FF:Broken Dreams&...Part 18C Pg 147 06/07 - Page 88

very well written!! just wanted to clarify, jai was acting weird with bani because of the fact that he lost his parents when they had gone to the pilgrimage to ask for jais wedding? so in some ways he holds bani responsible? sorry im a bit slow on the uptake! 😆

wow bani is pregnant..........i was thinking that they will find her in the hospital 😆 .........well it was a great part 👏 👏 .........loved rano.......
plzz cont.soon

Hey, thank God, atleast some good news 😊 but I feel for Bani, poor girl 😭 😭 😭

Originally posted by: tam2

ow ... so my guess of good news was correct to certain extent ... 😳 😆 ...

loved the characters of both Rano and Ranveer... 👏 ... now make Jai come quick!... 😆 ... jai will be there in the next update 😉

Please do cont soon... 😃 ...

Originally posted by: soodr

Aww...i hope Jai and Bani manage to come together!! of course they will.. the question is when, where and how??? and im glad Bani's safe and sound with Rano.
I love ur ff...please continue soon!! thanks dear... welcome to the thread 😳 xx

Originally posted by: jeenal20

plz cont soon
gr88 part
see i told na bani is prgenent ya... u r right
and that wat happened

Originally posted by: mujer

Nice but at the same time such a gloomy update, ab ek hafta isi par gujara karna hoga. Sorry but the weathers all gloomy here and the state of Bani made me even more depressive. here when i was typing it was so scorching.. now its breezy...

Next time please please thoda sa jyada nahin par thoda sa happy happy update karna.well... you will have to wait for some parts... but they will be together... before that they will have to sort out the differences... I know KS is not sdo inspirational anymore but when were Jai and Bani ever inspirational post Dubai to be frank... i am not inspired by KS to write the ff/ss but i am inspired by the writers in IF... 😊

Originally posted by: culgal86

hey abhilasha..............

lovely part.............. thanks dear

update soon

Originally posted by: niruba

I knew it.....I knew that you wouldn't let Jai meet Bani so soon....and 'torture' us more by making us wait for your next update 😆 😆 I can predict you well now 😛 oh no!!! this aint fair...

anyway, the update was awesome....for that I forgive you 😉 😆.....please continue..... thanks niruba... 😆

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey
gr8 part.. thanks
atlast bani is found.. yep...
cont.soon

Originally posted by: kpatel123

very well written!! just wanted to clarify, jai was acting weird with bani because of the fact that he lost his parents when they had gone to the pilgrimage to ask for jais wedding?well.. thats the reason he gave to bani...so in some ways he holds bani responsible? he doesnt hold bani responsible for anything sorry im a bit slow on the uptake! 😆 its okay... hota hai..

Originally posted by: koolgal

wow bani is pregnant..........i was thinking that they will find her in the hospital 😆 that was a pretty nice guess .........well it was a great part 👏 👏 .........loved rano....... thanks
plzz cont.soon

Originally posted by: siumi

Hey, thank God, atleast some good news 😊 but I feel for Bani, poor girl 😭 😭 😭 i know... you ppl will sit with peace only after bani is freed from all her miseries 😉

I'm feeling so sorry for Bani.
Poor girl, after she has gone through, she's alone, in very bad conditions, pregnant and nobody next to her to support her. 😭 😭 😭
Hope you will update soon, i can't wait to read about Jai's reaction when he will learn the truth about Bani health and her pregnancy 😕

gr8 update! 👏 👏 👏 ,but i feel sorry for bani poor girl! 😭

poor Bani 😭
RR so sweet
u stopped there. well ya. that was predictable. i agree with niruba

great part 👏 👏 👏
plz cont soon

😭 😭 😭 .. omg abhilasha.. that was soo sad yaar.. bani bachpana chor.. thank god for RR.. jai save ur wife.. wait bani and pregnant?? i thought nothing like that happened.. wait a minute.. did i miss a chapter.. lo.. ok great part.. continue soon..

When will we get the next update?
Dont say next week. plzzzzzzzzzzz
Do u know when i found u have updated i searched other FFs to read so that i can safely keep ur for some more time thinking that u have updated and i can read

now plzzzzzzzzzzz update fast
thankssssssssss

Hey Abhi,

read both part 13 and 14,beautifully penned down.they way bani etched out her feelings abt Jai and her love was just so beautiful.good to know at least she is found, Bani is surely running away from lots of things.hoping now that Jai and her will really communicate and hope their child is okie.will be eagerly waitin for the next part. 👏

preet 😳