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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

Hey Abhi,

read both part 13 and 14,beautifully penned down.they way bani etched out her feelings abt Jai and her love was just so beautiful.good to know at least she is found, Bani is surely running away from lots of things.hoping now that Jai and her will really communicate and hope their child is okie.will be eagerly waitin for the next part. ๐Ÿ‘
thanks preet... i am not planning to do something with the child... its gonna be safe...

preet ๐Ÿ˜ณ



Originally posted by: khushboo2006

Abhi wonderful part...poor Bani made me cry ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ....OK OK I know rona dhona is coming to end very soon ๐Ÿ˜› .....but coulnd't help na......Ran-ran are very kind people.....now let Jai come soon and get them together if possible ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ..........great job dear ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ its okay cherry... u can complaint... but mind it... RR is just a cameo...



Originally posted by: nadia.s

hey
just read part 14 ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
feel sad for bani ๐Ÿ˜ญ she is just so lost
luckily she met rano & ranveer..two very kind souls ๐Ÿ˜†
bani fainted ๐Ÿ˜• she might be pregnant ๐Ÿ˜ƒ she is pregnant... doctors told rano...
hope jai finds out soon and brings her home ๐Ÿ˜Š he is gonna do that
continue soon

nadia ๐Ÿ˜›



Originally posted by: JAN_SA

Hi

Feel bad for Jai & Bani, read the last two updates, good posts, ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ , seems bani does not want to grow up, she is still looking for her lost childhood with jai & krishna. yep... in one angle... its true...

Waiting for next posts ๐Ÿ˜ƒ and thanks for the pm ๐Ÿ˜Š



Originally posted by: nishiraju

gre8 part .........hope everything will be fine now...pls cont soon ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

thanks dear...

Originally posted by: ofcourse

Hey Abhi, the last two parts were again awesome..yaar I need to find some good words to compliment ur style of writing ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
thanks rama
I was moved to tears while reading about Bani's emotions and her thoughts of their first night together. Atleast Jai has realized the impact to some extent.
Glad Rano met with Bani at the station. Bani had totally lost her mind while in the station. She could see only one thing that she needs to reach Aligarh ASAP to have her happy life back though it was only in thoughts. She dint want to think about anything except being in her past happy life. I really feel bad for her state ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Chalo, one thing is good that they have found out that she is pregnant and now would love to see Jai's reaction to it. Want them to talk it out first. the interesting question is - will they?
yaar, yeh weekdays are again killing me..you make us wait for 5 long days which is so not fair ๐Ÿ˜• i know... i wish i work for only five days a week... but i am enjoying ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Rama



Originally posted by: RANJANA_RRJ

Abhi kya kart ho? One moment you make us cry, the other moment you make us happy. But you never fail to make us confused๐Ÿ˜†. its fun yaar ๐Ÿ˜‰

Very well written ABhi and I am looking forward to the next part! I hope everything will be allright with Bani and between bani and Jai. Now I am even more scared about Bani's mental state! dont worry... apna jai hai naa ๐Ÿ˜›

Thanks for the update Abhi,
I enjoyed it very much!!

Byebye



Originally posted by: sangitadas

Abhi, the last 2 updates are amazing and you deserve a standing ovation for them. ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ thanks dii ๐Ÿ˜ณ

It was so touching to see Jai reading Bani's diary and trying hard to udnerstand the real person hidden in his siwfe's form; how such a lively person had bee n turned into an apparition by circumstances. My heart broke all the while. ๐Ÿ˜• sorry for that

I am very happy to read about the characters of Rano and Ranveer ๐Ÿ˜Š , they are such good souls. I so wish Jai would realise the role he plays in bani's life and how his mistake/ indifference has cost her so much.

Pushkar's character has also been sketched so beautifully. i think we really have to thank you for this wonderful FF. at this very minute... eveyone would be cursing me for not updating... ๐Ÿ˜†

Please do update soon. ๐Ÿ˜Š



Hey ppl... I am just now typing... I promise i wont go to sleep without giving you ppl updates...
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Posted: 17 years ago
kahaan hai mera updates...typing ho chuki aur nahi...subah ki kitne baaje...2 or 3...
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanks Kuripunjabdi for your comments. And thanks prachifan for breaking your silence... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

Sorry for making you people wait... Will update in few minutes... I have typed only half and the other half I am yet to type. The main reason is I am runing out of my imagination. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi all... Sorry for disappointing you guys... fell asleep while typing at three in the morning. Went for outing... pretty unplanned one... came only at eight... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Previous parts:
Part 1 - Page 1; Part 2 - Page 3; Part 3 - Page 6; Part 4 - Page 9; Part 5 - Page 12;
Flashback 1: (1.1-1.3) - Page 16; 1.4 - Page 23; 1.5 - Page 26; 1.6 - Page 30; 1.7 - Page 33; 1.8 - Page 35; 1.9 - Page 38; 1.10 - Page 41; 1.11 - Page 45;
Part 6 - Page 48; Part 7 - Page 53; Part 8 - Page 58;
Flashback 2 - Page 62;
Part 9 - Page 65; Part 10 - Page 68;
Flashback 3 A - Page 73; 3B - Page 76; 3C - Page 79; 3D - Page 81; 3E - Page 86; 3F - Page 89;
Part 11 - Page 94; Part 12 - Page 97;
Flashback 4 - Page 97
Part 13 - Page 103;
Journey into Bani's thoughts: 1 - Page 107; 2 - Page 111; 3 - Page 114; 4 - Page 118
Part 14 - Page 120;

Here goes the first part of the next part ---

Part 15A

Rano was getting restless as each second passed. After the time passed seven-thirty, she doubted whether Bani's family would arrive or now. She turned and looked at Ranveer. He agreed to stay with her till Bani's family arrived. But, there is no sign of them arriving.

"Agar woh nahin aayenge toh, main didi ko apne saath leke chali jaoongiโ€ฆ" she told Ranveer all of a sudden.

Ranveer was surprised. "Rano, peak hour hai. Late toh hogi na. Be patient."

"Phir bhiโ€ฆ" Rano thought about Bani's condition. "Mujhe toh bharosa nahin haiโ€ฆ" she said sadly. "Pata hai, maine kabhi didi ko aise nahin dekhaโ€ฆ She always used to have smile in her faceโ€ฆ" She remembered the moment she saw Bani at the railway station. "Aaj jis halat mein maine unhein dekhaโ€ฆ mujhe aisa laga ki she did not recognize meโ€ฆ"

Ranveer sat beside her and let her place her head over his shoulders.

Rano continued. "She always used to cheer me up when I used to go upsetโ€ฆ I meanโ€ฆ she was not like that with allโ€ฆ but with meโ€ฆ to meโ€ฆ she was differentโ€ฆ" She sighed. "Achanak ek din college aana chod diya. Sirf exams ke liye aa rahi thiโ€ฆ Itni jaldi shadi karne ki kya zaroorat thi?"

Ranveer patiently listened, where as Rano went on speaking about her and Bani. "Jab bhi main apni ghar se depressed aati thi, she used to help me. She would make me speak, then refresh my mood. Woh apna kaam khud karti haiโ€ฆ aur sab ko sikhati bhi haiโ€ฆ" Rano went back to her memories. "Sab ke saath bolti toh nahin hai, lekin jinse bhi bolti hai, bahut achchi bolti thiโ€ฆ Aisi nahin thi wohโ€ฆ" Then suddenly she said, "Pata hai, doctor ne kaha ki woh shayad pregnant hai. Tests karwaa rahe haiโ€ฆ Mujhe kuh samaj men nahin aa raha haiโ€ฆ"

Ranveer got alert when he heard Bani might be pregnant.

Before they both could think further, a nurse came with few men and asked, "Bani naam ke patient ke saath aap hi hai na?"

Rano nodded her head and said, "Haan sister. Kya baat hai? Woh teek hai na?"

The nurse said, "Ye keh rahe the ki yeh log unke gharwale hai. Isliye leke aaya hoon. Aap sambhaal legi na?"

Rano was looking at the persons with sharpened eyes, when Ranveer said, "Jiโ€ฆ Thanks sister."

The nurse left the place.

Rano tried to figure out who they might be. There were three men nearly of same age and a relatively young person. Who were these people? And how were they related to Bani? And where is her husband? Orโ€ฆ one among these people is her husband? Her head spinnedโ€ฆ

***

Jai prayed all the way to the hospital for Bani being safe. As soon as the car reached the hospital, he and Pushkar went to the reception to know about Bani's whereabouts.

"Baniโ€ฆ Bani Waliaโ€ฆ" he asked the lady at the reception.

She looked at him once and checked the records. Then raised her head and said, "Sorry, Bani Walia naam ke koi patient nahin."

Jai was shocked.

Then the lady said, "Lekin, Bani naam ki ek patient hai. ICU mein." She said looking at the records.

Jai stood there rooted to the spot. 'Baniโ€ฆ Just Baniโ€ฆ.'

Aditya and Aparajit joined them meanwhile. Aditya nudged Jai. Pushkar handled the situation. "Kya aap bata sakti hai ki ICU kahaan hai?" He asked politely.

The lady gave the direction. She also sent a nurse with them when the nurse was heading in that direction. The nurse brought them to a lady and a man, who were supposed to be responsible for Bani.

Jai noticed the lady looking at all the four men.

Later the man broke the silence. "Hi, I am Ranveer, Assistant Commissioner of Police." Ranveer introduced himself. "Maine hi call kiya thaโ€ฆ Pushkar Shukla ke mobile peโ€ฆ" Ranveer paused as if waiting to know who Pushkar was.

Pushkar came forward. "Main Pushkar Shukla hoon. Bani ke brother-in-law."

Rano was wondering 'Then who are the other people?'

Pushkar continued, "Aap Bani ko kaise jaante hai?"

Ranveer said, "Yeh meri honewali patni hai. Rano. Bani ki juniorโ€ฆ college meinโ€ฆ isne bani ko railway station mein dekha aur yahaan laayi." Ranveer paused and said, "She is unconscious since thenโ€ฆ"

Jai closed his eyes. 'Oh Godโ€ฆ!'

Jai gathered some courage and asked, "Doctor ne kya nataya? Kya hua use?"

Ranveer threw a questioning look at him as if asking 'Who are you?'

Jai immediately got the message and opened his mouth to introduce himself. But Aparajit was quicker.

"Sorryโ€ฆ Yeh Jai Walia hai. Bani ka pati." Aparajit introduced Jai. "Main Aparajit Deb, Jai ka dostโ€ฆ Aur yeh, Aditya Jai ke brother-in-law."

Rano got the shock of life when she heard Jai Walia introduced as Bani's husband. 'Why did Bani did marry such an elderly person?' She wondered in her mind.

Ranveer said, "She is very weak. That's the main feedback. She's being injected intravenously."

Jai asked, "Where is she?"

Ranveer showed the direction of ICU. Jai started to walk towards the showed door when he heard Rano saying in a low voice, "Doctor ne kaha ki didi pregnant haiโ€ฆ" Jai stopped at his tracks. Before he could react, he got a tight slap on his cheek. But Jai was too occupied with mixed emotions to react.

Rano wanted to see his reaction โ€“ that was the main reason she revealed the news all of a sudden. But she did not expect Jai to be slapped by Aparajit.

Aparajit was already so disappointed with Jai. When he heard Rano saying Bani was pregnant, he became so angry at Jai using Bani so badly. So he did what came to his mind first โ€“ and slapped Jai. But he was surprised to see Jai not reacting to his action. He looked at Aditya and Pushkar. They were already shocked at the news, and even more shocked to see Aparajit slapping.

Jai was already in another world before he got slapped. When he heard that Bani was pregnant, he was shocked at first. Then, he got surprised โ€“ Bani was pregnantโ€ฆ! Hisโ€ฆ His Bani was pregnantโ€ฆ His joy knew no bounds. He was going to be fatherโ€ฆ He was more happy that he and Bani were going to have a babyโ€ฆ He could not wait to see Baniโ€ฆ He would take care of herโ€ฆ He won't repeat the mistake he did. He would always stay beside Bani. He smiled to himself and walked towards ICU. He looked at the sleeping figure lying on the bed. His smile vanished. There she wasโ€ฆ lying on the bed wearing a hospital gownโ€ฆ looking tired and exhaustedโ€ฆ sleepingโ€ฆ When he was about to open the door, he heard Rano saying, "Didi ko disturb mat kijiye. Doctors ne andar jaane ke liye permission nahin diโ€ฆ" Jai nodded his head and backed off. 'He could not wait to see Bani.'

After half an hour, the doctors came and declared that Bani's pressure and pulse rate had returned back to normal. They informed that she could be shifted to normal ward and can be treated. They told the gathered persons to keep Bani away from stress and tension.

Aditya called home and updated them with the happenings. Jai sat alone in a chair waiting the hospital authorities to shift Bani to normal ward so that he could see Bani. Pushkar went to Walia house to bring dinner for the men in the hospital. Ranveer took Rano with her so that she could refresh and have some food. He strictly refused her wish to stay beside Bani at night and made her understand that she was not needed there. Also he said that he would bring her to meet Bani in case Bani needed her.

After half an hour, Bani was shifted to the normal ward. Jai went and pulled the chair beside the bed and sat on it. He watched Bani's face for a long time. The face was so calm and sweet as she slept. He remembered all her sketches and her words in the diary. He caressed her face when he saw lines on her forehead as if she was thinking something seriously. The lines died and calm spread over her face. He kept his head near her face and slept off seeing her face.

***

Thanks for reading ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 17 years ago

AD slapped Jai๐Ÿ˜†......I think Jai deserved more than this๐Ÿ˜ก......AD did a good job in his life๐Ÿ‘.......loved how Rano was concerned for Bani.......hope Jai is going to do any further mistake and try to repair all the damages done by him......wondering how Bnai's reaction would be when she sees Jai๐Ÿ˜•........Abhi update karo and make up our loss๐Ÿ˜ณ

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Edited by khushboo2006 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
abhi u update after such a long time..
and that too this short.
not fair..
at all..
please yaar.. continue soon

aww jai got slapped aww

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey abhilasha.. great part hun... bani jaldi se theekh hojayo.. ur jai needs u.. he understands his mistake.. anywayz continue soon hun..
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Posted: 17 years ago
gr88 part
plz cont soon
wow bani pregnanet
and jai also very happy
but y did aparajit slap jai
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Posted: 17 years ago

good move by AD ๐Ÿ‘

great part๐Ÿ‘

so when is the next update?

Edited by moonlitnight - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
So bani is really pregnant. Jai is happy 7 now etrmined to take care of bani. Hope they talk. He assures Bani that he wnts her in his life & loves her.

HE is sleeping next to bani. Wonder what Bani's reaction will be when she wakes up & when she knows she is pregnant.

Can't wait for net part.

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