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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
hey abhi 😛 ....
great part.....wow bani know that she is pregnant 😃.......awwww jai is feeling bad that she didnt said their baby......but soon she will say that 😉 😆 .....
plzz cont.soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: popeye

Hi Abhilasha,
The update was fabulous as usual. Bani's happiness on being pregnant is adorable... she finally has someone to call her own who will never leave her. I am a bit confused as to why she was upset to hear Jai say humara baccha.. I guess she thinks and wants something only for herself coz if it belongs to jai also there is a possibilty of Jai taking it away from her. I love Jai's effort to make her realise that its their baby something that binds them together.
Thanks popeye... i thot it would be natural for Bani to feel in such a way. As for saying it is her baby.... she is insecure of everything in life...
The pav bhaji part was very cute.. jai and adityas efforts to make bani feel comfortable and them finishing off her pav bhaji only to have masi and dadi admonishing them was cute.. I hope Bani starts to get more comfortable around them. I want Bani and Jai to get closer... they seem to love each other so much I hope and wish they realise it soon. Jai defnitely gonna make his efforts to make her realise it is their baby... lets c what happens...
Please do update soon
👏



Originally posted by: monix1981

hi there... I was really bored and was just wailing my time off so thought of reading some ff on the forums... and my eye caught attention of ur ff and i read all of them in one go i was really intrigued by the story line.. and i'm really overwhelmed by the way you have etched every character and expressed the emotions so splendidly well... hats off to u girl 😊 thanks... i must say one thing... this forum has the most number if creatives... of course after Fanfictions section.. But unlike FF section... in KS section u can find variety of stories... 😳 Again... thanks for spening your time with my ff... 😊

waiting for the next update....till then tc



Originally posted by: gaurifan

Nice part.. I was waiting for it.. though I cant call it a happy part as I m wondering why she insisted on mera bachcha infact she was not looking so convinced when Jai said hamara bachcha I guess her adolescence hasn't gone yet and pray that she wont do anything silly …well... its not exactly her adolescence... but u may call it as her extreme insecurity... about Jigyasa I don't understanding whether she is not liking Bani because she doesn't like her or she doesn't like her coz of her childish behavior and she (Jigyasa) thinks that her brother deserves someone mature who could understand him and support him throughout the life… it is the third... u made my answer easy re... 😆
Wish this upcoming baby will work as a bridge not only btwn Jai & Bani but amongst all family members.. of course it will be...



Originally posted by: siumi

nice update Abhi 👏 I still can't understand Bani 😕


that is bani... 😆 u will understand it by time... i have one more flashback pending...

Originally posted by: culgal86

hey awesome part..............

update soon


thanks culgal

Originally posted by: rongna

hey great update please continue soon


thanks rongna

Originally posted by: tam2

Hey Abhi ... lovely part ... 👏 ... Bani is stuck with mere baccha ... 😕 ... and not so sure if she is very happy when Jai says hamara baccha ... one confuse lady... 😕 ... inspite of it... i know u like her 😉 Is she saying that becasue of her insecurities regarding her and Jai's relationship ... poor girl ... still not very able to trust Jai completely ... exactly the point... anyways do cont soon... 👏 ...



Originally posted by: ANARLA

so bani is not liking jai sayign hamra baccha.. uff ye bani bina 😆 kab smajegii bina jai ke ye baccha kahn se ata.. bani bhi na..come on bani samjoo he is ur hubby. .. jai is trying to get alogn with her.. dont worry... she will be told the same point later...

pav bahjii.. good choice...hehehhe

lekin icecream nahi kahii woo jai keliye chod diya? 😉 😆 saat saat donon kayenge in one cone of one scoop of icecream but ate by jai and bani..(hope u get some ideas 😉 i have more ideas than this... but searching for a proper situation...

ab bani knows she is pregannt.ab kya hoga? will she fear jai will take away her kid.. and no one will love her?

continue soon.

hope jb understand each other and speak out. speak out... what do u mean by that... ? they are speaking na!!!



Originally posted by: ragamthalam0

How can bani be so childish ,, why doesn't jai have any rite over the baby ,, its not like she made the baby on her own ,, if I was jai I would get so annoyed with her saying my baby my baby ,,, like she is 6 thank lord... u r not jai or jai is not like you... if thats the case... jai will neither get bani nor will he get the baby...




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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
so interessing.
Bani didn't think a bit that she should live her pregnancy with Jai.
It's her baby and not Jai's.
How Jai will handle this, i really can't wait.
This Jigyasa is too much. 🤢
Great part 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow , atlast bani came to know about her pregnancy, Bani talking about her baby , how she will take care of the baby was really good, it showed how lonely she is and how she doesnot want her baby to face all the trouble that she faced.

For the first time i felt bad for jai, when she said mera bacha and not hamara bacha But he deser.ved it
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Posted: 17 years ago
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waiting for the update.
Edited by Clare - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I read the whole today..only one word comes in my mind for the fic..OUTSTANDING....

the ups and downs in the life of Bani..the suffering of Jai...you have depicted so nicely...👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻StarStarStarStarStar
update soon
Edited by yakkudimag - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37

WOW!!

rly nice....Thumbs%20Up
update soon......
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
Hi all, I am sorry for not updating for 10 days. This new format is not inspiring me to write update. Its look... I dont know. I just dont feel to log into IF. This format I feel is not so friendly. I dont know y I feel so. For the past week, I was so occupied with classes and functions at home. When I log in to type, this new format confuses me 😕

Coming to the update, I try to make it long. But couldnt type it. So its a small part.

Previous Parts:

Previous thread: Parts 1-18A

Part 18B - Page 2;

Here goes the next part:

Part 19

With the news of arrival of her baby, Bani's dreams and imaginations started to regrow. Each and every imagination and dream she had, her baby was an important part of it. She changed her dreams and imaginations to accommodate the arrival of her baby. She always rested her palm on her belly so as to feel its presence each and every second of the life. She felt that there was reason worthwhile to live her life, enjoy her life, cherish her life. She started to see colours in front of her eyes. Colors… which she had run away from… Colors… which she was scared of… Colors… which she had dreamt of… Those colors started to become a part of her life. She started visualizing colors in everything she saw.

But alas! Jai was lost somewhere in her dreams. The dream of staying with Jai and his family got lost somewhere as she cherished her new-found relation. She did not want to share the new relation with anybody. She wanted the whole relation for her. She smiled to herself whenever she thought about her baby. She ate her food in time, without Jai reminding her. She spoke with her baby whenever she was alone in her room. She spoke with her baby, when she went for a walk in the garden. She started to visualize her future with her baby. Love started to bubble in her inner self for her baby. Her life long longing to love someone developed feelings unknown to her and it gleed her. She shared her dreams for her baby with the baby. Above all, there was always a smile on her face.

***

Jai was left alone in this matter. He felt literally left out. He did not know whether to be happy seeing Bani happy or to cry out considering his situation. He wanted someone with whom he could share his insecurities… with whom he could share his fears… with whom he could share his inner feelings… He was not able to digest the fact that he was not able to claim his baby as his. But seeing Bani with her vibrant enthusiasm made him feel less burdened… but the disappointment was still there… He missed his mother a lot. He wanted to keep his head on his mother's lap and cry out all the thoughts scrambled in his mind.

***

After he had taken Bani to their room that evening, he got to see the happiest mood of Bani. She talked about everything about the baby. How she wished to grow up her baby… How she wished to take care of her baby… Her eyes sparkled in extreme joy. What worried him the most was, dream of her and her baby… Her dream to spend her life with her baby in Aligarh…

"Pata hai… Main Aligarh jaake kaam karoongi… bahut kamaoongi aur apne bachche ko khush rakoongi…" She said gleefully.

Jai just kept looking at her. After sometime, he asked, "Tum Aligarh chali jaogi, toh mera kya hoga?"

"Aap ko? Aap ko kya hoga?" Bani asked.

"Mera khayal kaun rakhega? Aur mera kaun hoga, Bani?" Jai asked.

"Aapke toh bahut saare log hai… Aapke parivaar hai… Aapko kuch nahin hoga…" she said as if consoling him.

How he wished he could say, 'Tumhare bina mera kya parivaar hai, Bani?' Alas! He couldn't speak it out…

He changed the topic. "Toh doctor ne kya kaha?" Jai asked.

"Doctor ne mujhe sahi waqt par khane ko kaha hai… Phir… medicines di hai khane ko… Phir…" she thought for a while, then said, "Bas itna hi kaha hai…" Bani said.

"Toh tumhein pata hai na ki tumhein kya karna hai?" Jai asked.

"Haan… main waqt par khaaongi… aur medicines bhi loongi…" Bani said.

"Good… Main ek kaam karta hoon. Main doctor se ek appointment fix karta hoon. Hum jaake tumhari full check up le lete hai. Teek hai?" He asked her.

Bani nodded her head. Jai hugged her lightly and placed an affectionate peck on the top of her forehead. Bani smiled and buried her face in his chest. Jai placed his chin on the top of her head wondering what to do.

***

After Jai left for study, Bani spoke with Pushkar and blackmailed him to send some or other assignment. When she asked him about her sketches, he informed her that he had given them to Jai.

"Main bahut khush hoon…" Bani said.

"Lag raha hai…" Pushkar chuckled on the other side.

"Lekin mujhe bore ho rahi hai. Koi mujhe kaam nahin karne de raha hai…" she whined.

"Achchi baat hai na… Aaraam karo. Live like a princess…" Pushkar laughed.

"Main princess nahin hoon. Aur tum yeh baat jaante ho." Bani gave back.

"Bani, mazaak kar raha tha." Pushkar said.

"Mujhe kaam karna hai. Apne bachche ka khayal rakhna hai…" Bani explained him.

"Jai Sir hai na?" Pushkar asked slowly.

"Woh hain toh kya farq padega? Kab tak woh mere khayal rakhenge? Aakhir mein mujhe apne khayal rakna toh hai na?" Bani said.

Pushkar felt something was not right. He felt he needed to talk to Jai. He said, "Teek hai baba… do din ka waqt do. Main assignment bhijwata hoon. Khush?"

"Do din?!" Bani exclaimed.

"Haan… do din…" Pushkar said.

"Do din kya karoongi?" Bani wondered aloud.

"Do din aaraam karna." Pushkar suggested.

Bani got irritated. Then she remembered her sketches. "Teek hai… Pushkar, mere sketches wapas bhej dena please."

Pushkar frowned. "Tumhari sketches?"

"Haan… kyun? Kuch ho gaya kya?" Bani asked.

"Lekin, maine toh sketches Jai Sir ko de di!" Pushkar said.

Bani frowned. "Lekin… unhone toh nahin bataya!"

"Fikar mat karo. Kaam mein bhool gaye honge. Pooch lena baad mein." Pushkar said.

"Teek hai." Bani said.

"Teek hai. Main chalta hoon. Baad mein call karta hoon. Tum apna khayal rakhna. Samjhi?" Pushkar said.

"Main apna khayal rakh toh rahi hoon. Saare log aise kyun bhol rahe hai?" Bani asked.

"Isliye taaki tum apna khayal zyada rakh sako." Pushkar smiled.

Bani twitched her lips.

"Okay. Bye!" Pushkar said.

"Bye!" Bani disconnected the call.

She was little disappointed that she had no work to do. Suddenly, she remembered her sketches. She made a mental note to ask Jai about her sketches. Later, it slipped out of her mind. Right now, she cherished her motherhood. She felt she had been blessed with bliss.

She looked around the room. She noticed her childhood picture on the night-stand. A smile appeared on her face. She was looking happy and little shy in that picture. Suddenly she thought, whether her baby would be like her. The thought was replaced with another with the same speed it had occurred in her mind – No, her baby would not be like her. Her baby would be good. It would be the best baby in the world. No one would raise their finger on her baby. She won't let anyone harm or hurt her baby. Her baby… She would give all the love to her baby. Her baby would definitely not be like her. Her mind travelled to the past and to future with her baby.

***

On the other hand, Jai was left brooding in the study. He did not know what to do. He remembered her face when he said "humara bachcha". He leaned on his chair and shed silent tears.

He wanted his wife… But was that too late? Did he lose for ever?

He wanted his family… But how would it be without his wife and… and his baby?

He knew very well, he had ignored Bani for long and tortured her silently. But how was he going to gain her? How damn it?

***

Dinner went silently in Jai's terms. But to Bani, she ate as much as possible so that her baby would not starve. But later, she threw up everything out. She patted her baby and said silent 'Sorry' to it.

At night, before she went to sleep, Jai gave her a glass of milk to drink. Though, she did not like its smell, she did not give a hard time to Jai. Jai watched her drinking the milk with medicines. Her over-attachment with their baby worried him a lot. After she finished drinking, Jai made her lie and patted her to sleep. He stayed by her side till her breath came out at normal speed. Then, he covered her with the sheet. He leaned on the bedside and watched Bani sleeping. After sometime, he joined her under the covers and went to sleep hugging her.

The one thing which he realized at that time was – 'He needed her very badly…'

Thanks for reading 😳
Edited by abhilashasharma - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39

me first

uff ye bani bhi na bilkul problem hain.
bechare koo kud ki bacche ko bhi kud nahi kehsakta. ye kay bai is now dreaming of going to alibargh and livign there and work there hehhehehe .becahre jai ko use mana keliey whaan ek daba na kol kar abitna na pade😆 in front of bani's house.felt sorry for jai and bani too jai for as he wanted bani bad but kehnahi paya.aur bani who dotn want her kid to eb like her and be the best..😭made me get emotional ..
i think only way.. jai shd carry bani and take her to a palce and shout i lvoe u bani.. bus saara problem katam .. but jai bhi na.. but he was tryin to say .. it by syaing mera kya hoga? tumein kay hoga.. hehe bahut kuch bani tum bhi na.
uff..
cotnineu soon want jb to solve thier problem by one kiss😳
Edited by ANARLA - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr88 part abhilasha
poor jai is so sided by bani
she is too much over attached with her soon to be born baby
which is not good
plz cont soon

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