FF:Broken Dreams&...Part 18C Pg 147 06/07 - Page 89

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Posted: 17 years ago
Abhi wonderful part...poor Bani made me cry 😭 😭 😭 ....OK OK I know rona dhona is coming to end very soon 😛 .....but coulnd't help na......Ran-ran are very kind people.....now let Jai come soon and get them together if possible 😉 😉 😃 ..........great job dear 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey
just read part 14 👏 👏
feel sad for bani 😭 she is just so lost
luckily she met rano & ranveer..two very kind souls 😆
bani fainted 😕 she might be pregnant 😃
hope jai finds out soon and brings her home 😊
continue soon

nadia 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi

Feel bad for Jai & Bani, read the last two updates, good posts, 👏 👏 , seems bani does not want to grow up, she is still looking for her lost childhood with jai & krishna.

Waiting for next posts 😃 and thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
gre8 part .........hope everything will be fine now...pls cont soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Abhi, the last two parts were again awesome..yaar I need to find some good words to compliment ur style of writing 😃 👏 👏
I was moved to tears while reading about Bani's emotions and her thoughts of their first night together. Atleast Jai has realized the impact to some extent.
Glad Rano met with Bani at the station. Bani had totally lost her mind while in the station. She could see only one thing that she needs to reach Aligarh ASAP to have her happy life back though it was only in thoughts. She dint want to think about anything except being in her past happy life. I really feel bad for her state 😭 😭
Chalo, one thing is good that they have found out that she is pregnant and now would love to see Jai's reaction to it. Want them to talk it out first.
yaar, yeh weekdays are again killing me..you make us wait for 5 long days which is so not fair 😕
Rama
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Posted: 17 years ago
Abhi kya kart ho? One moment you make us cry, the other moment you make us happy. But you never fail to make us confused😆.

Very well written ABhi and I am looking forward to the next part! I hope everything will be allright with Bani and between bani and Jai. Now I am even more scared about Bani's mental state!

Thanks for the update Abhi,
I enjoyed it very much!!

Byebye
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Posted: 17 years ago
Abhi, the last 2 updates are amazing and you deserve a standing ovation for them. 👏 👏 👏

It was so touching to see Jai reading Bani's diary and trying hard to udnerstand the real person hidden in his siwfe's form; how such a lively person had bee n turned into an apparition by circumstances. My heart broke all the while. 😕

I am very happy to read about the characters of Rano and Ranveer 😊 , they are such good souls. I so wish Jai would realise the role he plays in bani's life and how his mistake/ indifference has cost her so much.

Pushkar's character has also been sketched so beautifully. i think we really have to thank you for this wonderful FF.

Please do update soon. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss_Diey

I'm feeling so sorry for Bani.
Poor girl, after she has gone through, she's alone, in very bad conditions, pregnant and nobody next to her to support her. 😭 😭 😭 u decided nobody is there for her...
Hope you will update soon, i can't wait to read about Jai's reaction when he will learn the truth about Bani health and her pregnancy 😕 i will try dear



Originally posted by: banijai19_life

gr8 update! 👏 👏 👏 ,but i feel sorry for bani poor girl! 😭


thanks dear

Originally posted by: moonlitnight

poor Bani 😭
RR so sweet
u stopped there. well ya. that was predictable. i agree with niruba you too Brutus

great part 👏 👏 👏 thanks
plz cont soon



Originally posted by: swati_bhatia

gr8 part...plz cont soon


thanks swati

Originally posted by: phool527

😭 😭 😭 .. omg abhilasha.. that was soo sad yaar.. bani bachpana chor.. exact thing thank god for RR.. jai save ur wife.. wait bani and pregnant?? i thought nothing like that happened.. wait a minute.. did i miss a chapter.. lo.. see the chapers before the flashabck1 you will remember... ok great part.. continue soon..



Originally posted by: Pooja_fren

When will we get the next update?
Dont say next week. plzzzzzzzzzzz
Do u know when i found u have updated i searched other FFs to read so that i can safely keep ur for some more time thinking that u have updated and i can read thats a better idea...

now plzzzzzzzzzzz update fast
thankssssssssss




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Posted: 17 years ago
no upd8 😭
upd8??? nw?? 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
*cleaning chashma again*
where is update
cant see 😳

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