FF:Why isn’t the life simple? last part pg 28

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Hi guys. Thanks for all ur beautiful comment for my previous FF The Prom night. (Link: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=938024&T PN) After getting all those comments I became greedy so to get more I have started writing new one. Phool527 u have asked for epilogue but since I couldn't think of any good so thought why not start new one. I think u will obviously like new one than epilogue, don't u?😉 So guys, here is the new one. I don't think u will find the concept that different as the previous one but however I have tried. Hope u will like it and support me as before.

Walia Mansion, Mumbai

'Jai tu sun raha hain na main kya keherahi hoo'

'yes Masi'

'Kya Yes. Tab se main bole jarahi aur tu hain sirf sar hila raha hain'

'Masi!! I was listening. Aap meri saadi ki baat kar rahi thi na. Maine kaha na main karunga'

'35 ka ho chukka hain ab aur kitna buda hone ka man hain?'

'Masi budha?' asked Jai looking shocked. 'Masi country ka Most Eligible Bachelor hoo aur ab hain ki Budha kehti hain'

'Aur zindagi bhar wahi reh jaega The Eligible Bachelor' masi mimicked Jai.

'Kya huwa Masi? aap chinta kyu kar rahi hain?' asked jai all very concerned.

'Chinta na karu to kya karu beta. Zindagi bhar to main tere saath nahi rahungi na. Aur upar jab didi se milungi to kya jabab dungi' aid masi leaning onto his body.

'Phir wohi baat. Masi abhi to aapko meri saadi dekhni, apne pote potiyo ke sath khelna hain'

'Bacche asman se nahi tapakte aur saadi? uske liye ek ladki chahiye aur tu hain ki koi bhi ladki tujko pasand nahi. Pasand karna to chod tu to bina dekhe hi na kar deta hain. Ab to Tarun ki bhi saadi ho gae'

'Ab Tarun ki saadi ki baat kaha se aagae?'

'Beta tujhe yaad hain Mr. and Mrs. Dixit jo saadi main mile the. Tarun ke sasural wale ke dost. Unki ek beti hain, Bani, wo mujhe saadi main mili bahut pasand aae ekbar dekhne chalna?'

'Kya?'

'Dekh Jai abhi tu bol raha tha saadi karega Ekbar dekhne chal na kya pata tujhe pasand aajae. Nahi to na kardena'

'Masi u trapped me. Besides I didn't hear abt any Bani in the wedding'

'Tu party main kitne der tak bedha jo tujhe pata chalega'. Asked Masi glaring him.

'Masi chodo na en bato ko. At present I am happy being single' said Jai with pleading voice.

'Jai kabtak kal main jiega. Sayad ab main us ladki ko pehle jaise badduwae nahi deti lekin main kabhi use maaf nahi kar paunga,' said Masi with very hurtful voice.

'Masi esi kohi baat nahi hain. Main kab ka use bhool chukka hoon. Sacchi' said Jai trying to confirm masi.

'To phir prove kar aur chal mere saath Ladki dekhne'

And after loads of persuasion Jai agreed but taking pronise from Masi that for time beibg he is not going to see any other girl if this is not good.

'are pehle tu ese to dekhle baad ki baad main sochenge'

'Masi u promised'

'Hain hain yaad hain mujhe' muttering something in her mouth Masi left to inform other family members whereas Jai was left sighing.

Dixit Residence, Mt. Abu

'Aji sunte ho. Aap ne ladko walo ko to bula to li magar Ban ko pata chala to ghar main toofan khada kardegi' asked worried Mrs. Dixit to her husband.

'To main kya karu. Use kya zindagi bhar kuwari ghar main rakhu. Kiran she needs to start living her own life. There is life beyond us as well. Ek Hadsa ki baje se admi zindagi bhar saadi na kare ye to acchi baat nahin na'

'Aap baat kyu nahi karte aap ki baat kabhi nahi talti,' asked Kiran with lots of hope.

'Tum ekbar kaho agar nahi mani to main use baat karunga' sighed Nishikant dixit and went inside his room to get ready for his office.

Bani Dixit, BSc first class first passed, second child out of their three daughters was one of the most stubborn one. 24 yrs old, very intelligent, popular in her college was mostly known for her beauty and sharp tongue rather than her intelligence. Never had second thoughts before speaking anything whether that be her friends, teacher or parents. Jo dil main wo mu main. Bani wasn't very tall just 5'2' and also didn't have that very fair complexion but her perfectly curved body and beautiful radiant face always made people turn their head twice. She didn't have loads of friend but she was inseparable from the few of them she had. Well cultured, respects the elder a lot but never miss to argue with them if they are wrong but only exception is her father 'Nishikant Dixit' to whom she has never said No till yet.

'Beta phone huwa Laxmi se' asked kiran to her daughter who was keeping phone down after having almost one hour long conversation with her friend Laxmi.

'Ha ma'

'How is she?. Nahi nahi saadi kya keh rahi thi?'

'well she was very happy' said Bani giving very cute smile.

'To tune kya socha is ke bare main?'

'Kis bare main' asked bani hoping that her mom wasn't saying abt the sam think which she is assuming.

'Tujhe pata hain'

'to phir ma aap ko bhi pata hain mera jabab' saying that she went back towards her room.

'Bani tere baba ne ek ladka dekha tere liye aur wo log tujhe dekhne aa rahe hain kal' said Kiran in one breath and was waiting the volcano to erupt.

Bani just stopped in her track and looked back to her mother with wide shocked eyes.

So, how was it guys? Hope u like it. Plz give some suggestion during my new journey to FF land.😆 If someone is having problem with Hindi then plz tell me I will write in English.

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Hkaurk22 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ooh good start! Do continue soon- very well written :) Cant wait to read the next part! Will JB meet? 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was an interesting start!cnt wait till JB meet..hopefullli soon!pls cont soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow pooji.. for me.. thank u thank u .. lol.. that was a great beginning.. dono JB ek jaise hain.. lol.. this is better than an epilogue.. hehehh.. love u for that hun. very goood both JB dont want to get married.. i wonder wats gonna happen wen they meet eachother.. hehehe.. mujhe tho sochkar bhi hassi a rahi hai.. lol.. and hindi and english mix is fine hun.. hehehe.. atleast for me.. continue soon.. which i noe u will.. lol..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice FF...I used to read Prom night as well..
So glad ur continuing writing!!
Hm...Kiran hinting marriage..
And Masi hinting Marriag!!!
So..hope Kiran and Masi meet.. 😆


Please continue soon..
Nothing wrong with hindi..I prefer it...Ur choice!!

JB milian..strongly awaited!!!

nikita
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg!! omg!! omg!!!!!!!!!!!! just love ur ff so far!!!! its mad good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

can't wait for the ladke wale to come(aka Jai walia 😉 😆 😆 )...............omg!!! u have to continue sooooooooooooooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


great beginning!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! soooo excited.... 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wonderful storyline cant wait to see the sparks pls cont soon.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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good start, I liked it.. soo jai's coming to see bani,, is it gonna be luv at first sight for jai.. so waiting for the next part.

update soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great! you started a new FF......nice start.....let's see whether it will be love at first or hate at first sight....from the title it seems like both will dislike each other.....am I right 😉 please continue.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great start 👏 👏 .....
i think i really like this bani 😃 😆 😆 ........waiting to read more
plzz cont.soon 😊

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