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Posted: 17 years ago
Nice part Pooja.....the problem with Bani is she only thinks about her feelings, not selfish as she cares about others but she never think about their feelings (or not aware?) especially Jai's.....poor man....please continue soon...........
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Posted: 17 years ago
Poor jai I feel bad for him hehe wonder what bani 's reaction will be if she knew wht he as thinking ? bani doesn't appreciate what she has sad case
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hi guys Thanks for all ur beautiful comment. Love them all.

Anush_tejpal, u had problem that Bani is acting quite childish but u know what Bani has gone through her life and how was she before. When person finds a love one after long time they are too happy that they can't control themselves. People might act mature in front of other but if front of that person they act childish and Bani being a prankster, she knows how to fool people acting quite innocent. Even in real KS when Bani and Jai come from Dubai Bani was too happy, she was teasing and jumping around, her behaviour was drastically changed then before. Even I wanted to show the same thing but sorry if u felt it was too much will try to reduce it. Thanks for ur comment.😊

Bani does love Jai a lot but hasn't seen him as her husband but she definitely loves him.

A week visit in Mt. Abu was hectic and tiring but everyone enjoyed to fullest. Bani's parents were too happy getting back their once lost Bani . They thanked Jai several times. The only day they rested was the day they arrived, other all seven days they were busy exploring Mt. Abu and Bani did her best to take them every places and entertain them. The first place they went was Dilwara temple, as Bani's parents wanted to thank the holy god for the change in Bani.

The next day they went to Nakki Lake, which is believed to be carved out by god out of their nails. All the family members enjoyed boating and had arranged small picnic near the lake. (Sorry i just made it don't know u are allowed to eat near the lake or not). Then they went to see the Toad rock overhanging the Nakki Lake taking a lot of pictures with different pose and style.

They had two days trip to Wildlife Sanctuary. Whole day they would explore the forest and at night, even they were tired like hell none of them slept. They had BBQ, danced, sang and played lots of game. The seven days finished pretty quickly with heir visit to Achalgarh fort, near Mt. Abu, that next day was the day to go back home. Every where they went Bani held jai's hand all the time personally showing him each and every thing and explaining him in detail. Jai had never enjoyed his trip as much as he did in Mt. Abu but his favourite visit was to the Sunset Point, where Bani had taken only him before the day of their return.

"Are Bani tum mujhe bataugi bhi ki hum kaha ja rahe hain. Adhe ghante se chal rahe hain aur tum ho ki kuch batati hi nahin"

"Oho Mr. Walia thoda sa sabar rakhiye hun log pohoch ne hi wale hain"

And nearly after five minutes they reached there.

"Pohoch gaye" exclaimed Bani. Not used to walking, after walking for continuous 45 minutes jai was tired like hell but one look at the sight he was mesmerised. The sun drowning in the azure sky between the two mountain peaks was providing the awe-inspiring view of setting sun. It was the best Sunset jai had ever seen in his life and the feeling was even beautiful as he was watching it with his love.

"Khubsoorat hain na? Mijhe yeh jagha bahut pasand hain. Kushi main dukh main hamesha main yaha aati thi. Mujhe yaha hamesha ek apnapan sa mehsoos hota tha. Kisiko nahin patah ki main yaha ati hoon Pia didi ko bhi nahin. Yaha aakar jo sukun mehsoos hota hain main kisike saath nahin batna chati thi lekin pata nahin kyu aap ke saath yeh ehsaas batne ka man kiya." Saying that she smiled at Jai.

Jai hugged her and said"Thanks Bani. Sach main bobot sundar hain. Thanks for sharing it with me" Both of them watched the view till the sun was nowhere to be seen.

Tomorrow early morning they were leaving so Bani was spending time with her parents. Her Dad was tired so couldn't stay awake for long time and had gone to sleep. Both mother daughter duo was on the terrace. Bani was sleeping eith her head n kiran's lap andKiran was slowly caressing her hair.

"Achha beta bata tera din kaise kat ta hain waha pe? Bahut kush lagti hain hame yaad bhi karti hain ya nahin?"

"Ma ye kaise sawal hain of couse main aap ko baba ko yaad karti hoon aur mera din waha pe bohut accha se gujar ta hain. Sob log ache hain ma yaha pe. Dadi, masi, Aditya uncle, Jigyasa aunty, sahil, anu, Ranveer. Sab bahut khayal rakhte hain mera aur bohut pyaar bhi karte hain aur in sab main sab se acche hain Mr. walia. Who mujhe sab se jyada pyar karte hain."

"aur tu? Tu pyar karti hain unse?"

"obviously mama. Yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hain. Main bhi unhe pyaar karti hun mere sabse sabseeee ache dost hain wo"

"Aur Pati?"

"Matlab?" asked confused Bani.

"Matlab ki pati. Tunhe kaha ki wo tere dost hain lekin pati hain ki nahin? Kabhi patni ki tarah pyaar kiya ki nahin?"

Bani didn't have any answer. She was staring at her mom.

"Mujhe kabhi ye maloom nahin tha ki meri bacchi itni swarthy(selfish) hain. Agar koi insaan acha ho to unka itna faida nahin uthana chahiye. Mujhe laga tha ki beru beti ye janti hain lekin main galat thi"

"Mama ye aap kaise baat kar rahi hain?"

"Beta tune Jai ko apni sari dil ki baat batadi, kya huwa teri zindagi main aur Jai ne bhi tujhe bahut achi tarah se samjha aur sahara diya lekin tune kabhi socha ki Ja ke dil main kya hain? Uske armaan, uske ichchya, uske sapne kabhi pucha tune use? Nahin na? Beta aaj tu kush hain, tujhe apni zindagi poori lagti hain kyunki tere paas tujhe pyaar karne wala Jai hain lekin Jai, uske paas kaun hain? Use bhi to wo insani chahiye jiske saath wo dukh aur such dono bat sake, apne dil ke gehra sa gehra raaz bata sake, pyaar kar sake pyaar pa sake, ek Humsafar."

A long silence filled in the air. Bani had no answer to her mother questions. Whatever her mom said all were bombarding on her brains. She could see the smiling face of Jai. Was she really that selfish? Is she that blind that she can't see what's going on in Jai's life? The answer was yes she has become selfish but didn't Jai say that he wants to become her friend afterall they are going to divorce each other in coming 4-5 months. "Divorce" but why does it hurt whenever I remember that we are going to divorce.

"Chal beti sone chal te hain bohut raat ho gae hain. Subah jaldi uthna hain" saying that Kiran went to her room leaving very baffled and perplexed Bani.

Hope u all enjoyed it. Waiting for ur comments. 😊

Edited by Pooja_fren - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
great update pleae continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Liked the way Bai's mom tries to make her see things with different perspective. Does Bnai want to go away from jai really want to diorce him. I don't think so. Hopefully bani will realise this soon .
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Posted: 17 years ago
wonderful parts pls cont soon....
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Posted: 17 years ago
you wrote exactly the right thing at the right time....Bani really needed someone to open her eyes and her mom just did the right thing......nice part.....please continue.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
let bani realise how much she luvs jai...
i know she might be having a soft corner for him...now itself it hurts her when she thinks about their 'divorce'
keep updating...😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey pooja
plz cont soon
i hope now bani sees taht jai loves her
gr88 part
plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
glad bani's mother put some sense into bani;s head , jai should mention he wont divorce her soon ,, or will he?

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