FF:Why isn’t the life simple? last part pg 28 - Page 21

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Posted: 16 years ago
nice ending
do start another story
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Posted: 16 years ago

hey pooja

that was a wonderful ending to an excellent ff..
loved the way you have penned Jai's and Bani's emotions..
was a bit surprised when Sonali came in..
but i guess she was just the catalyst in their relationship..
hope ur starting another story soon...
if so pls do PM me
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Posted: 16 years ago
very cute ending, Jai is very childish and naughty..lol Krishna is sweet, well thanks for writhing for not so long story lol
take care

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