FF:Why isn’t the life simple? last part pg 28 - Page 7

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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
I hope Jay & Bani com close. Didn't like Bani's attitude. Don't know her reasons. Hopefully she will come around soon. At least she cared enough to cover him up.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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seems like Jai ignoring her,.....but can't blame Bani coz from the beginning she was not happy with this marriage.....nice update....please continue....

no problem Pooja, I can understand it,.....I can understand simple Hindi but not poems or some articles with 'deep' meanings.....so don't worry, you don't have to translate since your parents don't always allow you to touch computer 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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pooooooooojjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjiiiiiiiiiiii.. yeh kya.. yeh that tera june 19th ka tofa.. very nice.. kya yaar.. a little more interaction between JB would have been nice.. anywayz it was a good part.. continue sooon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice update........ 😛 pls cont soooooooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
hey,
Great part.
poor jai!!! 😕

Continue soon........

God bless
Dhani
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank u guys. It really feel special reading ur comment. I write thinking something and u people comment interpreting it in different ways and I keep on thinking myself Did I reallymeant that? Here is the next part.

Tomorrow morning when Jai came downstairs to go office he saw everyone in the breakfast table. Anu and Sahil were as usual fighting; Ranveer and Aditya were discussing something about work; Dadi was teasing Jigyasa saying that the vamp of her recently watched movie was same like her because of which Jigyasa was not eating her breakfast; Masi was laughing looking them and his wife, Bani was serving them their breakfast.

"Jigyasa didi aap jante haina Dadi kaisi hain phir aap unki baat kyu dil pe laga rahei hain. Unhe chodiye aur jaldi jaldi breakfast kariye" Bani tried to convince Jigyasa.

"Nahin mujhe kuch nahin khana. Ma keh rahi hain ki main Seeta aur Geeta ki wo moti ki tarah hoon jo sirf khati hain aur chila ti hain" complained Jigyasa.

Bani tried not to laugh and very sweetly said "dekhiye aaj Masi ne gajar ka halwa aap ki favourite banaya hain plz khalijiyena."

Bani knew this would help as a result, after listening the food name Jigyasa gave up and started eating but pretending that she is still angry.

"Mami dekhiye na Sahil meri baat sun nahin raha hain" complained Anu

"Ab tum logo main kya huwa" asked Bani.

"Use boliye na aaj mujhe apne bike main chod de"

"Mami jara ise puch na to car main jane main kya problem hain" said Sahil

"Ha Anu tum car main kyu nahin jati" suggested Bani.

"Nahin Mami aaj mujhe bike main jana boliye na Sahil ko drop karne ko. Plz mami"

"sahil itna keh rahi reh to chod dona lekin tumhe bike me kyu jana hain?"

"Wo mami meri ek friend apni boyfriend ke saath roj bike main college aati ha

in aur din bhar apne boyfriend aur uske bike ke bare main bat karti hain. Mujhe bhi dikhana hain ki mere pass uske boyfriend se achha bike hain. Chal na Sahil der ho rahi hain"

"Are dhyan se apna breakfast to khatam karlo" Bani shouted to running Anu.

"Bani jara parathe to pass karna" said Aditya and saw their Jai standing.

"Are Jai tum kab aae. Chalo aao breakfast karlo"

"nahin yaar mujhe office main bahut sare kaam hain wahi khalunga"

"Mujhe pata hain tu kab khaega. Chal aa beth Bani munna ko nasta laga" ordered Masi to Jai.

Jai reluctantly sat and Bani slowly served him his breakfast. Jai asked for one more paratha.

"Dekha bol raha tha office main khalunga abhi aur mang raha hain. Bani ek aur de"

"Wo.. wo… masi parathe to kahatam ho gaya" said Bani nervously.

"Kahatam hogae lekin maine to abhi dekha ek hain waha par" asked Masi a bit confused.

"Nahin to sachi main khatam hogae" said Bani pulling the plate toward herself.

"Dekhne de mujhe" said Masi and snatched plate from her hand.

"masi" screamed Bani

"Kya nahin hain nahin hain bol rahi thi hain to ek paratha. Le munna kha" But as she put paratha in his plate she saw big hole in middle of paratha and burned mark around that hole.

Jai picked the paratha and stared at paratha.

"Masi aaj apke paratha kya hogaya?" asked very surprised and amused Jai.

Masi started laughing hysterically.

"Ab mujhe pata chala bahu kyu parathe chhupa rahi thi. Wo paratha …" masi couldn't even complete her sentence and started laughing again.

After listening to Masi all of them start laughing but Jai, his anger prevented him from laughing and Bani was red as tomato due to embarrassment.

"Munna parathe to nahin hain toast banadu?"

"Nahin masi parathe ke baad toast accha nahin lagta main sirf juice khale ta hun"

After that Bani couldn't eat anything as some of them were still trying not to laugh. Others finished their breakfast and Jai, Aditya and Ranveer left for office.

Jai was in his office working but every time his concentration would go back to morning incident that how Bani was interacting with his family members. Jai knew Bani didn't think him as her husband and had to leave him and his family one-day than why is she increasing her relation with them. Why cant see leave them as they are. Why interfere in their peaceful life so that she can break it as she has broken his life. And he is not even able to stop this. He is scared what will happen to Masi when she will find out about them. This increasing affection will make them suffer more and he was getting frustrated, frustrated that he cant do anything, frustrated that what kind of wife life has given him, frustrated at his helplessness. He was taking out his frustration at everyone. Today no one has dare to enter his room, he has been shouting to everyone since morning his secretary, his PA, his manager everyone whoever he has encountered with and this frustration is increasing with every increasing minute.

At last not being able to work he left for home. As Tony opened the door he saw all four ladies; Masi, dadi, Jigyasa and Bani laughing about something. This increased his anger even more and he directly entered his room not giving a glance at any one present there.

"Dekh Bani Jai aagaya. Paresan lag raha hain use Pani leja" said Masi

Bani knew she can't say no so she took a glass of water and went to her room. Since morning she wanted to talk to him and thought now it might be good chance. A she enterd the room she saw Jai very roughly taking off his tie.

"Kay hain?" asked Jai as he saw her entering.

"Umm wo Masi ne pani bheja hain" said bani nervously.

"Rakhdo aur jao" roared jai.

But Bani wasn't moving a bit and was fiddling with the pallu of her sari.

"Ab waha kahdi khadi kya kar rahi ho"

"Mujhe aap se baat karni hain"

Jai didn't speak any word and Bani continued.

"Main aap ko apne aap se bandhna nahin chahti aur main yeh bhi nahin chahti ki meri baje se aap kisi bhi tarah ke kushyo se banchit( Deprive) ho isliye main chahti hoon ki aap mujhe divorce dede"

Jai knew his wife will ask him divorce one day but he had not expected this fast. He turn around to face her but their she was standing with no guilt no expression nothing. Yes she is nervous but she has no feeling toward their marriage. He has nothing to say except agreeing her.

"Miljaega ab tun ja sakti ho yaha se" said in same expressionless way.

Bani didn't speak a word. She was neither happy nor sad listening him and silently left the room. Jai simply closed his eyes thinking about his life and sat in the bed.

Ok guys. Homework is calling that is it for today. Hope u will like it. Niru sice u told u can understand simple Hindi I didn't translate it as it would take some time. I am really sorry that I couldn't keep my promise.

Edited by Pooja_fren - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
hey pooja ...just read ur Ff ... it's going really gr8 ... poor Bani burned the roti/paratha... Jai Bani are not in good terms... and she wants divorce from Jai ... reminded me of the golden days ... sure hope everything turns good in their favor ... Do cont soon... 👏 ...
Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
great part......
bani wat a divorce 😔 .......and jai agreed ......wonder how they will be 2gether 😃
plzz cont.soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
😡 yeh bani ko kya hogaya hai.. y she want a divorce all of a sudden.. she should give him a chance... anywayz great part hun.. continue sooon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#70
i feeel sooo bad for jai!!! 😭

bani is such a 🤬

grrreeeeeeeeeeeeat part!!!! pls cont soooooooooon

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