 1/2 an hour..ya bye"
(Mayank stands up & is ready to eave just then he gets a call that his line is connected to the general.....Mayank attends that call & tell him the whole file matter & says xcuse that he is leaving right now..hving an emergency.....and leaves..........)

OUT SIDE SURWEEN'S HOUSE.....
(Myank parks his bike there...& knoks the door..an old man opens it...Mayank introduces him self & entres there...is surprised to c sum ppl r sitting & starts to staring him after knowing his identity....Mayank luks @ Saru's mom...says hi to her and............gets 1 TIGHT SLAP..........................is shockedd.....just then hears a man's voice....and luks there.....is Anurag)
Anurag--"Aunty! thats the guy....He is the man wid whoom Surween spent a whole night & a day...................."(all r staring.....)--"and u know that he is a son of a RICH & famous buisness tycon....whu owns the Bajaj empire! He is Mayank Bajaj.........a TOTALY spoiled man.hu wants to play wid girls only 4 few days.....til he gets wat he wants.......it can b 1 month/yr.....or just 1single night ....."
(just says this & gets 2 TIGHT SLAPS..............ALL r getting shocks....Mayank also luks there..cs Surween standing there hving tears in eyes & is very angy)
Surween--"Hu dare u to say such a nasty thing abt Mayank....if he is a spoiled man...then wat cetegory wil fit on u....cheeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!"
(Mayank cs Surween is getting much tensed.....he goes towards her holds her frm the shouldrs....and says her little sis to bring a glass of water.....after a while there she brings a water....Mayank sys thnx to her & gives the glass to Surween...Surween denies....but Mayank forces her........so she drinks it!(all r staring @ them.....Anurag is getting angry......Mayank smiles @ Surween & luks anrily to Anurag.......walks towards him.....)
continus............
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Edited by Ronitlover_4eva - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
woww gud kep rovking its kooooooool 😆 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
yes dear 😉 i m not lieing its gud 😆 wait 4 the day jab me will laso rite fanfic wo osirf ek cheez par base ho gaa 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago

kya huya yeh sab mat likho sharam nahi aatii publically.....or woo bhi fanfic ke reoplies mein 😆😆maregii ladki bach ke rehh😉

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Posted: 19 years ago

😆

heman yaa nahi hai ..superman hai ..not hey man😆god ..he man nad god cant be together😆plz chopose one only between them 😆

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