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sparky

@sparkling_gems

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Posted: 17 years ago

#51

Lovely part Abhilasha as usual..

Ahaa at last Jai confessed that he was at fault too to ignore Bani and realize too that he need her but what about Bani.. Hope she will realize it soon too... Bani's over attachment or say over protectiveness towards her baby sometimes really scare me... pray and hope everything goes well..

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popeye

@popeye

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Posted: 17 years ago

#52

Hi abhilasha, As usual it was a beautifully penned update but Banis state of mind and her over protectiveness about the baby is a bit confusing and at the same time makes me feel aweful for Jai. I mean after all he too is lonely .. he too has no one. I agree he maybe the cause for Banis insecurities but he too is suffering and he doesnt even know who to express it to. He also needs care and love and a shoulder. He is trying his best to be there for Bani but her attutude of wanting to leave him and go with her baby to aligarh makes me wanna go and give jai a big hug. He is trying so hard with her... he loves her and he wants to see her happy .. why cant she see that ? The baby is as much a part of him as it is of her. She needs to be a lil mature otherwise this relationship will never work. I reeeeaaaallly want Jai and Bani to start understanding each other. Jai has started to understand Bani but when will Bani extend her hand to him and understand him.

Please do update soon... cant wait for the next part

U have a way with words... each update is fabulously penned 👏

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Rupal

@culgal86

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Posted: 17 years ago

#53

hey.................

lovely part....................

happy for bani that she is getting better but at the same time feel sorry for jai coz bani is forgetting that jai is the family that she needs ..........

hope all gets better soon......

update soon

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nuomi.riceball

@nuomi.riceball

Sparkler

Posted: 17 years ago

#54

hey gr88 part please continue soon

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nuomi.riceball

@nuomi.riceball

Sparkler

Posted: 17 years ago

#55

bani said 'silent' sorry to them. does that mean she is carrying twins??

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pptm469

@pptm469

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Posted: 17 years ago

#56

Somehow Bani seems to be forgetting about Jai and how she loved him.. Hope that things change for them... Please update soon!!!!

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swati

@swatinarang

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Posted: 17 years ago

#57

great parts abhilasha, there seems to be some particular reason that bani is not normal mentally? whether jai left her without telling is the reason or she faced something more than that and she is not normal now?

please continue soon

swati

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@inkinscription

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Posted: 17 years ago

#58

hey abhilasha...

great part..i just dont get bani and jai...

Bani is acting strange...cuz brfore she longed for Jai and now she totally forgot about him..her behaviour is very strange..and Jai is very confused too...and is it a bad thing that she is getting attached to her baby?????why is he scared???

anways cont soon....hope the next part will clear it a bit...but its a great ff...cont soon

Moon=)

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nuomi.riceball

@nuomi.riceball

Sparkler

Posted: 17 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: chander992
hey abhilasha...
great part..i just dont get bani and jai...

Bani is acting strange...cuz brfore she longed for Jai and now she totally forgot about him..her behaviour is very strange..and Jai is very confused too...and is it a bad thing that she is getting attached to her baby?????why is he scared???

anways cont soon....hope the next part will clear it a bit...but its a great ff...cont soon

Moon=)

i think if she's too attach to the baby is not good, cause i saw a movie once and it's about this mother who was too attached to her son. and this mother took care of her son and everything, homeschooled him and everything and didn't let the son interact with any other person other than her. she didn't even let the son to have a friend other than her. so in a way it's bad.