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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
Abhilasha,
Took you long but good update. You know there are so many highs and lows and ofetn I felt bad for one character or the other but surprisingly I am enjoying the FF now so much. The story is simple and nothing complcated. One can easily relate to it without difficulty. Its refreshingly good.😃😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
hey abhi.....
great part....like always......
feeling bad for jai......poor guy......
so bani is in her own world.....thinking about her baby all the time.......and getting tooooo attached to the unborn baby.....
plzzzz cont.soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
Bani's mental condition is not right. Why can't she feel connection of her baby with Jai.Jai ws center of her world. Why doesn't she care about him any more?
I am confused.
Jai too. Why doesn't he say he needs Bani & the baby. HWts stopping him to tell her how much he loves her & want her & baby to be with him?
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
Hi Abhi,
Don't blame u for not wanting to log on - the narrow format is depressing. Jai needs to gently start reminding her that it is their baby and they belong to each other too. Bechara bahut dar gaya hai...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
hey Abhi ... was waiting for ur update ... so thanks for updating ... 😃... nice part .... both Jai and Bani's emotions are very well portrayed .... it seems Bani is in her own small world with her baby .... where Jai does not exists what so ever .... she doesn't realizes that Jai needs her more then his other family members .... poor him ...yearning for his wife ... well I guess he's being punished for his ignorance towards her .... anyways looking forward to next part ... do cont soon... 👏...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
Abhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
u r saying u dont feel like writing
aftermaking us wait for tis many days u say u dont feel like writing
That not so fair
now u will get a punishment
next update faster
Baniiiiiiii i hope she will sooner include Jai in her drea as before
I cant see him so sad and unhappy
when will they be happy family??????????
I love ur FF yaar
Thanksssssssssss
waitingggggggggggggggggggg
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47

Hey Abhi,

I totally understand what you mean regarding this whole format thing. but nevertheless the update was fanastic as always. Bani is drivin me up the wall with this behaviour, but I can see where this is coming from.hope she comes out of this possessiveness soon. now Jai is realizing what his past behaviour has done to her, hope something good comes their way which brings them together.😳😳 lookin forward to the next part.👏

preet😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
Now my sympathy has shifted from Bani to Jai.....poor man......feels left out 😭......when will Bani come out from this mental state.......don't tell me Jai will also suffer from depression......update was awesome, I'm so so so hooked to your FF.....please continue.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
The storyline is simple yet so beautifully penned. My heart goes out to Jai yet I feel that he is suffering this cause he made Bani suffer mentally earlier on😒 but I can only hope that with time Jai will be able to gently explain to Bani that the baby is not only hers but his as well and how much he loves her, respects her and wants her.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50

Like how Jai is worried even I am concerned about Bani's over attachment with the baby. It just does not feel right to me. Maybe she has her own reasons of being neglected so at least this baby is wholly her own and hence the mindset. I liked the way she said sorry to her baby when she could not digest her food. that was kind of cute.

Swathi

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