FF:Why isn’t the life simple? last part pg 28 - Page 18

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Posted: 17 years ago
why did sonali choose that exact moment to enter walia mansion...??
plzs dont let misunderstandings creep into jb's blooming relationship...
waiting for nex part...
continue soon...
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Posted: 17 years ago
poooji.. noooo.. dont u dare make them suffer a little more yaar.. bechare r already suffering.. anywayz great part.. continue soooon..
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey pooja,

That was GOD DAMN SHORT dearest pooja….

If your are not posting the next update early and long then god save you…😈

Why do you always keep us hanging mid-air…?

Aur yeh duffers ko thoda brain do…

I hope sonali doesn't become the kabab main haddi types….I will kill her….🤢

Continue soon….SOON….

God bless

Dhani

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Posted: 17 years ago
that was a sad part yaar
i thought u will bring jb togethere
par yeh sonali kahan se aagayi
plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
Sonali's entry ruined the special moments of Jai bani. Hope they don't real get divorced.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Iam sorry to say,, I was disappointed felt u went into Ekta mood 😆 brought too much negativity & unbelievable story line, I mean the divorce papers are k ,, but at the exact moment sonia jai's ex gf comes back too ,, and I felt it didn't flow with ur ff so far,, so far ur ff was so logical and practical and straight forward,, so for me personally after ur previous update of jai expressing himself beautifully and bani knowing her feeling this was disappointing ,, but iam looking forward to ur next update,,😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
i just read all of yor ff and i loved
and omg jai and bani nooooooooooooooooooooooo
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Posted: 17 years ago
i wanted to read this for long... at last this weekend... arey yaar first time pad rahi hoon... divorce ka jhadka dene ka kya zaroorat hai
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Posted: 17 years ago

Thank u guys for all of ur comments. Sorry Dhani u had asked for long and quick update but I couldn't. I had written half of the update long time ago and thought this time I will post long one but I didn't have time to add. But its ur fault as well. Whenever i opened the computer to type u had posted a new SS. So i couldnt stop myself from reading and no time for typing. 😆 It was really long time since I had updated so thought I will update how much I have written. I will try to update tomorrow again as I have holiday but cant promise.

ragamthalam0: I am sorry I disappointed u with the entry of Sonali but before ending this FF I wanted to clear everything and also wanted to make Jai n Bani more desperate and last part more dramatic. I am sorry if u didn't like it. But Thanks for ur comment next time wont repeat it again.

It has been weeks since that incident and the distance between Jai n Bani has been increasing day by day. Jai has engrossed himself in work and in free time he has been helping Sonali to settle down.

Sonali, she only knew that her dad had a severe heart attack when she had gone to meet him but she didn't know the cause. The coming marriage between Jai n Sonali was all over the world and Aparajit Deb was one of them to know, son of Sonali's Dad business partner who had an eye on her since she had last visited London. They had asked her hand from her dad but since she was in love with Jai, her dad had refused but that didn't stop Aparajit's intention.

Sonali's dad and Aparajit's dad were long time business friends and trust was the main foundation between their partnerships of which Aparajit took good advantage. During on of their business meetings Aparajit cunningly took her dad's signature in Power of Attorney papers. He then made everything in his name, all factories, offices, all shares almost everything. When Sonali's dad questioned him he told he would give only in one condition that's if they married her daughter to him. Though he straight away said no to him, didn't stop him to go under depression. Aparajit's dad tried a lot to convince his son but he didn't budge from his decision. These all tensions and loses caused Sonali's dad to have a heart attack. When she came to London her dad didn't say anything to her and told her to leave immediately but Aparajit somehow informed everything. Then she for her dad and for his life earned Business sacrificed her love and married to Aparajit.

Aparajit for few months really loved and cared her but after day after day his possessiveness was increasing. She was not allowed to talk any other man. She was limited within four walls of her house. She had to inform him about her each and every minute, where she goes, who she meets. Sometimes he used to beat and abuse her but people always have to pay for their deeds. One day when Aparajit was coming from one of his parties, he was really drunk and driving in really high speed he met an accident and died on the spot. Sonali didn't know what to do whether to be sad on the death of her husband or to be happy that finally she is free from the clutches of her husband but she had some unfinished work her on India. First of all she has to give some answers to unasked questions of Jai and his family. Nearly after the month she came back.

'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''.

'Bohut pyaar karte ho na use?'

Jai didn't answered her.

'jee nahi sakte na uske bina?'

'Tum kiski baat kar rahi ho Sonali'

'tumhari patni, Bani jo hokar bhi tumharu nahin hain'

Jai simply chose to ignore her.

'Bhalehi aaj hum saath nahi he Jai lekin aaj bhi tum mujhse kuch chupa nahin sakte Jai. Tum dono saath rehkar bhi saath nahi ho lekin har pal tum dono beech ka wo chupa huwa pyaar mujhe saaf dikhae deta he'

'Galat he tumhara biswaas nahi karta me usse pyaar. Samji tum nahin karta me usse pyaar' screamed Jai.

Sonali simply smiled. 'tum aaj bhi nahin badle na? hamesha apne feelings ko chupa kar rakhna chate ho lekin nahi kar pate. Tumhari ye jo chikh he na wo hi batati he tum usse kitna pyaar karte ho.'

Jai had no answer.

'Use batate kyu nahi' said Sonali holding his hand.

'Kya batau Sonali? Tumhe dikhta he to use kyu nahin dikhta? Aur batakar bhi kya faida wo to mujhe pyaar nahi karti'

'Mujhe nahin maluum tha Jai ki tum itne andhe ho. Us ladki ki ankho me siwae pyaar aur tumhare paas na honeki ki bebasi ke siwai kuch nahin he. Har waqt uski ankhe tumhe dhunhti rehti hain aur tum kehte ho ki pyaar nahin karti'

'Galat kehti he wo ankhe. Maine bhi yehi samjha tha lekin me galat tha. Agar pyaar karti to us din kyu'. Divorce papers bhi aa chuke he'

'Kabhi tum ne bataya ki tum usse kitna pyaar karte ho'

'Batane ko rakha kya he. Ghar ke sab log jante he ki me usse kitna pyaar karta hu ab ky aapne mathe pe likh kar chalu'

'Ghar ke log to ye bhi jante he ki Bani tumse kitna pyaar karti he lekin tum inkaar karte ho'

Jai hopelessly looked at Sonali. She simply nodded her head assuring him.

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Bani was arranging already arranged clothes on her husband closet sobbing slowly, touching them, feeling them, the smell of his cloth make her feel as if he is still here, near her like before but now she cant bear any more. She thought she can live without her husband love but she can't see him with anyone. The increasing closeness between Jai and Sonali, it's breaking her heart into pieces. Slowly she lifted the divorce papers where she had signed this afternoon. Today she has decided that she will go back to Mt. Abu. Though she didn't get her love, she wants her husband to get it, Sonali. 'Jaan se bhi jyada pyaar kartha use me' those words keep on moving around her head. May be he still loves her and Sonali, she obviously loves him otherwise why would she come back again. May be her presence is unknowingly coming in between them. She caressed her mangalsutra and kissed it. More tears started forming in her eye. She clutched her mangalsutra and closed her eyes letting her tears flow.

She held the handle of her suitcase and rolled to the door. She opened the door to go but saw Jai standing there.

'Bani????'

Ok guys. That's for today. Next part might be last one. Hope u liked it. Sorry no JB but next one only them.😆😆

Waiting for ur Comments.😊

Edited by Pooja_fren - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
oye... kahaan aake rokh diya... 😡

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