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hey great update please continue soon

so bani is not liking jai sayign hamra baccha.. uff ye bani bina 😆 kab smajegii bina jai ke ye baccha kahn se ata.. bani bhi na..come on bani samjoo he is ur hubby. .. jai is trying to get alogn with her..

pav bahjii.. good choice...hehehhe

lekin icecream nahi kahii woo jai keliye chod diya? 😉 😆 saat saat donon kayenge in one cone of one scoop of icecream but ate by jai and bani..(hope u get some ideas 😉

ab bani knows she is pregannt.ab kya hoga? will she fear jai will take away her kid.. and no one will love her?

continue soon.

hope jb understand each other and speak out.

How can bani be so childish ,, why doesn't jai have any rite over the baby ,, its not like she made the baby on her own ,, if I was jai I would get so annoyed with her saying my baby my baby ,,, like she is 6

hey abhi

awesome part..

but what is this why is bani obessed with the baby..
i mean it is also jai's abby..

cnat wait for the next update

Originally posted by: divan

Finally a happy part, ok she is now obsessed about the child being hers, but I can understand. The pav bhaji went down well too... i know... actually it is me and my cousin bro polishing the pav bhaji that my masi makes... 😆 so now bhaiya will have the new customers soon.. that is understood 😉 nice part Abhi...😍

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing part
hope bani realises its also jais child to some or other time... jai has to make her understand...
the pav bhaji scene was really good
👏

Originally posted by: btkr

Bani still not coming out of her inner world...but the kid is giving her lot of happiness ...good going, Abhi
thanks di... where u finish most of the times... r u busy???

Originally posted by: Nimmie1'2

Hi Abhi,

Excellent part! Loved it... Bani at ease with situation around and she could answer back Jigs...hmm. i really wanted bani to answer back in such a way that both jigs and jai realises that somewhere bani is not weak...

I will be missing your updates for next 3 weeks... going on a vaction to the US.
HAPPY VACATION and HAPPY HOLS.... 😊 tell me one thing... from malaysia how will u go to US... i mean what route in plane... 😕
Have a great weekend & thanks,

Nimmie

Originally posted by: phool527

hey abhilasha.. that was great hun.. wow AJ r soo funny.. they ate all the pav bhaji.. lmao.. dadi, bani or massi ke liye bhi nahin choda.. nice.. anywayz great part.. continue sooon.. jai used to be like that... teasing bani and treating her as if she doesnt exist but she exists...

Originally posted by: niruba

seems like Bani doesn't want to 'share' her baby with anyone else......maybe because at last she has something (someone) to call her own, exactly.. but the whole point is how long...? I really feel bad for this girl...nice part......please continue

Originally posted by: jeevikagurl88

Great update. thanks
I hope she realises soon that the child also belongs to Jai and not her alone.
Please continue soon.

Originally posted by: suwas

glad that Bani is happy about baby. But wants it be exclusively hers. Can see why. Jay should make her accept it belongs to both & JAy is hers to be loved & will love her back just like baby. jai is of course gonna try... but will she agree 😆

Good to see the family giving proper attention & love to her. Jigs should stay away from Bani. dont worry... that jai will do... 😉

Originally posted by: pooks

I can understand why Bani calls the baby in her womb as "meraa baccha"...the way she's been treated in the past, it shows that she wants to hold onto to at least someone who'd care for her. and vice versa too... whom she would care for/about

Originally posted by: shweta76

great part 👏

thanks shweta

Originally posted by: swati_bhatia

gr8 prt
plz cont soon

thanks swati...

Originally posted by: jeenal20

gr88 pART
PLZ CONT SOON

thanks jeenal...
make sure... no writing in caps... otherwise... mods peeche pad jaayenge 😆

that was a gr8 part abhilasha...
havent really commented in a loooooong time but..anyways cont soon
i want to see their relationship growwww

Hey Abhi,

another beautiful update, you etched Bani's pov so much and her obession with her child.Jai's hurt came out so well,hopefully with time it will be their baby.nice to see some light moments,looking forward to next part. 👏


preet 😳

Hey Abhilasha...good to see you back with a 2nd thread. Quickly came up to it. I was out of station for about 2 weeks and took some time in picking up the threads again.

Coming to the last update I completely identified the fact when Bani said 'My baccha'. She has been sidelined for so long that its no wonder that she said so. Plus her whole thing of she wants to take care of the kid completely also stems from her own unhappy childhood and marriage if I may say so.

I am not sure what Jai is thinking now. Personally If I had been in his place I would be worried of the fact of how Bani is speaking. She is speaking as if no one exists around her and kind of being in this dreamy state. Definitely not for one who is pregnant and am not sure if Jai is serious enough. Or possibly I am missing it from the story. I also feel that Jai should take more attempts to put Bani at ease apart from being understanding her state and feeling aplogetic about it. Entirely my feelings. Would let you handle the story the way you want to . :)

Swathi

hey when are you going to update